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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Oh my gosh ! That was one intense os.

Beautifully written. :)

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Vaishali

@MeDHellsAngel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

This was amazing.

I loved the OS.

I loved both of there confessions.

Lovely

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Aishwarya

@itsme_aish

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

This was so beautiful😳😳

I could picture the entire scene as though it was unfolding in front of my eyes😳❤️

Amazing and you write so beautifully👏

Loved it 😃❤️ keep writing more👍🏼

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LiveLoveLaugh96

@LiveLoveLaugh96

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Beautiful OS
Could totally imagine the characters 👏

Loved it ❤️

Edited by LiveLoveLaugh96 - 9 years ago

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Awesome and so intense
I loved this one soo much
It was amazing
So romantic
And is the next one about their marriage.?

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Zaya.hp

@Zaya.hp

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

You killed it this time! Wow! Really, it was brilliant. Definitely one of your best. So intense. Your description of Sonakshi, first of all, was beyond awesome. I could visualize Erica so easily! And so was the descripton of Dev. But I like Sonakshi's mre. And Dev's confession was MIND BLOWING. The passion and every other thing was perfect to the T. Killed it, yaar!

Edited by Zaya.hp - 9 years ago

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EJF_FAN

@EJF_FAN

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Too good!
Absolutely stunning and for the wardrobe I imagined the similar outfits because you write so well!
Keep writing such wonderfully romantic OS #DevAkshi #love_is_in_the_air !!👏😃

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Mouli Mandal

@Mimiii22

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Oh my my, It's freaking O'some...i was grinning like an idiot...Your writing made me feel like i'm sitting in cinema hall and enjoying some passionate romance. Superb.

loved devakshi wardrobe.. just what i imagined at starting...

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ssimmy

@ssimmy

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Three words: So freaking HOT!!

Ngl I was hoping you would write more and escalate the situation a bit 😳 But it was so fun reading your piece, please write more!

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mayu1982

@mayu1982

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Naj dear
It was superb 😃

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