SwaSan OS : The One Who Resides In Her Heart

res . unreskirti...🤗 this is the first time a resed before even reading the story... and the whole story is so beautiful. painful at some points but beautiful... 😳

I haven't watched the olvs too because himat nahi hai muj me... i didn't wanted to cry before the episode but tune rula hi diya...😭

how happy he was when came to know that she is back in his life ( not alive... because he knew it already.) that he ignored all the hints, his mind had thrown at him to reduce impact of future heart break.😔

oh god that eye lock between eyes filled with love and eyes filled with fear..( won't go in detail sanskar ke sath mera bhi dil tut gaya). 💔

that sahil oh god how I will see him the actual episode😡 yaha bhi nahi ho raha where I know u had used him minimum...!

anyway I loved the last part where swara find the peace in the arms of sanskar. and proved to everyone to whom she actually belongs too... ❤️ loved the dialogues of ragini that maybe her mind can forget sanskar but her heart will never...! ❤️
I want same thing to happen in the show...its so perfect.🤗

I so wish to see this shade of sanskar in the serial heart broken but determined...!

sorry that i bored u with such a long comment...😊

p.s - beautiful story...once again. loved it 😳 ( and where is the sequel of mtjh?? I m waiting 😉)

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Awesome and Emotional Update Keertu.
Loved how u have penned their first meeting and how Happy was Sanskar wen he came to know abt Swara being alive.
Loved the Determined Sanskar to Woo back gis lady love and bring back her memory which is an important part of her life and free her from fear and pain.
Loved how Swara calmed down wen Sanskar hold her hands.
Superb work dear.
Thanks for the PM.

Loved it. This is exactly I want this story.

so so beautiful keerti...so beautiful...
loved the determined sanskar...nd don't know y but m hoping after fainting...next scene will be this only...
good job love...really loved it

Kirtu ❤️u.It's beautiful. Your idea of first meeting is excellent in comparison with our mahaan cvs. Your sahil and swara is decent so don't be scared about your haddis 😆Write many more - Apudi 😳

Kirti...🤗

Wow...such a beautiful os...olvs already broke my heart but this os made me cry literally...well i am not in general a cry baby...so u can imagine how much this os moved me...well i eagerly want that something like this happen in serial too...otherwise it will be very difficult to watch our heartbroken sanskar😭...and again i am saying it is very wonderful writing piece...😊

Hi dearest Kirti.😊
Awesome OS.👏 And emotional too.😭 Already the OLVs broke my heart and made me sad.😭
But ur OS made me happy.😃 Specially that part where Swara calmed down instantly after Sanskar caught her hands lovingly.😳 Also Ragini's dialogue made me happy that maybe Swara's mind didn't recognize Sanskar and accused him as her 'khooni', but Swara's heart knows that Sanskar is her love of her life.😳 If something like this is shown in the serial, I will be so happy.😃 I can't watch my poor Sanskar suffer like this.😭 But our "Mahan CV's" always plan to torture our SwaSan along with us fans.😭
Anyways, I really loved this OS so much!!!!❤️ And thanks for the pm.😃
With love and lots of hugs!!!!🤗🤗
Aheli.

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Superb os kirti 👏
Seriously it was mind blowing 👏

Sanskar smile before meeting swara was very well written and then the meeting i really felt bad for him and then swara falling in sahil arms 😡

I think we should make sahil as sholay ka thakur so in that case he can never touch swara 🤣
But sanskar breakdown scene was very well written 👏

Then finally that scene ❤️ seriously kirti that scene made me speechless 👏 and swasan are made for each other this scene proves that very well 😳

Overall a lovely os
It was treat to read 😳

P.s- Dekh maine 3 yrs nahi liya unres ke liye 🤣