Collinding Worlds PART 15 PG 6 and PART 2 EDITED - Page 10

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U r writing first time I can't believe it's power packed update 👏👏👏

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Mani'Sani sons r in CBI great ...Vivian know about ruhi???Nahgin and ashok got arrested 👏👏get last u two😡

Ya... ya he does...yes they got arrested

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Ishdi Milan and his insecurity

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He sleep in her lap

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PART 3.1

Vandita and Mahika are still there they all decide to go for shopping. Aditya calls Mahika

Aditya "Chitti where are you is Maa with you."

Mahika " I am shopping Adi and Akka is with me. We are in Vasant Kunj Market."

Pihu "Adi bhaiya I want ice cream."

Aditya "Okay let's go."

They have reached where Mahika said they were. Pihu see Ishita.

Pihu "Haar vali Anuty."

Runs towards Ishita but gets gets stuck in between the road while crossing. Ishita see saves her. Ishita takes her to a side Adi is watching all this.

Ishita "Ruhi."

Pihu "Haar vali Aunty I am Pihu not Ruhi."

Raman comes there pulls Pihu away. "You stay away from you kids understand aapni manhoosiyat aapne pas rakho."

Keep you your bad omen with yourself

Pihu "Papa she saved me Adi bhaiya got me here for ice cream."

Raman spots Aditya take Pihu with him "How could you so irresponsible Adi I know it was plan make her this lady she is dead for me you understand.

Slaps Aditya.

Ishita comes in between "Raman how can you slap Adi in public he is not a kid any more."

Raman pushes her aside Vivan comes there catches her from falling.

Aditya "Maa. Papa you hurt Maa."

Vivan "Mr do you know hurting woman is punishable act by law. I can get you arrested for right now and (looking at Aditya) living your sister in between the traffic is so irresponsible."

Raman "Who do you think you are."

Vivan "A CBI officer."

Raman "I did nothing wrong."

Vivan "You did not hurt a woman and you slapped a boy in public in front of my eyes is enough a proof to get you in jail for 5 year."

Raman "You do not know who I am"

Vivan "Mr Raman Kumar Bhalla I know you well you do not seem to realise who I am."

Pihu is scared. She holds on to Ishita's hand tightly.

Vanshika comes there "Officer you are scaring the little girl. We have a case to discuss."

Mehr comes there "Akka is right officer."

Vanshika, Vivan and Mehr leave. Vandita and Mahika notice this go behind Raman.

Vandita "Raman what's wrong with you why are you treating your own kids like shit."

Raman "Vandita Akka stay out of it."

Mahika kneels down "Pihu beta are you fine."

Pihu hugs her tightly "Chitti"

Vandita "In anger Raman you forgot Pihu is just a kid you scared her."

Mehr comes there "Mr Bhalla the behaviour you showed has scared your little girl itself. (To Pihu) what is your name."

Pihu hugging Mahika tightly "Pihu."

Mehr "Do you know that Anuty's name."

Pihu "Haar Vali Anuty."

Mehr smile "Have you seen her before."

Pihu "I have saw her in Australia but I seen her photo is there in Chitti house."

Mehr "Beta do you know what Chitti means."

Pihu "Adi Bhaiya call Vando Anuty and Mahika Anuty, Chitti."

Mehr "Chitti means Maasi you know Maasi is some body who is like a mother. The lady your father pulled you away from is Dr Ishita Iyer your Vandu Chitti's and Mahika Chitti's sister."

Pihu looks at Aditya and think why Aditya called Ishita, Maa.

Pihu "Di who are you?"

Mehr say "Pihu my name is Mehr. (Walking away whisper in Mahika ear.) Enough shopping Chitti after what just happened it's difficult to calm down Vivo I suggest you go home you can do the rest tomorrow in day."

Mahika says "Pihu are you going home."

Pihu "Yes"

Mahika "Will you give Akka and me a lift home."

Pihu looks at Raman. He hids "Why not Chitti come you live next door."

They leave. Now Aditya and Ishita are still there from afar Vivan is watching them.

Aditya crying "How could I be irresponsible if something happened to Pihu."

Ishita walk to Aditya "Adi"

Aditya wipes his tears "Maa"

Ishita "Maa bhi kahete ho aur aapne aasu bhi chupate."

