New OS:Hum appke hai sanam-epilogue-page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi friends,..
I know many of my stories are pending which i will surely update...I difinitely will not stop/discontinue...but meantime thought of updating one OS...It is based on some of novels i read...

Prologue:
Raman: He is software engineer by profession...he has his short family...all are open minded people...all were jolly going...Raman as you all can guess very handsome guy...In his house all are searching girl for his marriage...He was ready for arranged marriage...but he has particular preference list, which he has given to his parents, which for his parents very difficult to search..His basic demand is: He dont see if girl family is rich/poor, he want traditional, cultured indian beuty, he does not like modern looks...He want typical indian house wife..she need not be highly qualified...she should be innocent beuty..,,so whomever his parents show him he didnt find anyone attractive../his dream girl...

Finally one of his parents relatives suggested one of their friend who stays in some village,she is beutiful, but she is not educated well, also poor family..They have send girls photo...& Raman on seing the photo just told his parents that he is ready to give money for wedding arrangements as they are poor, but he want this girl..who is none other than ishita..Raman saw that all his demands are there in this girl...she had braided her hair, which is very lengthy & thick one...she has beutiful eyes like fish...Nose is very sharp...her smile is so innocent..she wore traditional saree & big bindi, nose ring etc in the photo, which really impressed raman...

So they desided to go to village to see the girl on the weekend,& raman was very exited& he was preparing himself from the starting day of the week...Finally the day came& raman& his family arrived at the village..village was very small& nothing was there in the village...but all those things does not matter to him...ishitas family welcomed them...Her father& mother looked like typical village type people...they were chewing the paan& raman was eagerly waiting for his girls entry:)

I am planning to complete it is one shot...then may be based on comments i receive i might give epilogue as well..Let me know your thought on this whether i should continue this concept...:)


story completed page 4
epilogue-page 9
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svati12 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its nyc continue soon..
wiating...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Different concept Pari
Interesting
Continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Nice prologue
Gaon ki chori
Sheer ki munda
Interesting
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very different story
Continue soon nd do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very interesting and a thoughtful prologue. update soon can't wait.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting
Nice
Continue Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yes, yes please continue - sounds intriguing!!!
I have a feeling that there is going to be some sort of a twist with Ishita's entry...!??!?!?!?!?

Thank you so much for the pm
Looking forward to the update soon please!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice and interesting prologue
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update... eagerly waiting for next part...post it soon...thank you for the pm...sorry for the late comment(holding ears)...

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