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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jhillyarya



I wanted to give it a sad ending but couldn't write Aarti dying scene, The first part drained me totally that i couldn't even think of writing her leaving like that so at last I just finished bringing this climax..

I completely understand how you felt. I don't think I could do it either. 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ksen

beautiful os

thought this was sad os
good aarti found that the reports were changed
thanks for the pm



I hope you are happy that it turned into happy one 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: caller123

Lovely OS with a lovely touch.

I was scared about Aarthi's life. Oh you gave me almost a heart attack.
Lovely one Jhil.



Oh kate di I am sorry for giving you almost heart attack but you are saved now isnt it? 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh Jhilly Jhu I am so happy that you finally shared this OS in the forum. I was sooo emotional when I read it the first time!
imagine thinking you had years to enjoy your love only to be told you were dying? their desperation to make each moment last was so tangible. they were racing against time so they could do enough together before she died yet the thought was devastating for them. yet their love is so profound that each only thought of the other and tried to inject hope in a seemingly hopeless situation. Aarti knew he would need a companion in future, as painful as the thought of that not being her was, she still wrote to that person to ensure she understood her Yashu and gave him the love she could not. Yash on the other hand did not let her wallow in her fears, he made every moment special for her, when reality kicked in he soothed by just holding her.
really this was so heart-wrenching yet it was very beautiful! not to mention cathartic too! ❤️ 🤗 is it any wonder that I love your stories? I think not! well done my VD!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Di awesome os. I smiled when i read the 1st paragraph. My smiled died has i cried bitterly and then i cried and cried the tears of joy because aarya got their happy ending. Tnx 4 the pm Di.

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