You call me mother and hid your tears from me

Aditya "Maa"

Ishita creasing his face lovingly "Beta what you did was wrong. But Raman over reacted he should have not shouted and slapped you. You know he loves you a lot."

Aditya "Maa come home I needed you everyone needs you."

Ishita "Beta Raman will not like it."

Aditya "First it was Ruhi now it is Papa you don't love me you don't care for me."

Ishita hugs Aditya "I love you baby but I can't come. I miss you a lot there was never a day when you did not come to my mind I missed you a lot. No one can replace my Adi for me. You come with me Adi there is so much I have talk to you about."

They sit the car.

Vivan "Where is Amma going with him."

Vanshika "Mamu's house where else."

They follow Aditya's car.

Aditya "Maa I know you love papa but 7 years Maa you..."

Ishita "Adi, Mani & I are not married. That day when Ruhi died Raman said a lot of things to me I had also just lost my daughter I was was broken. I tried to commit suicide not once but twice."

Aditya "Maa suicide."

Ishita "I jumped off a cliff but luck was not on my side Mani saved me then I came in front of a running truck Mani again saved I did not have the courage of coming home not only that but while saving for the second time Mani lost his legs he was paralysed so I took care of Nirvan and Aliya for him. Yes they call me Amma so Vanshika and her husband Nuashera and Vivan and his wife Mehr call me."

Aditya was finding it hard to digest Ishita tried to commit suicide left alone twice.

Aditya "Mani Uncle has four children"

Ishita "No they are sister's children Mani him self never got married. Do you know where to go."

Aditya "Maa I came to your house yesterday with Chachu."

Ishita "Romi came there why did you not come home."

Aditya "Chachu had to leave. Maa do you care for them as you would care for you own children."

Ishita "They are like my children I survived last 7 years because of them. Chote & Niru remind me of you Adi."Aditya smiles "You know Nidhi is alive and she got arrested."

Ishita asks "How do you know."

Aditya "I was there in that hotel with Chachu."

Ishita asks "Why were you there."

Aditya "We were following the car you were in Maa."

Ishita "I was absolutely fine Romi & you did not need to worry I was with Chote I mean Vivan."

Ishita "Does Raman know... Romi was with you does Mahiko know... Vandu Akka..."

Aditya cuts in "Maa only Romi Chachu, Mahika Chitti and I know except that Abhi Uncle knows."

Ishita "Adi, did some one say something to you why are looking worried."

Aditya "Maa 7 years you were not here I know you did not marry Mani Uncle as you love Papa a lot but... Aliya, Nirvan, Vanshika, Nuashera and Vivan love you and you love them just like you love own kids... just like you loved Ruhi and me... Maa."

Ishita getting down from the car "Adi we have reached."

Aditya has tear in eyes Does Maa still love me like she did 7 years ago. Or was it that I was Papa's son that why she loved me. They all accepted Maa when she was at he lowest she was broken... they gave her love understand and reason to live without any relationship... If Maa...

Vanshika, Vivan and Mehr are afar but they can hear their coversation

Ishita "Adi what wrong."

Aditya "Maa...(Holds her hand in his.) Promise you would not lie (Put her hand on his head) swear on me Maa I love you... I missed you... Maa you have all Aliya's siblings (Aditya fall on his knees) you love them... They love you... You will not leave me... You love me..(Crying falls on his knees hugs her) Maa... Ishmaa...

Ishita lifts him up "Yes I care for them... They love and care for me. They accepted when I was totally broken... They are my kids and mother always love and care for her kids... But you Adi are why I breathe today no one at can take your place in my heart and my life YOU ARE MY SON NOT JUST RAMAN'S UNDERSTAND. (She hugs him) Never ever think like that Adi you are most important for me my Adi my son. Now let's go up."

They come in Mani's house. Housekeeper (Ravi) opens the door.

Ishita "Adi you go to my first room to the left. (Vanshika, Vivan and Mehr come in from the main entrance behind Ishita and Aditya. Aditya goes to Ishita's room.) Ravi."

Ishita tells him to take out things that she can cook.

Ravi "Madamji I will do it but Sahaab, Vanshika Baby, Nuashera Baba, Baba (Vivan), Mehr Baby, Nirvan Baba, Aliya Baby do not like it all so punjabi."

Ishita "Haa I know it's not for them it's for my Adi. Who just went inside.(Ishita goes inside. Ravi see Vivan he going to say Vivan tells him to keep quiet) Adi."

