First RaTri poem: Kaise kahun...tum mere liye kya ho?

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

Alumni

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

This poem is dedicated to all those who have supported me in all my efforts... Here I am with my first poem on RaTri...

Please take a look at this...

Kaise
kahun...tum mere liye kya ho?

Jab se tum aaye meri
zindagi mein 
 Surat iski badal si
gayi...
Ek veerana tha har taraf

Bahar usme aa hi gayi...

Kitna tanha tanha tha main 

Khud mein khoya khoya tha
main
Tum aayi to aisa laga 

Koi apna mil hi gaya...
Jis tarah tum mera har
gham apnati ho

Bin kahe har baat samajh
hi jati ho...
Mere har aansu ka hai
pata tumhe

Use muskan mein badal
tum jati ho...
Jab hoti ho tum mere
paas

Zindagi se aur nahi koi
aas...
Jab tum door mujhse jati
ho

Har pal bas yaad tumhi
aati ho...
Tumhe dekh meri subah
suhani hai

Jo tum nahi to tanhai
hai...

Har pal maangu bas yahi
dua

Jo tu sanam mera na
hua...
Mere dil ki dhadkan
wahin ruk jaye

Jeevan ki dor usi pal toot
jaye...
Tere bina jeena aise 

Jal bina machhli jaise...
Tera mera jo rishta hai 

Mere liye jaise ibaadat
hai...
Humare dil ki dhadkane 

Judi hai andekhi dor
se...
Yeh sirf dosti hai ya
pyar

Fark main yeh samajh
nahi pata...
Mere liye dono ek hi
hai

Tum bin koi aur nazar
nahi aata...
Is rishte ko koi bhi
naam do

Chahe benaam hi rehne
do...
Bas kahunga itna hi 

Apne dil mein rehne
do...
Mere dil mein ho tum hi
tum

Jo tum nahi to koi
nahi...
Jo tum do mera saath 

Jeevan ki ban jaye har
baat...
Poora karu har sapna
tera

Tera sapna hi sapna
mera...
Tumhare sivay kuch soch
na paya

Hum banke rahe ek duje
ka saya... 
Tum mere liye kya ho 

Lafzon mein bayan kar
nahi sakta...
Bas itna hai kehna
mujhe

Bina tumhare jee nahi
sakta...

The End...

Written by Manisha...in love with RaTri...

Edited by braveheartdoc - 9 years ago

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Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

wow this is soo awesome. simply loved it sooo much it didn't seem you are writing for the first time .I loved it sooo much .you are such a awesome poet .really loved this so much

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

Alumni

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Posted: 9 years ago

NOTE

This is my attempt at writing a poem... i always wanted to do it but never had the courage to try it out... please forgive me for all my mistakes in advance, i know its not really upto the mark... first timer samajh kar mistakes ignore kar do please...

I don't know whether i've been able to express what Raghav feels for Trisha aptly or not?

I'm sorry once again for my loopholes...

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Tasha1994

@Tasha1994

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
NOTE
This is my attempt at writing a poem... i always wanted to do it but never had the courage to try it out... please forgive me for all my mistakes in advance, i know its not really upto the mark... first timer samajh kar mistakes ignore kar do please...
I don't know whether i've been able to express what Raghav feels for Trisha aptly or not?
I'm sorry once again for my loopholes...

this is simply awesome. I really loved it soo much

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

Alumni

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
wow this is soo awesome. simply loved it sooo much it didn't seem you are writing for the first time .I loved it sooo much .you are such a awesome poet .really loved this so much

Thanks a lot for your words... i didn't know you'll like it so much... thanks again for your motivation my dear...❤️🤗

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

Alumni

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
this is simply awesome. I really loved it soo much

Thanks a lot Tasha, means a lot...

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

Manisha

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

A heartfelt poem 👏👏

Lovely from the heart from Raghav to Trisha ⭐️⭐️

Awesome wordings and so deeply touched ! So loving to be loved ! So pure to be in mind and soul. So emotional and a love poem said by Raghav !

I just got so deeply emotional Manisha, i can't express myself today how i am feeling. So beautifully penned down.

Loved it to the core. Raghav's heart out so finely presented. Thanks for this wonderful treat !

Loves and huggies tight ❤️🤗

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Babita

@babita..

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
NOTE
This is my attempt at writing a poem... i always wanted to do it but never had the courage to try it out... please forgive me for all my mistakes in advance, i know its not really upto the mark... first timer samajh kar mistakes ignore kar do please...
I don't know whether i've been able to express what Raghav feels for Trisha aptly or not?
I'm sorry once again for my loopholes...

Manisha :

This is what i myself have always felt what Raghav feels for Trisha !

U have aptly written and the wordings are so perfectly used. I just love it ! Thanks is just a little word here !