OS: A Breathless Confession

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Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Mimiii22
Oh my my, It's freaking O'some...i was grinning like an idiot...Your writing made me feel like i'm sitting in cinema hall and enjoying some passionate romance. Superb.
loved devakshi wardrobe.. just what i imagined at starting...

Thank you so much! It's extremely kind of you! 😛

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Antara123

@Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ssimmy
Three words: So freaking HOT!!

Ngl I was hoping you would write more and escalate the situation a bit 😳 But it was so fun reading your piece, please write more!

It was supposed to end there. I'll take it forward when my brain cooks up such an idea. 😆 Thanks man!

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

OH MY GOD! I FINALLY get the time to comment!

YAY YAY YAY !!! HAHA

najjj WHAT WAS THIS?!?!?!?! YOU DO THIS AND THEN ASK US TO NOT EXPECT FRTHER!??!?1 UHMM... EXCUSEME!?? SHUT UP! you have to! youre so so so so so good at writing romance! i really didnt know! this was beautiful! WHAT a beautiful confession... dying for a scene like this in the show with the two all ethnically dressd up ❤️

Youre amazing... i was too lost in DEV & SONA to figure out what the hint could be so yeah 😛

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gowri priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Najma I missed this OS m really sry I was little busy

I luv your works its as always great 🤗

Just luvd this shot it was so romantic☺️ dev's confession and sona's way of accepting aww I just luvd it❤️

I seriously wish this one to be depicted in real track 😳

Edited by gowripriya - 9 years ago

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Antara123

@Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: serendipity.
OH MY GOD! I FINALLY get the time to comment!
YAY YAY YAY !!! HAHA
najjj WHAT WAS THIS?!?!?!?! YOU DO THIS AND THEN ASK US TO NOT EXPECT FRTHER!??!?1 UHMM... EXCUSEME!?? SHUT UP! you have to! youre so so so so so good at writing romance! i really didnt know! this was beautiful! WHAT a beautiful confession... dying for a scene like this in the show with the two all ethnically dressd up ❤️
Youre amazing... i was too lost in DEV & SONA to figure out what the hint could be so yeah 😛

FINALLY! You found this one, and decided to descend from your heavenly abode and comment. 😆😆 What to expect further man? Woh sab apne dimaag mein read karo. IF mein nahi. Ahem ahem. 😆

THANKS A LOT! Am I? Sab Paradise ka kamaal hai. Trust me, it is THE book to read. Its the only romance I have read, and nothing ever matched up to it, so I didnt bother. Moreover, I am not that much of a romantic person. 😆

Ya, I figured, you wouldn't figure out the hint. 😆 Let us see how they show it, I am sure rather I hope it will be good. 😉

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Antara123

@Antara123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: gowripriya
Najma I missed this OS m really sry I was little busy
I luv your works its as always great 🤗
Just luvd this shot it was so romantic☺️ dev's confession and sona's way of accepting aww I just luvd it❤️

I seriously wish this one to be depicted in real track 😳

Oh, you did? 😳 Its okay dear! Thanks a lot for reading and commenting! Really? I wish so too! Thats why I write it remember? 😆 Thanks again! Btw, check out my Index, in case you dont want to miss out. I update it almost immediately.