Aditya "You still have this how."

Ishita "Before leaving for Australia I had come over and taken as much I could how could I not they are all my memories. They can not be replaced by anything. I lost Ruhi I could not lose these memories."

Aditya see bottle of pills "Maa what's this."

Ishita picks it up "Adi it is nothing just some pills. Come sit."

Aditya "Maa why did you meet any then at lest you could have met me."

Ishita "Adi actually I..."

Aditya holding her hand in his "You thought YOUR ADI will also disown like your husband did. You left me because of what Dad not just Ruhi."

Teri baaton mein apni har ik mainuljhan ka hall pa leta tha

Tere hathon ki roti aksa hi bhookh se zyaada kha leta tha

Tera hissa main, tera kissa mainjo sabko sunaati ho tum aaj bhi teri baat chale toh yaad aati ho, yaad aati ho tum

aaj bhi meri, aankh bhare to yaad aati ho, yaad aati ho tum.. Meri Maa.. meri Maa...

Kone ko thaame tere aachal ka be-fikra main so jaata tha

Mere dil mein kya hai tere bina Maakoi samjha hi naa pata tha

Jo ho sang tu na.. to ho jag suna

Pyar itna jataati ho tum

Maa.. O meri Maa.. meri Maa...Meri Maa.. meri Maa.. meri Maa...

Aditya "How could you Maa... (Kissing her hands and hugs her tightly ) You mean a lot to me much more then Papa (wiping her eyes) you are blessing for me Maa (Lie down in her lap. Ishita smiles) You have no clue Maa how much I missed you. I had no one who understands me who could solve my problem. Who would hug me without me saying... There was no one lap I keep head and forget everything and be loved and pampered."

Ravi knocks and comes in "Madamji everything is ready."

Ishita "Keep it. I am coming."

Ravi leaves. Vivan is there.

Vivan "Now Amma will move him to the pillow and go and cook."

Ishita crease Aditya face lovingly. Vivan start walking inside to help her with Aditya. All of a sudden

Aditya screams "Ishmaa no."

Vivan stops shock with the amount of fright he felt in the scream. Vanshika and Mehr come to see.

Ishita "Adi shh! I am right here your Ishimaa is not going to leave you."

Aditya holds on her hand tightly.

Ishita "Did I do something wrong by telling him about that night should I just have told him that saving me Mani got paralysed. (Ishita puts her head back on the bed head rest smiling starts to creasing Aditya face. She closes her eyes every thing Raman said comes back to her. Unaware that she is crying which wakes up Aditya. He see her smiling and then notice that her eyes are also wet. He also notices she has not realised he is awake. He hear her whispering) Raman you are right I am not a good mother."

Vanshika and Mehr pull Vivan out.

Vanshika "Chote stop"

Vivan "Akka, Amma."

Vanshika "You heard Adi's scream."

Mehr "Vivo look at him just his face does it look a 21 year old boy is sleeping."

Vanshika "Chote remember when you got to know about Amma's suicide attempt how you who deals with criminal day in and day would wake up screaming in the middle of the night."

Mehr "It's the 14 years old boy who Amma left here 7 years back who just screamed that just means Amma told him every thing."

Vivan "God Amma will blame her self for his state and say that Raman Kumar Bhalla was right in saying she is a bad mother. I have to talk to Amma now."

Vanshika, Vivan and Mehr go her room again.

Aditya wipes her eyes "Maa you still look so beautiful when you smile. You the best mom. I love you."

Ishita "Adi when did you wake up."

Aditya "I just woke up."

Ishita "Adi freshen up I will cook for you."

Aditya "Maa."

Ishita "I will get you clothes. (Ishita goes to Vivan's room brings packet)(ST) I just wish he likes it and it fits it been so long I have got anything for him."

Vivan "When did Amma get this why was it in my cupboards."

By the time Ishita brigs the clothes Aditya takes the photo of the bottle send it to Mihir with Ishita's address. Mihir calls Aditya

Mihir "Adi what is this."

Aditya "it is some medicine I needed it as soon as possible."

Mihir "Why."

Aditya "Please Mamu send it to the address I needed as soon as possible and do not tell dad. (He wears what Ishita left for him. Goes out) Maa you still remember I love this colour."

Ishita looks at him "It fits. Sit I am just making..."

