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HEY GUYS IAM BACK WITH TODAYS OS !!

READ AND ENJOY

LIKE AND COMMENT

since its from devs point of view i could not elobarate it ... i cant write male feelings well !!!1😭



There is nothing extraordinary in my love story except my feelings. Whenever I see my loved one I remember the immense pain she bore for me... and this feeling would make me love her even more.

It was a simple arrange marriage. I was in my late twenties. My mother was most worried woman in our community,

"dev , you must get married as soon as possible before you get completely old else who will give his daughter to you?"

I had nothing but just to giggle at her, "Ma, you do not worry, a princess would come running all the way to marry your son."

And mom would hug me with utmost affection, "Yes, but you do need someone who can take care of you and feed you home-made food when you come from office in late night".

We met, obviously, after meeting of our families. It was a family affair. Her family and my family met. Someone, you can say a mode Bhabhi or Bua, offered,

"Give them some privacy... let them meet alone".

Room filled with gossips and smiles. But it was my life and I was educated enough to understand that groom and bride do have preference to marry or not marry each others. I also knew she was from business family, quite affluent family. There was doubt in my mind,

"She is beautiful, she is rich,is a doctor herself... why would she marry me ??usually doctor girls prefer doctor grooms I was confused !! We were left alone. Time was ticking fast. My heart was beating faster. First time our eyes met. She was indeed the princess... princess of my dream.

But before cupid could strike, my thought struck again, "Why? Why she would? " despite I had already sensed sort of desperation from her family too to "fix" this marriage.

"What is your name? And do you really want to marry me?"

The princess replied,

"sonakshi . Yes, I indeed has options to marry a surgeon but because I always saw doctors in all my generations my mom , sister , brother , cousins everyones a doctor I literally felt I should be the lone doctor in the house I enter next !! now that was a lame answer I guess mr dikshit !!!! she laughed !!

Now I let the cupid to strike me. Dev & sona ... sona & dev ... what a pair... and wow, I am the most deserving... but then crowd of Bua, Bhabhi, Aunties and Sisters gate crashed the room. Time over. Before we could express our likings for each other, both families started complimenting,

"What a pair... Ram & Sita..."

"Wow... what a bhabhi..."

"Jiju is too cool..."

"You are really lucky, you are getting a girl as simple as you dev ..."

"Beti, how beautiful you are... are you happy now"

...

...

I found myself pushed away to hall where gents were sitting. Her father declared,

"Lo ji lo.., Bete ji ki haa hai... are beta chand ka tukada hai meri beti

Everything was happening in jiffy. Two days after was our engagement, a week after, The Marriage... I must confess that I also had dream to talk to the girl as a "girlfriend", to make my bachelorhood meaningful. But dates were jammed packed. Relatives already started pouring in both families. I found my dream was shattering. In a busy schedule of customs and traditions, somehow I managed her number and dialled to meet her somewhere for outing...

She picked the call and gave a matured answer, "I shall talk to father and get back to you".

I called her again after an hour.

"See, he told that anyway you both would be meeting forever after a week... thoda sabra karo.. " she gigled and cut the call

I guessed that her father was sure that his talkative daughter might reveal something that would cut this marriage at last moment.

Finally we met at our first night. We had honeymoon. Finally one day she gave me good news,

"dev , it is second month since I had last and I feel it is a good news."

"Oh sona!..."

I lifted her and showered my love on her without discriminating any part... my princess appeared the most beautiful woman in this universe... indeed she was.

It was the day. She was writhing in immense labour pain. I had tears in my eyes. I blamed myself to hurt my princess... my love. I held her hand in my both palms,

"sona , I am sorry... it is all because of me... I wish I would have not insisted for the baby".

Her other hand came to my head, "Meet, I can bear anything... any pain... for you... for your love... just be with me"

And there I felt a true love, perhaps much more than just reciprocating my feeling for her. I was accomplished.

And here was my another princess - devakshi !!!!!!

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JyotiBThakur thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The best part about the OS is their daughter's name: DevAkshi...😳😊
Nice OS Dear.. Thanks for sharing.. Do write more.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: JyotiBThakur

The best part about the OS is their daughter's name: DevAkshi...😳😊

Nice OS Dear.. Thanks for sharing.. Do write more.😊



i could not think of another name
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Not bad yaar to expressed a boy feelings

Superb OS

But I feel every things was very fast

Devakshi is the name of DevaKshi daughter... Wow
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pilu05

Not bad yaar to expressed a boy feelings

Superb OS

But I feel every things was very fast

Devakshi is the name of DevaKshi daughter... Wow


well even i felt the same
next os would be in deep donnt worry
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow... Beautiful OS
Just superb 😊 😊
Nd DevAkshi was d best part... Omg , their daughter DevAkshi 😳 😳
How cute...!!!!!!
Thanks for the PM dear... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful OS, keep writing😊
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cute OS dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...very beautiful OS...And I loved the daughter's name Devakshi...sooo cute!!! 😛😳
Please keep writing...you are a fabulous writer!!! 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing OS dear!
Loved it...awe DevAkshi!
And thanks a lot for the PM!😳
Do keep writing such amazing OSs!👏😳

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