swasan ss: love me forever part:3 updated

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii frnds this is my first writing on swasan hope u all like it

Note:I am not a good writer like all of you pls if you do not like it tell me so that I can improve


PART:1

My story goes from rajat kidnapping swara while sanskar follows them on the cliff sanskar point gun towards and says rajat meri swara ko chod doh nahi toh mei tumhe jinda nahi chodenge

Rajat holding her hair tightly says sanskar mei isse chodunga nahi iski wajah se meri plan karab hogayi and tightens his grip on her making her yell in pain

Seeing her tears sanskar feels miserable and says usse chod doh agar tum chahe hoh mujhe maar doh pls meri swara ko kuch mat karo

Seeing him in helpless condition rajat smiles saying marna toh tum dono ka hain issilye batao phehle kaun marna chahta hain

Swara seeing her love life is in danger shouts sanskar jao yaha se nahi toh yeh tumhe bhi maar denge while tears were flowing from her eyes

Listening to her he says just shut up swara tum kya chahte hoh ki mei tumhe iss insan ke saath chod ke apni pran bachalu isse acha hotaa hain ki mei appni jaan de duh tumhe pata hain Na tumhare bina meri koi wajood nahi kyunki iss sanskar ki Puri sansar tum hoh swara

Listening his confession she gets that no matter what he won't leave her and decides to encourage him and says shoot him sanskar while he sees at her shocked and continues chinta mat karo kuch nahi hoga mujhe kyunki tum mujhe kuch hone hi nahi dogi aur hamne jindagi bar saath rehne ki wada kiya aur hum apna wada jarur pura karenge

Sanskar looking at her triger the gun and shoots rajat but that happiness doesn't last long as he takes her with him off the cliff while she shouts I love you sanskar nd falls inside River

Looking at his life slipping in front him he collapses there.at night remembering everything he wakes up thinking it to be a dream but reality strucks him that it is indeed his truthful nightmare

He comes down only to see his broken family and inspector telling something,seeing him inspector says humne Mrs swara sanskar maheshwari ko dundhne ki Puri koshish ki lekin woh hame nahi mili and handovers him the SS pendent

Looking at this he remembers there precious moments and breakdown shouting her name swara...while clutching it to his heart

Somewhere listening to his voice the person opens her eyes and look the surroundings and an sees unfamiliar surroundings but due to pain slips into unconscious

it almost a week for that incident to happen as it shook entire maheshwari world one side they have lost their swara who is everything to them and otherside sanskar who is living like a dead person lost in her memories

seeing him they ask laksh to take him from home as he may feel better and start journey towards hoogly outskirts of kolkata its almost evening when they reached sahil sen gupta house for their work

standing in front the house sanskar feels something strange in his heat and thinks kya horaha hain mujhe aisa kyu lag rahi ki swara yehi pass hain mere garib and holds the pendant tightly

they move towards the door and rings the bell and both of them stood shocking seeing her their swara alive infront of them

sanskar moves towards her to touch asking swara tum zindha hoh mujhe pata tha ki tum mujhe chod kar nahi jaougii

seeing him swara moves back making both of them shock with her behaviour and asks kaun hoh tum dono with fear in her eyes

sanskar tries to touch her to talk while she pushes him saying dur raho tum mujhse tumhe ne mujhe maar ne ki koshish ki with voice shaking due to fear

listening to her accustion sanskar world stops but come to reality seeing her losing sense and catches in his arms before she falls down

he gently lays her in his lap and tries to wake her up meanwhile sahil comes listening to commotion and sees her fainting he tries to take her in him arms but neither sanskar is leaving her nor swara who hold his shirt tightly

seeing them sahil burns in jealously while laksh shooks his brother,coming into sense seeing her palebody in his arms he gently lays her on bed letting go of her hold while others look on

turning towards sahil he asks furiously swara tumhe kaha mili aur woh humdono ajnabi ki tarha kyu dekh rahi thi

sahil looking them replies look app yaha kis kaam keliye woh baat kijiye aur jaha tak ki iss ladiki ki baath woh mei tumhe batana jaarori nahi samaj tha

seeing his audicity sanskar tries to grab his collar but laksh stops him saying bhai jadaga math kijiye relaxing himself he replies dekho jayda hoshiyar mat banao woh meri patni hain mrs swara sanskar maheshwari samjhe dur raho usse ab mei jaa rahi huh lekin phir wapas auvngi and moves from there

they come out of the house while laksh says bhai yeh sab kya horahe hain swara zinda hain lekin woh humdono ko kyu nahi pehchan rahi

sanskar looking at him replies natak karrahi thi woh and looks towards the house while swara opening her eyes sees around to find him and feeling loss of warmth her eyes become mist then she sees the pendent in her hands

holding it tightly she says maaf kardo mujhe sanskar and kisses it while sanskar feels her words