Aditya cuts in "Aloo ke parathe with achar. And aam panna. I love it."

Ishita puts butter on the parathas and serve it to Aditya. Aditya take a bit it is very hot.

Aditya "Ahh!"

Ishita "Beta have some patience."

Aditya bits again

Ishita stops him "Adi it's hot I will feed you. Come let's sit on the sofa."

Ishita feeds him Aditya eyes fill with tears

Aditya hugs her tightly "Maa never leave me again."

Aditya again lies down on Ishita lap.

Ishita "Beta did Shagun not take care Pihu and you."

Aditya "Maa she can not the way you take you love everyone so much see Aliya only she love you much more then Mani Uncle. Come home Maa. If not the Bhalla house at lest at Patti's ."

Ishita "Beta."

Aditya phone rings and at the same time house bell ring.

Aditya "Amma I forgot my wallet inside I will just get it."

Ravi brings Mahika inside. By that time Aditya comes there lies back down oN Ishita's lap.

Mahika "Akka not fair beta kya milgya aap toh aapne Mahiko to bhul gayi."

Akka not fair got your son you forgot your Mahiko.

Aditya "Chitti emotional blackmail ."

Mahika "Adi do you not have any work still Romi and my marriage has happen."

Aditya "You told Maa."

Ishita "Beta you should go it's a hard wedding after all it is your Chitti's and Chachu's wedding."

Aditya "Maa... Fine I will go just because you are saying."

Outside the door.

Man "Mihir Sir send me."

Aditya "Did you ask the chemist what pills are these."

Man "Yes Adi sir. They are sleeping pills that all he knew."

Aditya "Sleeping pills.(Nirvan is watching this) Maa."

Nirvan "Amma still take sleeping pills and none of know obviously Appa does not care but she promised Anna she will not RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA what else can be the reason NOW I WILL MAKE HIM PAY."

Man " what"

Aditya "nothing"

Aditya Maa takes sleeping pills but why.

Aditya "I will go to the our family doctor and find out."

Aditya leaves to hospital Nirvan follows him.

Inside the house

Mahika "Akka you look sad."

Ishita "Mahiko I am stupid I told Adi about what happened 7 year back."

Mahika "But he knows."

Ishita "No Mahika no one no anything excepting me I tried to commit suicide..."

Mahika "Akka, everyone knows that why we thought you were dead."

Ishita "Twice."

Mahika "Twice."

Meanwhile Aditya reaches the doctor followed by Nirvan.

Aditya "Doctor uncle can you tell me about these pills."

Doctor "These are very strong sleeping pills. This make the person numb others think the patient is sleeping but is awake. It is usually taken by depression patients."

Aditya "Maa"

Doctor ignore and continues "If more then two are taken together it can kill you."

Aditya "What. (Composes himself) Doctor uncle please tell either of the families."

Aditya "Maa... sleeping pills... Depression... This all of because Dad..."

Nirvan overhear this. The doctor inform Mihir. Mihir is shocked and worried but he does not tell Raman.

Precap : New entry

NOTE : COLOUR CODE

Green : Self talk or thinking of chacters

Brown : Translations

Blue : Song : Meri Maa from Yaariya

NEXT : PART 3.2

nice update dear

love it

love adi scene with ishu so much

ishu is in so much pain and shattered completely and also felt her pain

extremely sorry to say

it becoming not interesting and starting is too good but your focus is now changed everything is up on kids and kids love for ishu

like cvs you also held bend to show raman is villan moreover doesn't have any feeling and show him like pure monster

still you doesn't show raman pov and moreover no one is with him i agree he is angry and rude

but story is based on ishra right not raman or ishu lonely

somewhat make ishu get all the love and sympathy from all kids but where is raman fit here ?

one side you prove himself bad husband and another side you make adi against him moreover tried to show him he is also bad father

for me both are ishra are wrong they have to pay for the mistakes

hope you focus on raman too soon

i am confused whether it is ishra story or sympathy towards ishu or kids love for their mom or beast story of raman

sorry to say i disappointed completely

continue soon dear

hope you give what ishra fans want from next update

extremely sorry for negative reply dear

hope you understand me what i tried to say

Lovely update dear

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Lovely update dear

thankyou

Sorry don't know ur name

My name is Kanika...what is yours

Kids r so attached to ishita

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But I want Raman's POV...Why he is behaving like this

Soon

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