Ishra OS: Hey....Are You Feeling Okay?

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here's another OS of mine based on a song I am in love with these days...

The story is based on the scene shown in the song itself.
It will be an emotional one.

The song is called Fursat by Arjun Kanungo

Hey...Are You Feeling Okay?

As the morning's rays fell on Raman's face,he stirred in his sleep and slowly opened his eyes to his favourite view,Ishita in his arms sleeping peacefully after their late night love session.

He tucked the lone hair strand which obstructed his view of her face.
She only snuggled into him more.

He only admired her as her face glowed of his love more in the sun's rays.

Then slowly he slid off and wore his nightshirt and went to take the mails from the mail box.

The 1st thing that caught his eye was the letter from the Army which when he immediately opened stated Termination of Leave.

His face lost colour.It had only been a few days since they were together and now it had come upto an abrupt end.

He kept it aside and went back to back to bed and hugged from the back and slept again.

Soon Ishita woke up and drew open the curtains.
She tried to wake him up.
She was about to go when he pulled her back making her land on him.

Dheere ke khinchon
Tum inn pardon ko


I-So you weren't sleeping huh..

R-Who wants to sleep when you are there as he rolled her over

I-Raman...no...not now pls
Its already late.

Saying so she wriggled out and saw the Army costume kept out.

She looked towards him.

She went and saw the letter which stated that due to an emergency all the officers had to return back to the camp within the next 3 days.

She looked at him.

He tried not to look at her.

She picked up the uniform and put it back in her cupboard.

But he got up and put it back out and helped her clean the place.

Ungli na fanse
Thoda sambhal ke taala lagana
Jo niklo ghar se


R-Lets go for a bike ride and them to my favourite place.

She just looked up to him.

R-Why are you wasting my time...hurry up
I have more important work at night.

As he winked at her and went to get ready all the while keeping up a smile somehow.

I-I know you very well Raman...You don't think I will understand your true feelings.
But I will make it upto in this 2 days.

They both got ready.
The bike ride was a silent one as Ishita snaked her hands around his waist wanting to spend every moment in the best way possible with him.

They went to the beach as they walked along the coast hand in hand with Ishita resting her head on his shoulder.

Keh paaunga main
Abse na tumse ye kabhi
Samjhaunga main
Kaise jaane kaise khud ko bhi


They had a romantic candlelight dinner by the sea.

The ride back was much more cheerful as they kept cracking jokes and pulling each other's legs to cheer each other up

Fursat jo mile khudse
Tu apni khabar lena
Fursat jo mile khudse ho...


Next morning...a late one again as they caught up on their lost sleep

Ishita went to the kitchen.
I-Raman...aap...wait na
I will get the breakfast in sometime.

R-No madam...I am there
Will help you

I-If you help...we will never get breakfast until evening.

R-That will be taken care of but come now we will make a proper one jaldi then we will have a nice session.

Hasrat ki hatheli pe
Mere do pal rakh lena
Fursat ke usi pal mein
Kabhi kabhi ye keh dena


I-In the day also

R-Oh ho..desperate jaan
I am talking about a painting session.
But I don't mind the other also.

I-No no its OK

They spent sometime cooking and then had a lovely breakfast then had a lovely painting session in their backyard as they played around with the colours.
After a late lunch they were going through their photo albums reminiscing their moments together.

In the evening it was back to joint cooking after they spent sometime by a lakeside with no words being spoken as they enjoyed the moments in each other's embrace.

Heya, hey are you feeling okay?
Heya, hey are you feeling okay?

Hmmm.. o...

Aani jaani, haan ye kahani
Ho na jaaye
Kho na jaaun, main kahin tu
Kho na jaaye


At home in their room,
R-Why so soon...I wish the leave was prolonged.


I-It happens Raman...part and parcel of life.
Think like this the sooner one goes the sooner one returns.

R-You are the best thing to have happened to me Ishita.
I am blessed to have you in my life...so caring and understanding.

I-Bas now no emotional talk

R-Now only actions...right wifey

As he pulled her close and their lips met.
The kiss full of desire passion and urgency.

Sang mere hongi
Teri meri, meri teri yaadein
Khudse kar lunga
Teri bas teri sau baatein


She wound her hands around his neck and pulled him more closer and slowly started playing with his hair.

He then started dropping kisses on her jawline and crook of her neck as he nibbled her earlobe making her moan.

He kissed her shoulders as he slid off her silk night gown while she made him free off his shirt.

He continued dropping kisses while her hands roamed on his back.

Their passionate love encounter well into the night as they became one all over again.
Exhausted they snuggled and slept into the silence of the night as the moon continued to shine in all its glory with the stars in its company.

Fursat jo mile khudse
Tu apni khabar lena
Fursat jo mile khudse
Kabhi kabhi ye keh dena

Heya, hey are you feeling okay?
Heya, hey are you feeling okay?


The next morning,Ishita opened her eyes to an empty bed as he was not there.

She woke up hurriedly and checked the bedroom and the washroom.
Not finding him there she checked the balcony and the backyard.

She checked the kitchen to see the breakfast ready.

She went and checked the hall where she saw him sitting.

He was setting the uniform set and attached the name plate to it and caressed it.

Ishita went upto him and hugged him from behind as the reality set in and the day for the departure had finally arrived.

Naa raha baana
Naa koi hai wajah
Par tu phir milegi
Aayegi woh subah


The bags were all ready and set go be taken and the moment arrived as Raman made her wear her army uniform cap.

Ishita stood in front of him in the Army attire as he wiped off the tear which threatened to fall.

She hugged him tightly leaving no space for air to pass as he hugged her back tightly.

They stood in the same position for some time as the time stood still and they took in each other and felt each other for the one last time before she left and would come back the next time.

Then slowly she pulled apart with Raman kissing her temple and she looked into his eyes and took his hand and kissed it.

She then took her bags and left for her duty to serve her Nation as Raman looked on proudly.

Fursat jo mile khud se
Tu apni khabar lena
Fursat jo mile khud se ho...

Hasrat ki hatheli pe
Mere do pal rakh lena
Fursat ke usi pal mein
Kabhi kabhi ye keh dena

Heya, hey are you feeling okay?
Heya, hey are you feeling okay?
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How was it?

Pls drop in your views below and do press the like button.

No offence intended to any gender or profession.

Have no idea how it turned out

For those who want to hear the song,here it is..
I would highly recommend it.

Edited by traveller_girl - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heart wrenching os... 😭
Beautifully written.. N yeah der shud b no gender problem wen it comes to a profession...
Awesome 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice story Hetvi so it was ishita who was in army and their time spent together before going for her duty it was lovely short and sweer
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ts awsm hetvi..
So emotional...
Ishita is a army officer..
Raman is proud of her..
Loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing OS.😊
Ishita is in Army,it was so Interesting.😊
Ishra Spending time with each other was so Lovely.😊
The Whole Part was so Beautifully Explained.😊
Please write like this.
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one dear 😛
Lloved it loads 😛
Beautifully written 👏
Thanks for ppm 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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One of my favorite songs. Loved the os.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful
Everyone would have thought raman was in army
But ishita was
Awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The song in awesome dear..
Well written..
Loved it..
Nd emotional too..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Uff hetvi
It's so good
Heart wrenching
Beautiful song
Loved it totally
Ishita is in army
Raman is so proud of her

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