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
Keep it up 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What??
Swara is acting..but y??
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
I think sahil ne swara ko dhamki di hai that's why she's behaving strange. ...
Feeling bad for sanky... 😭 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART:2

a confused laksh asks bhai yeh tu inti yakeen ke saath kaise kehsakti hoh,listening to him sanskaar with full of love in his voice says pyaar kartha huh usse,uski ankhe joh mujhe dekhte ki chamak rahi thi tab hih mujhe pata chala ki woh meri swara hain lekin sawal yeh hain ki woh kyu mere paas ana nahi chahti kiski dar se mujhe apne aap se dur kardiya with confusion

remembering something he turns towards laksh asking lucky ragini ko phone karke yaha ane keliye kaho mujhe iss sahil teekh nahi lagrahe agar woh swara ko jante tu toh iss vishay mei ragini hamari kaam ayegi looking at his brother lucky goes to call ragini

sanskaar looks at the door remebering their special moments gets lost into it,meanwhile swaralooking at the locket says mei bahut khush huh tumhe dekhar lekin maaf kardo meri iss galti ki meine apne hih pyaar par khoon ka ilzaam lagaya and cries remembering sanskaar shocked hurt face

Kho gaya, gum ho gaya
Waqt se churaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
Ho tera, woh mera
Saath nibhaaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..

both of them remembers their moments together like their mission,firstsucess,sanskaar confession,their marriage,his anger on her,swara confession,their proposal date,midnight talkes etc and tears come out of their eyes

Aisa bhi kya milna, saath hoke tanha
Aisi kyun sazaa humne hai paayi, Ranjhana ve
Phir se mujhe jeena, tujhpe hai marna
Phir se dil ne di hai ye duhaai, Saajnaa ve
Laqeeron pe likh di kyun judaai..

they remember of her falling from cliff shouting for her love,he madly searching for her in the river their lonliness for eachother etc

Gair sa hua khud se bhi, na koi mera
Dard se karle chal yaari, dil ye keh raha
Kholun jo baahein, bas gham ye simat rahe hain
Aankhon ke aage lamhe ye kyun ghat rahe hain
Jaane kaise koi sehta Judaaiyaan

they again remember their meeting in the moring, turn of events of her accusing him to be a murderer while fresh tears come out of their eyes and thinks itna pass hokar bhi ek dusre ke dur rehna bahut dard dehta hain

she comes out of her trance listening to footsteps and anger rushes through her body seeing the person infront of her while the person smricks seeing her and dangerously move towards her,catching her face in his palms he says apni ashiq ko dekhkar purane pal agayi kya

while forcefully comes out of his grip saying usske saath jude huye unn khubsurat palon ko yaad karne keliye mujhe usko dekhne ki jarurat nahi kyunki sanskaar meri atma se jude huye hain joh tum kabhi nahi samjogi kyunki tumhe toh pyaar ka matlab bhi nahi pata looking towards him with anger

listening to her he shouts mujhe nahi pata pyaar ka matlab issiliye inn dosaalon mein pagalonki tarah dudh rahe te aur jab tum mujhe mila kisi aur ki ban chuki meine tumhe hamesha pyaar kiya lekin tumne kisi aur se shaadi ki kya farak hain meri aur uski pyaar mei batao

she camly replies tumhari aur sanskaar ki pyaar mei bahut farak hain tum pyaar ko hasil karna chahta huh lekin meri sanskaar ki pyaar aise hain ki woh khud dard jhel sakthe lekin meri ankhon mei assu nahi ane denge tumhe pata hain woh phele mujhe barbaad karne aye lekin meri ache dost bangayi aur woh mujhe pyaar karne lage lekin kabhi usne apne pati hone hak mujh par nahi dala usski uss masoom prem dekhakar mujhe bhi pyaar hogaya aur hum ek huye,aaj bhi woh apni khushi se bhi jaya merri khushi ke liye sochte

