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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Crisply

When u will update next part?


will be up in 10!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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__Chapter 4__

All hugged each other in happiness! Sujata was the most excited person as usual. All were happy getting her back, letting the confusion turn down her life was back on track. Laksh and Ragini could sense the changes in Sahil's behavior but they ignored it as the happiness over-powered them. While Sanskaar was more than happy to notice Sahil's sudden change in behavior, he got his Swara back what else he wants? Sahil stood there in a corner as his worst fear came true! Swara got her memory back. He can't lose her! The goons he had planted for to become a so called "hero" in-front of her eyes, to decrease Sanskaar's status in-front by throwing different tantrums, spending time with her leaving all his work and loving her from all his heart! He knew what he had to do! And he will make Swara his sooner or later. Doctor came out of the room giving us more surprises.

"She is perfectly fine but that incident has a bad impact on her mind you have to be careful" Doctor said making them aware of the situation

"We will sir, when is she going to be discharged?" Sanskaar asked, he can't wait anymore to take his princess back in their room

"She will be discharged by tomorrow!" the doctor said and they smiled while the doctor left

"Mr. Sanskaar she is waiting for you! Aur aap log bhi ek ek karke mil sakte hain!" The nurse said and left while he just smiled and enter the room

"Sanskaar jao hum aate hain!" Durga Prasad said

"Ji bade papa!" Sanskaar said ruffling his hair while Sahil wanted to cut off the head

"Sanskaar!" Swara said trying to get up

"Jesi ho waisi hi raho! Koi zarurat nahi hilne ki!" Sanskaar said holding her hand

"Mujhe baith na hain" Swara whined

"Fine! aaram se princess" he said adjusting the pillows for her to be more comfortable

"Mujhe sab se milna hain" Swara said still holding his hand

"They are coming" he said kissing her forehead

"I love you" she said kissing his cheek

"I love you too" he said smiling

"Sorry for the disturbance" Laksh said smiling while Ragini giggled and Sahil tightened his fist

"Woh kya hain na Sanskaar hume humari behn se milna tha!" Ragini said going towards the other side of the bed

"Aur mujhe apni saali se!" Laksh said

"Kesi ho?" Ragini asked hugging her

"Thike hun! Bohout pareshaan kiya na tum logo ko?" Swara said in a sad voice

"Bohout zyada!" Laksh said sitting on the stool

"Lucky"

"Laksh" both said in unison

"Dekha! Tere do bodyguards pareshaan nahi hue toh meine kahaan se hunga?" Laksh said in mischievous playful tone and she broke into a smile

"See! I made her smile!" Laksh said raising his invisible collars

"I made her smile a way back" Sanskaar said

"True" Swara supported and all the four giggled. Sahil cleared his throat to gain some attention from the four of them and they all turned their heads towards him

"Kesi ho Swara?" Sahil asked sitting in-front of her on the bed

"Meine thike hun! Thank you so much Sahil mujhe bachane ke liye!" Swara said still holding Sanskaar's hand which boiled Sahil's blood but he forced a smile

"It was my pleasure! Waise tumhe sab yaad aagaya hain?" Sahil asked and Swara looked confused while Sanskaar smiled un-comfort hearing the statement

"Haan kyun?" Swara asked in a confused tone

"nahi abhi tum mere paas nahi aaogi na apne confusions lekar" he said making the environment light

"Jab tak Sanskaar mujhe kisi ki bhi zarurath nahi!" Swara said wrapping his arms around his waist while he fumed but stood forcing a smile

"Then you guys enjoy will catch you up later!" Sahil said getting up

"Sahil" Swara called out

"Haan?"

"Thank you for your friendship!" Swara said making him smile a light

"Anytime!" Sahil said and left the room making his way back to Hoogly

"Mujhe ghar jana hain" Swara pouted

"You will be discharged by tomorrow!" Sanskaar said intertwining his hand with her and kissed her fore head while the other two adored them.

Edited by __nidhi__ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update nidhi šŸ‘
Finally swasan is happy 😳
Totally loving the story 😳
But sahil intension
I hope swasan will be fine 😳
But before sahil drama start 😲 i want swasan romance 😈
Update soon
Edited by Sujayricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

this is actually dedicated you😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: __nidhi__



this is actually dedicated you😳


Thank you so much for this 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Nidhi,

Just caught up with this one. So Sahil will soon be the big bad guy huh? So finely done. Each chapter was very enjoyable. I'm feeling so sorry that I missed reading it for so long. How many chapters are you planning by the way?

Just love the fact that Swara remembered everything, the last chapter is so heart touching. Too, too happy for both of them Lakshya and Ragini are cute too. I get why no one cared much for Sail's changed attitude but wish they did, he will do something nasty soon. After all his weeks of effort had just flushed down the drain.

His thought process was chilling. Is he a psycho? The way he thought how she will be his sooner or later suggested so. I hope he will be unmasked soon. A foe disguised as friend is dangerous.

Do update soon. Will be waiting to read the next part. But do forgive me if I don't comment often, I have a busy schedule. Will come by and tell you about it, whenever possible.

A little request meanwhile, do make your thread Copy Protect. I can see hard work behind this one, we don't need anyone stealing from it right? Precautions are always better.

Love,
Sakura
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Super wala update... Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Note..
I am really thankful to you guys to love my story to this extent! so here i have a question! what should be the following story? i mean you guys want swasan marriage or Swara should directly come to maheshwari mansion?

so guys let me know!

fast!šŸ˜†

toh utna jaldi update!šŸ˜†šŸ˜‰

Love,
Nidhi
Edited by __nidhi__ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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If sahil don't create any problem in swasan marriage so then show it but if he create some problems then make swara direct entry to mm 😳

I hope i give my suggestions in fast &furious style šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its ur choice
I would love to read some spice

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