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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Beautifully written
Last line was so deep and passionate

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Preeti

@Preeti.xo

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

I love this! You've described eveything so well. Would be lovely to have them go on a date like this in the show too!

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

"Mohabbat hain, isiliye nahi bola.
Zidd hoti, toh abhi meri baahon mein hoti."

With this line you killed it mahi..

Brilliant and lovee it..❤️..

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho
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Will be back after I read it!
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I loved the whole of it to the core.
You presented everything so beautifully that I wanted to be in the place of Suman.
Do I need to tell you that you are one of my favorite writer? Absolutely not cause you know it already.
I loved how it wasn't the typical OS where all we get is a bad starting and a happy ending.
I loved how you set the mood for the yacht night,it was perfect.
Brilliant piece.👏
The last line stole my heart!

-Mitali❤️

Awww, Mittu!🤗

Love you janaa!

Really, well you're free to be.😉 I hope you someday get your Shravan *sorry I went too far*😆

Bold: Well, well, well!!! Flying in heaven😳

*need to comeback now*

There are tonns of brilliantly talented people here and I'm no one! Mittu, this really meant a lot to me! Specially, when you're a faaab writer yourself

Thank you so much dear❤️

Tbh, I myself was bored of the regular stuff written. Wanted to go for somerhing different. And I'm glad I did.

Thanks again! A wonderful comment to read.

Love

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: EasternViolet.
I love this! You've described eveything so well. Would be lovely to have them go on a date like this in the show too!

Thank you so much Preeti! Am flattered😳

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: _Eternity_
"Mohabbat hain, isiliye nahi bola.
Zidd hoti, toh abhi meri baahon mein hoti."

With this line you killed it mahi..

Brilliant and lovee it..❤️..

Thanks to Jazbaa, I got hold of this line!

Thank you very much Ranju🤗

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Suzaina

@Manyata5

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

The last lines

They seemed of utter surety

Ofcourse he have it

It was amazing

And i am so in love with last lines

Keep writing

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Manyata5
The last lines
They seemed of utter surety
Ofcourse he have it
It was amazing
And i am so in love with last lines
Keep writing

Thank you so much Manyata!

Yupp, he is damn sure of his love😳

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