Akdha os /\ Am i right or Am i right /\

i liked it 😃 its so bold and well written

Originally posted by: lolo91

i liked it 😃 its so bold and well written

i didnt imagine to read such idea before

i wished to read more on jj love but i guess that is not the point of the os

hated this surya ..you know you can turn this to ss i would be very interested to read what is written in the diary as it happens

Originally posted by: lolo91

hey its me first 😊

wounderful os jodha is correct but one think she wants to do jodha surya and familiko jail bejunatha woh sub uski property he parents ki kamyi he ussne sub wabus lenatha thab un logoko malum hoga jail ke peeche kaise rehathahe life.

dear I can not see in hurry yes you did this thank you giving some more para about jj its very nice to read.

nice update dear
and very true reality of our society and you write so well dear and I love it and I so love the ending because I love happy ending. thanks for PM

Dii 😊
I'm on a reading spree today 😆
Now coming to this OS..
How do you do it? No.. answer me seriously :)
Such a serious issue, and you wrote it in so few words :)
marvelous one di :)
feeling short of adjectives right now 😆
But seriously, people like Surya do exist in this society.. bitter seed coated with sugar 😡
The bitterness coming to the front as the sweetness passes away :)
But always gems like Jalal aren't available to remove the bitterness..
In this case.. Jodha is lucky.. she got him :)
A short note from the bride before the starting of a new life. A note removing the bitter taste that Surya left on her life :)
Loved it di :)
Do write more soon :)
Waiting to read more from you :)

P.S I'm commenting after sooo many days 😔
P.P.S I've a serious question.. Before marriage, girls are said to be residing in their "mayka" or father's house and after marriage they stay in their "sasural" or father in law's house.. Which one is their own? Can't we stay in our own house? Why it has to be said as father's or father in law's? That do not happen for the boys. So why for us? 😡

Avika you bring out very touchy topic. Awesomely write up in detail. hard reality of some girls life and agly face of society. The danva of dowary still alive in some part. At last she fight with him and who snatch her write by told her leave my home and insult her sacrifices serve him best and become a strong enough to move on and get her true love . At the end you make this painful incident a hopeful occasion. 👏 loved it .

very gud concept. and well written. thanks for the pm dear.