Ishra TS || When Life Falters || Final Shot (Page 7) (July 5)

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

omg Prabh - this was beautiful & the flashback brought a tear to my eye! If you get a chance, I do hope you continue this TS b/c it is just what I would've loved to see on screen! You do have this gift for bringing out the best of characters and emotions in your stories! 😳

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Akanksha

@agm1998

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Great track dii

Always wanted a story on this track

Plz continue soon

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Nidoo

@-Silencia-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

This is beautiful Prabh ❤️ One of the phases where IshRa's love was being strengthened and you have woven it into such an emotional narrative. Please do continue this, if you can.

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shreya

@Shre28

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

This is what Ishra is all about. Both try to be strong for each other and yet let their guards fall down before the other because they are the only ones who can understand and provide solace to each other. With the onscreen drama going haywire, your stories are one of the reasons that keep me coming back to the forum! Would love to see you write more on this.

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sririt

@sririt

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

This is amazing. Flashback was 😭. I am glad Ishu is trying to help Raman in her ways; but this Ashok😡

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Sk-Sharmin

@Sk-Sharmin

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

very nice plot...
loved it..
their support for each other...
in every situation..
hiz taunts..
she getting angry..
he ogling her..
their little bit of romance in dis worst situation...
so amazing..

nice plot..
continue soon..
will b waiting .
hope ashok nd suraj ko karara jawab milega..

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

That's a wonderful story Prabh... one that was underplayed on the show and the aftermath it could have on IshRa which was ignored too. Raman working with Ashok again was like digging his past, hurting his wounds and recreating his past all over again. The work pressure, and the torture Ashok would put on him and still be survived but the insults and mental trauma wouldn't be easy and each of that you've focused on here.

You've concentrated on how it mentally weakens Raman because he has lost a job and found one where he is being ostracized for no reason, dampening his courage. The effect of this on IshRa...how wonderful that Raman has Ishita to lean on...and how touching that Ishita stands up for him like this. Their relation growing every moment..

You every work is wonderful and I am glad you chose a PRE leap track to write on... I like them more myself 😆 Write most on those.

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

Its superb...bring back memories of this phase of ishra life...cvs didnt pay much attention to this..
Loved to read ur take on this..
Waiting for next