Short Story: When and Man Loves a Woman - Page 6

Neetusxm - awesome story sabs...loved it totally... yaar i am running out words to put ur writing in praises... u are so good..and i mean it from all my heart...the poem was fantastic... amazingly written...

neetu yaar, tu badi hi sweet hain aur tere comments hamesha teri tarah hi sweet aur encouraging hain..........thanks hun, happy to entertain u with my bakwaas😛 don't worry about running out of words or praises, tum jaisi ho ekdum sahi ho...it's only words afterall and i read well between the lines, toh lage raho 😆

hope there are more from where that came from 😳 ..i know i know being a bit greedy...but its all ur fault 😉

yeah there are a lot more...........college main bahut likha tha......will post them slowly slowly 😆

Shurtichopra, Mistletoe - So glad u liked the story, thanks for the lovely comments, truly appreciate them.

Arre I am super duper late for reading.......but loved the way the story turned out to be. It was funny to relate some of the things, dialogues or events from "sunshine". The reactions of Bani and the condition of poor Jay and specially the complicated status of their 25 years of marriage where work dominated or love, is questionable. The best part was the laminated tickets..I only have one single question....all said and done - Love is not affected by age (I am mentioning that since they were supposed to celebrate their 25th marriage anniversary and even had a sweet grand daughter) but how were they supposed to "Run away to paradise"? Both of them take Dabur Chyawanprash or what??? Jokes apart..the last few lines which Jay said to Bani were so beautiful...Thank you for the smiles... 😃

Saby,

Beautiful story 👏 👏 👏

He missed his 25th Anniversary 😡 ...main hoti toh directly murder hi kar deti uska 😡 😡 😡

neglectful, chauvinistic, macho jerk 😆 😆 😆 fantastic description 😆 😆 😆 (Well he desrved every bit of it...maybe more 😉 )

Not that Bani kuch kam thi...kitna sata rahi thi bechaare ko(Ok I am always allowed to take his side... no matter what 😳 😳 😳 ... my love for him can forgive anything 😳 )

The wooing of a wife by her husband... very well written 👏 👏 👏
Kanjoos JW ne aakhir apni pyaari biwi ko pata hi liya 😆 ... roses mai kanjoosi kar raha tha...this was just too much 😡

But the laminated tickets...so that she couldn't douse them with water or shred them to bits...that took the cake 😆 😆 😆
JW's relationship with his sister... that was fantastic 😳 ..Behne aisi hi hoti hain... useless and duh type ke bhai ke liye bhi kuch bhi karti hain...all they need is a lil incentive 😆

Loved the story 👏

Poo

awwwwwwww that was a real cute story 👏 ......hw can anyone forget his 25th anniv?? such duhhhhh jai is in this story......he deserved to be hanged by bani but she forgave him....chalo koi baat nahi maybe u'll write another prt on their 50th anniv and kill him for forgettin it hehehehe......but luved d way bani punished him for his crime 😆 😆......hmmmm i was wondering smthin did he really quit his company for her as he promised??? 😕 😕 ......i know u finished off this SS but can we have another prt which tells us whether he kept his promise and whether bani kept him at his promise plzzzzzz can u?? will u???? 😛

Hey Sabsj,
Loved this one. Damn sweet and romantic. Couldnt believe she waited 25 yrs to teach him this lesson though 😉

Sabs dear,
I haven't seen this before...It was a cute n romantic story... 👏 👏 ...loved it...it's a treat reading ur stories...plz,plz,plz..........continue writing dear...

luv,
Ammu.