SwaSan OS : The One Who Resides In Her Heart

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devuu23

@devuu23

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

krituuu 😳 lovely os dr 😃 sanskar holdn swaras hand nd caressing her awww its perfect 👏 osum osum 😳 😳

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Anusha

@Anusha62

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

*AWW kirti ur safe aftr i reading OS,girl u nailed it dear.u expressed each nd every line damn lovely.simply i loved to the core sanskar's monologue..whn he saw her in temple his thought's,his happiness wow amazing!!!
*Whn shomi called sanky to inform abt swara,he didn't think in negative way for not coming to meet him1st,bt he wanna gv suprise to his princess,how much he love her man!!!
*In car sanskar promise to himself,whn swara see him he thought she v'l cum running nd hug him tightly bt no it didn't happn,shockingly he was accused for her murderer nd atlast ended up in sahil arm(god i can't tolerate it,that to infront of sanskar wanna kill CV's for chipku scenes BTW swa_hli),his helplessness whn he saw his life lying unconscious in some1's arm feeling,jealous ,hopeless,confused,fear of losing her,lot many qustn's going in his mind..but still composed himself,then he got to knw she lost beautiful memories of her nd him.the best day in there life.went nd sat beside to support her to assure her..very well writen kirti!!!
*"sanskar is the one who resides in her heart 1000% true",whn she was conscious her mind accused him,bt in unconscious state she can feeling his presence,she feel protective nd not let him go.over all i loved kirti!!!!

Edited by Anusha62 - 9 years ago

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Kirti dear...

It was heart touching...loved it...thanks

Talia

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Hey Kirti

Very nicely visualised and executed. This whole sequence is going to be so painful for SwaSan fans but you managed to still bring out their connect so beautifully it helped deal with the pain. The fainting and the latest to turn obsessive person didn't even matter here as it was all Sanskaar and his overwhelming love and Swara and her heart connect. I really liked how you brought out the mind vs heart battle and showed the heart winning:)

Love,

Shru xoxo

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ZAINAB

@Miss-swasan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

beautifully written dear ..

wish this is how the story would actually go but you know that Cvs have to put some sort of twist in her

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divya2913

@divya2913

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Wow, beautifully written, i wish cvs should give such an episode for swasan fans as a treat, No one can ever never enter swara's heart other than sanskar maheshwari, he is the only one who rules her heart. This OS really calmed down most of the swasan fans raising anger against sahil-swara forced romance. Thank you so much for this OS

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mix_of_emotions

@mix_of_emotions

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Kirti tu fab writer hai.just read it n iam already imagining it on swasan.wish rajabeta can give a scene like this to us.really wish.loved how sahil tried to comein between n sanskar took her swara away.loved how unconscious swara recognize ssnskar voice n touch.oh man u made me full of feels.😭

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pakh

@pakh

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Helee
res . unreskirti...🤗 this is the first time a resed before even reading the story... and the whole story is so beautiful. painful at some points but beautiful... 😳
Helee🤗.thank u for resing even before reading...this much belief on me😲😳😳...glad u liked the story😳

I haven't watched the olvs too because himat nahi hai muj me... i didn't wanted to cry before the episode but tune rula hi diya...😭
Himmat ki baat nahi hai...mere ...paas videos dekhne ke liye accha net nahi hai...u know na😆😆😆...rulane ke baad happy ending bhi thi na😳

how happy he was when came to know that she is back in his life ( not alive... because he knew it already.) that he ignored all the hints, his mind had thrown at him to reduce impact of future heart break.😔
Yeah he know she is alive already so my mistake😆...

oh god that eye lock between eyes filled with love and eyes filled with fear..( won't go in detail sanskar ke sath mera bhi dil tut gaya). 💔
Mine heart too broke...It was just imagination but we are going to watch this eyelock in show too when he will see her with love filled eyes and she will with feary ones😭

that sahil oh god how I will see him the actual episode😡 yaha bhi nahi ho raha where I know u had used him minimum...!
I too hate new ji...everywhere ...thats why tried to use him minimum but cant just ignore na😆...unconditional hatred we have for him😆😆

anyway I loved the last part where swara find the peace in the arms of sanskar. and proved to everyone to whom she actually belongs too... ❤️ loved the dialogues of ragini that maybe her mind can forget sanskar but her heart will never...! ❤️
I want same thing to happen in the show...its so perfect.🤗
Glad u liked last part and this is something I too really want to happen in serial 😳😳

I so wish to see this shade of sanskar in the serial heart broken but determined...!
Me too and hope we will get it ...Sanskar Maheshwari getting back his love in his style😳

sorry that i bored u with such a long comment...😊
Please dont say this...I love long comments...just feel so happy with long comments so keep doing this😆😆

p.s - beautiful story...once again. loved it 😳 ( and where is the sequel of mtjh?? I m waiting 😉)
Thank u once again helee and sequel of mtjh whenever I will get mood of writing next time...will pakka write that😳

Helee again thank u for such a lovely comment...I love long coomments😳😆...glad u liked the OS😳...love u😳

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pakh

@pakh

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: suwas
Loved it. This is exactly I want this story.

Thank u dear😳😳

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pakh

@pakh

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi
so so beautiful keerti...so beautiful...
loved the determined sanskar...nd don't know y but m hoping after fainting...next scene will be this only...
good job love...really loved it

Thank u akku😳...glad u liked it😃...and u know what I too want something like this to show heart to heart connection of our SwaSan😳