Sooooo not like Santoshi but .....

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Riya's revelation happens.Dhairya broken.Riya out of Mishra house.Pratap slaps Dhairya.Everyone gets shocked.Madhu says Pratap.Pratap says no not today.Pratap tells Dhairya's truth.Santoshi gets shocked.Pratap says I feel ashamed to call you my brother.Santoshi runs to her room.She locks herself.She cries infront of Santoshi Maa's photo.Kaki-Kaki knocks at her door but she dosent open.She remembers something & calls DSP (the same police inspector who helped her in Bitto's case).She asks his help.Dhairya in his room recalls Riya & Santoshi behaviour towards him.Madhu comes to talk to him but he asks her to leave him alone.Santoshi avoids everyone.She writes a letter for kaka-kaki.She goes to her house without telling anyone.Kaki-kai gets her letter & is sad.Kaka says good that she left that devil.He says I didnt think Dhairya could stoop so low. Santo in her house tells half truth to Dadi. She says Dhairya is not accepting her & she will go somwhere but for few days will stay there.Her family comes & ask why are you here? .Santo says I was missing dadi.I will stay here for few days.Daskha Madhuri says ok but you have to do all the household work like earlier.Santo agrees. Dhairya gets restless day by day in Mishra House.Santo comes after few days to Mishra house.Dhairya sees her & tries to talk to her.Santo says not a single word in a loud tone.Today I will speak & you will listen.Everyone comes there. She takes her mangalsutra & throws it at Dhairya's face.Everone gets shocked.Madhu tries to say something.Pratap asks her not to say anything.Santo says I was ready to give even my life for you & you did all this.She says you only told that day if marriage happens with vermilon(sindoor) then it breaks with divorce.Dhairya has blank look on his face.Santo says now you can fulfill your wish.She throws the divorce papers at his face.She shows the sindoor box & opens it.This bonded us... part 2 SAU DARD HAI link - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4632401
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey friends if you find it full of crap its ok but if you like it even 1 percent then I will post part 2.I need few members to either comment yes or like then only I will post part 2.Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Symar ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— Wow ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Pratap slapped Dhairya ๐Ÿฅณ
Santoshi wants divorce good Dhairya deserves it ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SymphonyStar

Hey friends if you find it full of crap its ok but if you like it even 1 percent then I will post part 2.I need few members to either comment yes or like then only I will post part 2.Thanks


No no Symar ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...it's superb, fantastic and mind blowing ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿ‘

You are asking for 1% ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ...I love it 101% ๐Ÿ˜ณ โค๏ธ
Please continue ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You know what Symar...jaise hi maine topic read karna start kiya mujhe laga koi naya spoiler hai ๐Ÿ˜† ...I was so much involved in the story that I eagerly wanted to finish it and ask for link ๐Ÿ˜ณ

But in the end, I got realize that it's your story ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Very well written ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ...waiting for next part ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love the part where Dhairya comparing Riya and Santoshi's behavior towards him

Pratap is the main hero of your story ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Symar - This was wonderful. Please update soon. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I wish Santoshi was even half as strong on the show I would love it. She really needs show Dhairya his place.

If I wrote an OS right now, he would be dead ๐Ÿ˜ก
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Next part kab tak update karogi ๐Ÿ˜ณ

I know...I know my demands are increasing day by day ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜†
But I can't help it ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜†
Sairya โค๏ธ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm enjoying separation of Sairya ๐Ÿ˜ˆ ๐Ÿ˜†
Especially Dhairya's restlessness...Confused Dhakkan ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Katori

Symar - This was wonderful. Please update soon. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

I wish Santoshi was even half as strong on the show I would love it. She really needs show Dhairya his place.

If I wrote an OS right now, he would be dead๐Ÿ˜ก


You're right Katori ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ Santoshi should have to be strong

I'm all set for OS Katori ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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