Power of True Love...3 shot..1st shot.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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The story starts in a hospital.A girl is lying in the hospital bed .She is having oxygen mask,some stitches etc.Her eyes are open,but still there is no emotion in her face.A guy is sitting beside her and is crying like a child.He is shaking the girl and asking her to open her eyes.But she is not responding at all.He cries loudly. Doctor enters the room. Guy:Doctor,what happened to her?Why she is not responding? Doctor:She is in a comma. Boy:What?? Doctor:Yes..but dont lose hope.Keep the faith that she will come back to her life. Guy:But when doctor??(!crying) Doctor:Maybe within an hour,with day,within a week,within a month,within an year..can't say anything...keep trying to make her happy. Doctor leaves. The guy cries.. He thinks:No no..i should not cry in front of her,..i should make her happy.He wipes his tears..!But what can i do to make her happy.? He goes to her and sits beside her. He controls his emotion and smiles in front of her. Guy:Sumo...dont do this yaar..come,lets go for a long drive..come on wake up..you love long drives na..come.. She doesnt react.The guy gets disappointed and he was about to cry..but he controls his emotions .He again smiles at her and said:Sumo..i have a very good news for you..I bought your old house in your name. No change in her ..the same blank expression itself.The guy is weeping inside still he controls himself. Guy:ok fine..you dont trust me na??Look here is its documents..Look. (No reaction in sumo's face.) Now he couldnt control himself and he burst out . The guy is crying loudly and shouts Guy:Sumo..wake up and look at this..sumo..He is shaking her..sumo... The doctor comes to him and stops him saying:Shravan..you should control your sadness in front of her and should make her happy else she will never.. Shravan broke doctor's words and said:No doctor..i will make her happy..i will bring my old sumo back at any cost..I will do anything for it.

That's the end of first shot.. So guys,what do you think.. Will shravan get his old sumo back?? How did sumo came to this comma stage?How will she come back to her life??

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really interesting
Good one
Please continue asap
I am curious to know how she came to this stage
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks alot yaar...i will post next part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is amazing
Excited to know what next
Update it ASAP
like right now...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's superb n really different plot. Plzzz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .shivi396

This is amazing
Excited to know what next
Update it ASAP
like right now...


Thankyou so much ...I will update soon..Today itself.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapphire3

It's superb n really different plot. Plzzz update soon


Thankyou so much ...will post asap..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I like it!
Sounds intriguing ..
Continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing start
need to read more
please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting. Wanna know what caused Suman's condition. Update soon x

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