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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow this was so nice os. Love u girl for this. For a moment both were jealous. I loved that. Loved them kissing. Good to know they knew their limits before marriage. Over an all a good os. Loved it. Loved twinkle changing her statement.
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Hey,
I dont think we interacted before...
So,,Hi...
Now the Story..
The lines-kunj...wants to master girl -boy relation...
-CriminallyHandsome ...So true...
-Yup...dreaded physics laws...universal truth...
Pastries...😳
Qubool hai effect...Mr.Khan...🤣

Don't be sorry. ...I don't think u bored anyone...
I don't know wether it makes sense or not but after reading it ...my Headache actually lessened...& now I just can't stop smiling. ..
THE STORY WILL SURELY MAKE THE READERS BLUSH...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my gosh,this was so so so amazing.Like literally I wanted to read more and more.How beautifully you've portrayed their relation and like how Kunj respects Twinkle. I really wanted to see something like this in TEI but nevermind,thank you for writing this.And no you didn't bore me at all.Keep writing more. x
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaveerkti

Hey,

I dont think we interacted before...
So,,Hi...
Now the Story..
The lines-kunj...wants to master girl -boy relation...
-CriminallyHandsome ...So true...
-Yup...dreaded physics laws...universal truth...
Pastries...😳
Qubool hai effect...Mr.Khan...🤣

Don't be sorry. ...I don't think u bored anyone...
I don't know wether it makes sense or not but after reading it ...my Headache actually lessened...& now I just can't stop smiling. ..
THE STORY WILL SURELY MAKE THE READERS BLUSH...


Awww thank u soo much ,ur so sweet😳😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tikit

Wow this was so nice os. Love u girl for this. For a moment both were jealous. I loved that. Loved them kissing. Good to know they knew their limits before marriage. Over an all a good os. Loved it. Loved twinkle changing her statement.


Aww thank u😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jambread3

Oh my gosh,this was so so so amazing.Like literally I wanted to read more and more.How beautifully you've portrayed their relation and like how Kunj respects Twinkle. I really wanted to see something like this in TEI but nevermind,thank you for writing this.And no you didn't bore me at all.Keep writing more. x


Thank u soo much ,but the reaon i said for the bore part is because someone bashed me for making my stories long and boring😭.

But i'm glad that u appreciate me😊😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved twinkle loosing all her control over kunj...she just couldnt control her desires...
It was awesomely romantic 😳😳...
Do write more like dis...
Thnk u sooo much
A big hug frm mee🤗
It was a treat after all
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing story
loved it to the core
ohhh really Twinkle get so bold here ...totally loved her that side
and Kunj being the Khadoos Sarna was so cute
and the Twinj kissing scene was amazing and then reality hit them...yeah they aren't married yet have to be in limits good they remembered it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ajna_fc



Thank u soo much ,but the reaon i said for the bore part is because someone bashed me for making my stories long and boring😭.

But i'm glad that u appreciate me😊😳

don't even think about those bashers ,,,,,you really write so good even if it was long part but its so good that even I want to just read more n more of it
m sure it can't bore anyone

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