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Tumpa12

@Tumpa12

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

great one
beautifully written
loved it

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aarushi04

@aarushi04

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Superb update!!!!
Luvd d way arjun expressed d colors...
So unique n specific...u mentioned dem!!
His way of proposing on boat was Fab...
N finally d marriage!!! Awsum
Luvd d last color orange too...
Lovely os!!!
Thnx for pm

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ArshAriya

@ArshAriya

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

wow didu

i m speechless

this is so beautiful os

i never read any holi based story like this

u describe each colour so beautifully

2 saal me bohot kuch badal jata he i know n i understand what ri is feeling

she lost her confidence she lost her ownself

i know sabne jo bhi kiya uske bhale ke liye hi kiya

but us person ki state koi nahi samjh sakta jis par har chiz ki rok ho

bahar nahi ja sakti,resto. ka khana nahi kha sakti,field work nahi kar sakti jiska sapna hi kuch kar dikhana ho ek acha nidar bahadur officer banna ho use sirf office me hi rehna pade to kesa lagta he

use bura na lage isliye sab wese behave kiye but usi taraf se socha jae to riya galat nahi lagi mujhe kahi bhi koi bhi esa hi sochega

uske 2 saal chut gaye

wo 2 saal piche chal rahi he sabse

its very emotional from riya's side

i love riya's each n every emotion

n arjun u made my day di

superb

is tarah ki holi kisine kisiko nahi khiyali hogi kabhi

how u can think something like this

mind blowing di

u r superb... fantastic...

PYAAR is 5 letter ke word me hi ye sab kuch samaya he

only ture love cane do this things only those can do something like this for their beloved

love u mini di

u r awesome

its beautiful os i totaly loved it...

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aashi24

@aashi24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

nice os
happy holi
thanks for pm

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Wow..
Such an amazing holi..
Love this os..

Arjun ne Riya ko kya holi khilayi he..
Thanks 4 pm..

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ajuswa19pm

@ajuswa19pm

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

beautiful os

lovely i liked

d scene when

arjun

took riya to d

park n they were

adoring d color nature!

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jeharshu

@jeharshu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Totally beautiful os didu
U explained about all colors very well
AtlaAtlast colors ke saath saath Ariya ki
Shaadi b hogayi hai
Totally loved dis one
Sorry for late comment
Nd thanks for the pm didu