MaNan SS : Tere Ishq Mein part-19-20 pg -77 [07/06/16] - Page 42

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bangfarju

so emotional
l am literally crying when read this
update. again manan's separation
why plz don't do this and Maddy
oh god he stabbed manik shit what
will be happened to manik poor boy
he is sick moreover his nandini left
him alone and now this Maddy this
plz sab kuch thik kar dao plz

looking forward for next
plz come back fast with ur
next update .

thanks for pm


Sorry but this story concept abut manan separation but trust me sab tik se jada hi acha hoga
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sws2

Nooo sooo saddd😭

Poor Manan so much pain
Hope they get back soon, and get true happiness
Thanks for pm
😊


Hope for the best
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Posted: 9 years ago
So finally twisted part aa gya h, story toh ab shuru hui h guys, hope soo you will like the track...
#Tere ishq main
"If a person's brain can only choose to hold a second of a memory, then I wish that this will be the second that I remember..."
Manik leaves these words with Nandini. Because of Maddy's knife attack, everything changed in a flash. Manik is back in the hospital and lingering between life and death. Nandini is taken to Flower Field Village by where she met Dhruv and quietly harboring an unknown future, she starts a new journey of her life...
Time flies and flies by and the arrival of the sixth Autumn is quietly approaching...
A nimble and dashing figure is gliding agilely on the ice hockey rink but the emotions that show from this pair of eyes have become persistent and calm, there is no attitude ... Manik is no longer Manik. His life has begun anew. He is now a successful lawyer and in his new life, there isn't anyone by the name of Nandini... There is only Alia, who stays by his side like a gentle angle. From speaking to learning how to tie shoelaces, she has not left or given up on him. She is the light in Manik's rebirth... the one that he loves the most...
As for Nandini, she also has a new life in Flower Field Village - she's a single mother. There is a cute little boy by her side now - Manan, the child of Nandini and Manik! Manan is the significance of Nandini's life and the reason for her to continue to fight and live! Mother and son live a peaceful life in Flower Field Village. Of course, there is also Dhruv's unwavering protection... Dhruv is like a big tree, protecting Nandini from all the rumors that go around. He is also there to comfort Manan when he is down...
Manan carried around this equipment that is of bits and pieces of recycled materials, and he thought that it will help to send signals to his alien father. He would always call out " Mi Xiu, Mi Xiu!!!( miss u)". After that it was revealed that Nandini always told him that his father was an alien from another planet, and that one day, his UFO-like-thingy broke down in front of the bus that Nandini was in, they met, fell in love and had Manan. Yet, because Manan had no father, he was always bullied by Ashish, a boy of his age and whose father constantly eyed Nandini as a wife.

Ashish was just bullying Manan, when Dhruv came along and helped to put Ashish in his place. There was a moment of confusion as the audience might wonder what's the relationship between Manan and Dhruv, but it was quickly revealed that Manan thought Dhruv as just a friend, even though Dhruv evidently wanted to marry Nandini. He was the one who brought Nandini to flower village, after all the drama and he had been taking care of Nandini and Manan all these years. That day, he took a fan from his house to put in Nandini's house. Nandini had been requested by Sarla, the mother of Dhruv, to keep her distance from Dhruv, because his mother had high hopes for him to end up with Khushi, a girl that Dhruv thought of as a sister. However, no matter how Nandini refused Dhruvs goodwill, he still wanted to help her, purely out of kindness. Later, Nandini wanted to cook her specialty, Rice, for Manan, who complained that he had eaten that day before, but he wanted to eat it after remembering that Nandini said before that that dish should be eaten with the people that you love the most. Manan thought of his father and agreed to eat the rice.
"Mamma papa kab aayenge" said Manan while eating..
"Aaa jayenge beta jldi aa jayenge, papa miss u a lot " said Nandini...
It was a daily rotine that Manan would ask about papa and Nandani will give same answer...
On the other hand, It's now revealed that after the surgery, he lost his memory and that means that he lost all memory of Nandini and what happened between them as well. Alia now stayed by his side, and Manik recalled how Alia had been there for him the moment he opened his eyes. Due to the surgery, Manik lost the knowledge that he once had, so he's just like a baby in a grown up man's body. Alia was the one who taught him the basics again, from how to walk, to how to tie his shoelaces "The rabbit grows a pair of ears, runs round a tree, into a burrow. Pull tight." At first, Manik couldn't do it at all, and after he threw a tantrum, Alia ran out of the room out of sadness, because she couldn't bear to see someone so brilliant and smart behaving like just a young toddler.