atlast she says tum mujhse pyaar nahi karthe hoh woh keval ek obsession hain pyaar woh hain joh meri pati mujhse karthe hain listening to this sahil loses his control and slaps her hardly,she fallsdown shouting sanskaar name

here sanskaar opens his eyes listening to her voice rushes inside the house while lucky follows him,when they reach there they see sahil pleading swara and gets more shocked seeing her catching knife

sanskaar gets panik seeing her in that state anger rushes in his blood and grabs sahil asking kya kiya tumne uske saath aur sar par chat kaisi lagi batao while laksh releases his hold catching sanskaar

woh girgayi aur uske sar par chot lagi jab meine dressing karne keliye uski aur jarahe the woh mujhe push karke knife pakadliya he says seeing her

looking at her sanskaar asks swara dekho knife niche rako agar tumhe lag gayi toh with slow composure he moves forward

seeing him coming forward wahi ruk jao tumsab koi mere pass mat anna agar agayi toh meine apna haath katlungi saying she shows knife towards them

sanskaar gets frusted listening to her looking at laksh he says lucky call the doctor and turns towards swara three of them manfoys her to drop the knife

swara seeing them thinks sorry sanskaar mei uss insaan ko mujhe chune se rokh ne keliye yeh kadam utaya lekin abb jab tum yaha hoh toh mujhe kuch nahi hoga plss mujhe sambal hoh and looks at him

sanskaar looking at her understand the unspoken words who by now loses her consious and falls in a stong pair of arms which belongs to him,he gently lifts her placing on the bed he sits beside her and careses her face lovingly while one look with admiration other look with pure jealosy and hatred towards them

meanwhile doctor comes and after dressing her wound and checks after checking a smile with worry appears on his face seeing it sanskaar frowns asking dr kya huwa meri swara ko

doctor asks aap kaun aur iss ladiki se apka rishta kya hain,while he replies mein sanskaar maheshwari aur yeh meri patni hain abb toh bata dijiye kya huwa meri patni koh and sees the sleeping form of swara

doctor smiling at him says shaanth hojaye mr.maheshwari chinta ki koi baat nahi apki patni bilkul teek hain aur infact apko khush hona chahiye while sanskaar looks on confusdely he continues with smile congratulations apki patni pregnant hain

listening to him various emotions goes through him and a big smile appears on his face & looks at his princess face who is sleeping camly and kisses her forehead

lekin uski bahut khyal rakhna hain apko while he looks at him doctor continues woh bahut sensitive condition mei hain koi bhi chut hogayi toh apki patni aur honewale bache keliye teekh nahi hoga saying he leaves

even the three moves from the room but sanskaar before going bends towards her stomach and kissing there gently he says aap chinta mat karo apki papa bahut jald apko aur apki mumma ko yaha se lekar jayengi lekin baby tabtak aap apna aur mumma ka khyal rakhna and also kisses her forehead and moves out while someone burns in jealousy seeing them

after coming out sahil turning towards them asks tundono yaha kyu aye hoh with pure hatred,laksh moves forward to give him peaceof mind sanskaar stops him and says sahil woh meri locket yaha girgayi jab hum yaha ayi usse dundh ne keliye andar agayi lekin yeh sab kuch huwa and moving in front of him he says lekin ek baat yaad rakhna agar tumhari wajah se meri swara par ek karoch bhi ayi toh tumhe mujhse koi nahi bachasakthe yeh sanskaar maheshwari ki wada hain and looks straightly in his eyes warning him and moves out

after their exit he says ab mujhe jaldi hih kuch karna hoga and smricks thinking something

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey!

Interesting plot. I loved the way you shaped up the story. So Swara is pretending. And she is pregnant. My poor SwaSan! I'm so looking forward to see Sanskar fighting back to get his Swara. Arghh! Sahil! 😡 He's completely a villain here. A total obsessive lover. I'm hating him already.

Please do continue soon. I'm eager to read more. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sow amazing update and nice twist. ..
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Read the 2 parts in one go. Wow.. amazing updates dear.. 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you all for ur views...
ur support means so much to me😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry making you all wait
i have read all your comments and thank very much
sorry that i coulnt reply to ur comments😭
thank you all who liked and commented 😊

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