First RaTri poem: Kaise kahun...tum mere liye kya ho?

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<font size="4" color="#993300">This poem is dedicated to all those who have supported me in all my efforts... Here I am with my first poem on RaTri...</font>
<font size="4" color="#993300">Please take a look at this...</font>

<p align="center"></p><p align="center"><font size="5" color="#990000">Kaise
kahun...tum mere liye kya ho?
</font>
</p>


<font size="4" color="#0000ff"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Jab se tum aaye meri
zindagi mein </font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> Surat iski badal si
gayi...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Ek veerana tha har taraf</font></font>
<font size="4" color="#0000ff"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"></font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Bahar usme aa hi gayi...</font></font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990000" size="4">Kitna tanha tanha tha main </font>
<font color="#990000" size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Khud mein khoya khoya tha
main</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Tum aayi to aisa laga </font></font>
<font size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990033">Koi apna mil hi gaya...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Jis tarah tum mera har
gham apnati ho </font>
</font>
<font size="4" color="#0000ff"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Bin kahe har baat samajh
hi jati ho...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Mere har aansu ka hai
pata tumhe </font>
</font>
<font size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Use muskan mein badal
tum jati ho...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990000">Jab hoti ho tum mere
paas </font>
</font>
<font color="#990000" size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Zindagi se aur nahi koi
aas...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Jab tum door mujhse jati
ho </font>
</font>
<font size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990000">Har pal bas yaad tumhi
aati ho...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Tumhe dekh meri subah
suhani hai </font>
</font>
<font size="4" color="#0000ff"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">J</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">o tum nahi to tanhai
hai...</font>
</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#0000ff">Har pal maangu bas yahi
dua </font>
<font size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Jo tu sanam mera na
hua...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990000">Mere dil ki dhadkan
wahin ruk jaye </font>
</font>
<font size="4" color="#990000"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Jeevan ki dor usi pal toot
jaye...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Tere bina jeena aise </font></font>
<font size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990000">Jal bina machhli jaise...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Tera mera jo rishta hai </font></font>
<font size="4" color="#0000ff"></i><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Mere liye jaise ibaadat
hai...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Humare dil ki dhadkane </font></font>
<font size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Judi hai andekhi dor
se...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990000">Yeh sirf dosti hai ya
pyar </font>
</font>
<font size="4" color="#990000"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Fark main yeh samajh
nahi pata...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Mere liye dono ek hi
hai </font>
</font>
<font size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990000">Tum bin koi aur nazar
nahi aata...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Is rishte ko koi bhi
naam do </font>
</font>
<font size="4" color="#0000ff"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Chahe benaam hi rehne
do...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Bas kahunga itna hi </font></font>
<font size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Apne dil mein rehne
do...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990000">Mere dil mein ho tum hi
tum </font>
</font>
<font size="4" color="#990000"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Jo tum nahi to koi
nahi...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Jo tum do mera saath </font></font>
<font size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990000">Jeevan ki ban jaye har
baat...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Poora karu har sapna
tera </font>
</font>
<font size="4" color="#0000ff"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Tera sapna hi sapna
mera...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Tumhare sivay kuch soch
na paya </font>
</font>
<font size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">Hum banke rahe ek duje
ka saya... </font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#990000">Tum mere liye kya ho </font></font>
<font size="4" color="#990000"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Lafzon mein bayan kar
nahi sakta...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Bas itna hai kehna
mujhe </font>
</font>
<font color="#990000" size="4"><i><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Bina tumhare jee nahi
sakta...</font>
</font>
<font color="#990000" size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">
</font></font>
<font size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#990099">The End...</font></font></font>
<font size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">Written by Manisha...in love with RaTri...
</font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000"></font>






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Tasha1994 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow this is soo awesome. simply loved it sooo much it didn't seem you are writing for the first time .I loved it sooo much .you are such a awesome poet .really loved this so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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NOTE
This is my attempt at writing a poem... i always wanted to do it but never had the courage to try it out... please forgive me for all my mistakes in advance, i know its not really upto the mark... first timer samajh kar mistakes ignore kar do please...
I don't know whether i've been able to express what Raghav feels for Trisha aptly or not?
I'm sorry once again for my loopholes...
Tasha1994 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

NOTE

This is my attempt at writing a poem... i always wanted to do it but never had the courage to try it out... please forgive me for all my mistakes in advance, i know its not really upto the mark... first timer samajh kar mistakes ignore kar do please...
I don't know whether i've been able to express what Raghav feels for Trisha aptly or not?
I'm sorry once again for my loopholes...

this is simply awesome. I really loved it soo much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

wow this is soo awesome. simply loved it sooo much it didn't seem you are writing for the first time .I loved it sooo much .you are such a awesome poet .really loved this so much


Thanks a lot for your words... i didn't know you'll like it so much... thanks again for your motivation my dear...β€οΈπŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

this is simply awesome. I really loved it soo much


Thanks a lot Tasha, means a lot...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Manisha

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Posted: 9 years ago
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A heartfelt poem πŸ‘πŸ‘
Lovely from the heart from Raghav to Trisha ⭐️⭐️
Awesome wordings and so deeply touched ! So loving to be loved ! So pure to be in mind and soul. So emotional and a love poem said by Raghav !
I just got so deeply emotional Manisha, i can't express myself today how i am feeling. So beautifully penned down.
Loved it to the core. Raghav's heart out so finely presented. Thanks for this wonderful treat !
Loves and huggies tight β€οΈπŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

NOTE

This is my attempt at writing a poem... i always wanted to do it but never had the courage to try it out... please forgive me for all my mistakes in advance, i know its not really upto the mark... first timer samajh kar mistakes ignore kar do please...
I don't know whether i've been able to express what Raghav feels for Trisha aptly or not?
I'm sorry once again for my loopholes...


Manisha :

This is what i myself have always felt what Raghav feels for Trisha !
U have aptly written and the wordings are so perfectly used. I just love it ! Thanks is just a little word here !

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a lot my dear...

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