Before running out of the room, Alia told Manik that no one else could help him if he decided to give up. Due to that sentence, Manik decided to try again, and he succeeded. Back to the present. Manik told Alia how much he loved her, and then he proposed to her. Alia had rejected his proposal many times before, but this time round, she nodded her head. Finally, they're getting married, much to the happiness of Alia's father [Director ] and Manik's mother [Nyonika]. Lawyer asked Director Nyonika if this was what she really wanted for Manik -- to forget Nandini and to become a lawyer that worked only for money and not for justice. The old Manik who helped Nandini get back the justice six years ago had disappeared, and he was replaced by a Manik who, as long as the client had enough money, could turn black into white and white into black. Nyonika said that this outcome was the best.



Manik took up a case where the guy sorta obviously sexually abused both the mother and the daughter who worked at his house as maids/helpers. However, because the guy had money, Manik helped him win the case. During the case, and after the case, because what the accused and the defendant said resembled greatly to what Nandini and her stepfather said years ago, he started to get faint memories. The memory became so great, that as he remembered punching someone six years ago, he felt the fury inside him, and he punched the guy.
"kon h yee jiska face baar baar ankhon k saamne aa rha h, aisa lag rha h I know her from years but yee chehra clearly q nhi dikh rha kya rista h mera iss chehre k saath" thought Manik...
Manik wondered what made him do this kind of things, especially when he could always keep his calm and cool.
Mr Saxena actually bought the land from flower's village but the residents refused to move away, because the land deed was obtained under illegal means. They asked Nandini to write in to request for a lawyer, and I think you know and I know, who is the lawyer that's going to be sent there. As Manik beat someone up in the court, and he's a lawyer, the association had to punish him. He had to spend 240hours of community service at that village.
After Manik told the family about him having to go to that village, Mr Saxena told him that the conflict the villagers had must be the one between him and the villagers. He told Manik not fight for them, and quickly come back. Manik agreed.

Later, Manik was super angry as he boxed, because he couldn't believe that he had to waste 240 hours of his life simply because he punched someone whom everyone agreed was downright perverted. Alia helped him pack his pills [ he still had to take pills in case he got cancer again]...
Alia told him that she's happy he actually punched someone, because the Manik that was full of justice and placed lots of emphasis on friendship was the one that she loved the most. She thought that Manik had changed after the surgery, but after this thing happened, she's positive that Manik was still the old Manik that she knew and loved. Manik took her hand, looked tenderly into her eyes and said "I will be back as soon as possible, and then, you're gonna be the most beautiful bride" to which Alia smiled shyly...

Next part bolo bolo kya hoga, Manik, Nandani and Manan kaise milenge, who will bring Manik and Nandini closer...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part - 20
#Tere ishq main
While playing Manan accidentally spoiled Ashish's toy car and Ashish told Nandini that if she went to talk nicely with my father, there's a chance that Nandini didn't need to pay for the damage of the expensive toy car, and she didn't need to repay all her debts to Ashish's father. Even though she was super reluctant, Nandini decided to take up Ashish's suggestion to meet his father. The next day, she sat on the public bus to go and find Ashish's father, when someone's car broke down in front of the public bus. All the passengers had to alight from the bus and walk to where ever they were going. Nandini smiled a little to herself, as she remembered six years ago, when Manik stopped his posh car right in front of the public bus. She came down from the bus, and took a look at the car...
All the flashback run in front of her, how first time they meet and they land up to police station. She smiled remembering that...
But the man was hidden behind the hood of the car. This man was no other than Manik, and this was thus how Manik and Nandini missed the chance to see each other.
"SIx years... Inn six years main kitna kuch badal gya hoga Manik tumhe toh pta bhi nhi h that hmara beta h jo tumhe bhot jyada miss krta h but hope soo tum khush ho apni life main aur mujhe maaf kr diya ho tumne... " thought Nandani...
By the way, Nandini didn't know that Manik lost his memory and all these years, she just thought that Manik hated her, so he never came to find her.

As Nandini had to go and find Ashish's father, she didn't stay to help Manik. She met up with Ashish's father who thought that she turned up to discuss marriage with him. They realised that it was a misunderstanding set up intentionally on Ashish's part. Manik coincidentally walked into the shop that they were at, and heard the conversation. Ashish's father started insulting her like saying things like oh how she shouldn't act shy even though she had Manan already [ meaning she's no longer a virgin = no need to act so innocent and shy ] and like how she didn't give him face even though he still wanted a broken bowl that nobody else wanted.

Nandini excused herself to go to the washroom, and told herself to calm down and that she needed to talk to him again, for Manan's sake. While she went to the washroom, Ashish's father took her drink and put pills inside, most probably sleeping pills, but Manik saw. Manik walked over to the table, and told him that he's very willing to be Nandini's lawyer and sue him.
The man didn't know who Manik was at first, but after looking at the newspaper [where Manik was featured after helping to win a super big case], he got scared. Manik threatened to take Nandini's drink as evidence that he wanted to do something to her, and in a haste to destroy the evidence, Ashish's father drank Nandini's drink.
Manik left before Nandini came back, and Nandini was surprised to hear from him that she didn't need to pay him back all the money she owed him, before he collapsed on the table. Nandini was very worried but the girl in the shop assured her that he was only getting what he deserved, and that the lawyer was here.
"Which lawyer??" asked Nandani
"vhi jo abhi aaya tha, he was very smart lagta h new h yha" said the girl smilingly...
"Main thanks bhi nhi bol payi unhe, pta nhi ab milenge bhi yaa nhi" thought Nandani...
Paas aaye..
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui
Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi
Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi
Jaa mile.. jaa mile..
Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..
Manik went back to wait for the village head. Manan went with the village head to welcome Manik, since the lawyer would be living in Nandini's house [technically the village's house, because it's not hers]. However, there was a pregnant woman on the road who was about to give birth, and the head had to drive her to the hospital.
As such, Manan was the only one to greet Manik, and the scene that greeted him was exactly like how Nandini told him -- his dad's car broke down in front of a public bus. Manan saw the whole incident that how now his car broke and he relates both the incident and immediately ran up to Manik and hugged his leg while calling " papa!" .
Manik became shocked hearing word "papa"..
"kaha the aap pta h maine kitna miss kiya h aapko" said Manan while hugging his legs tightly...
Manik kneel down to reach his hieght and see his face iss soo cute, his innocent and teary eyes...
Rang thhe, noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan
Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan
Manan raise his hands to touch Manik's cheek..
"papa aap mujhe bhool gye kya?? Aaapko meri yaad nhi aati thi main toh always inna saara miss krta tha aapko" said Manan innocently extending his small hands...
Manik told Manan that he's not even married so Manan shouldn't call him Daddy, but Manan was adamant that he's the dad from the other planet. The village head soon joined them, and because Manan needed to pee, he needed Manik to help him pull his pants. Manik was initially disgusted because Manan's pee got onto his hands, but after hearing from the village head that Manan was fatherless since he was born, Manik felt sympathy for him as Manik himself had no father since he was young and his attitude towards Manan improved tremendously. He even taught Manan how to tie his shoelaces, using the way that Alia taught him.
Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani..

The villagers throw a welcome party for Manik in which Manik drunk two three shots...
Khushbuon se teri yunhi takra gaye
Chalte chalte dekho na hum kahaan aa gaye
Jannatein agar yahin
Tu dikhe kyon nahin
Chaand suraj sabhi hai yahaan
Intezar tera sadiyon se kar raha
Pyaasi baithi hai kab se yahaan
Later, the village head brought Manik to Nandini's house. Manan shouted happily "Nandini! I found Alien Papa, come out and see"...
Humari adhoori kahaani
Humari adhoori kahaani..
Nandini was inside the room and laughed as she walked out of the room " Manan, I already told you that he's the lawyer from that planet and not your Da.." but was left incomplete after seeing Manik...
Pyaas ka ye safar khatam ho jayega
Kuch adhura sa jo tha poora ho jayega

Jhuk gaya aasmaan
Mill gaye do jahaan
Har taraf hai milan ka samaa
Doliya hain saji, khushbuein har kahin
Padhne aaya Khuda khud yahaan..

Nandini got stunned as she realised, it's indeed Manan's daddy.
Six years ... after Six years Manik was infront of her...
Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani..

(Nandini thought that Manik still remembered her, but Manik only knew her as the woman that he rescued at the shop earlier. )

Manik looked at her and recognised her as the woman that was harassed by the man at the shop earlier. He smiled and said "It's you".
Nandini was shocked as flashbacks of her leaving Manik filled her mind.
Manik walked a little closer and said "So the mother of this child is you... I didn't think that I will meet you here" He smiled a little, and slumped over in a drunken state.
"Manikkk" shouted Nandani...
Nandini rushed to his side thinking that something was wrong but Manan assured her that he was only drunk. Nandini asked Manan why he kept calling Manik Daddy, and Manan told her that he found Manik in the same situation as she had described, but the village head kept telling him that it's not his Daddy, it's the lawyer.
Nandini heard this and realised that Manik was the lawyer that was sent to help them, which also means that Manik succeeded in his dreams of wanting to become a lawyer. Manan was very happy and held Nandini's hands "Mamma, Manan will have a Daddy next time right?"
Nandini told him "Manan, listen to me, he's not your father"
"If he's not my father, why are you crying?" said Manan angrily
"I'm crying because I've worked too long today" said Nandani to make a excuse
"Oh I know! You're crying because you haven't seen Daddy in a long time right?" Nandini tried to convince him that Manik wasn't his dad, but Manan asked how could Nandini know the lawyer's name [ she called his name when he fainted in a drunken state]..
Nandini shouted at him, but apologised for scolding him.

Dhruv came to find Nandini. He helped Nandini carry Manik into Manan's room and Nandini asked him if she should leave. He told Nandini that he saw Manik wear a ring on his fourth finger, which meant that he's married, which in turn means that Manik had forgotten about Nandini.
Nandini thought about what he said and agreed that now that he's married, they had nothing to do with each other, and since he didn't know anything about Manan, she would just wait until Manik left. She's just scared that Manik would find out about his relationship with Manan but Dhruv assured her that he's the only one other than her who knew that Manik was the father of Manan.
He told Nandini to simply tell Manik, if he ever asked, that Manan's father died.

Dhruv got a call from one of his gang sidekicks that they found the guy whom Dhruv suspected got duped into selling their land deed. If they could get proof that the land deed was obtained through illegal means, then they wouldn't need to move. Before leaving, he told Nandini that he would request for another lawyer, and asked Nandini to ask the village head to get Manik to sleep in another villager's house.

Manik and Nandini, these two parallel lives that are both developing on their own, seems like they will never intersect again. But a sexual assault case and a land dispute case, quietly lays down the foundation of a shocking future for them both. Will the day that they are to be reunited on the verge of approaching? Will this new shuffle of fate affect the lives of these four people? Will the next stop really be happiness?
To get the answer of these questions read the next part and plzz leave your revies that you like the part or not...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update..
Flt bad 4 manan..
Wat il hpn nw..
Waiting 4 nxt..
Luvd it..
Thnkz 4 d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome
superb
both part are fantastic
plz can't wait more
update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally Manan meet
Eagerly waiting for next one
Thanks for pm
😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Wat a twist.manik list his memory and nandini was blessed with manan.manan and manik's meet was superb. Finally manan met after ages.eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon. Thanks for pm.love to read further
Keep writing
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow update..
Manik forget Nandu...
Manan has a baby...
Feeling bad for Manan..
Waiting for next...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow too gud...
Really nyc..
Cnt soo

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