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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

fantastic os avi

some woman faces this type of prob

jo is so bold n fearless

jalal made her believe in love once again

awesome

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nikki

@natashathakur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Superb update dr n thnxx for pm

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mickeymini

@mickeymini

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Wonderful Akka 👏
His demands baap re baap
There is no end to those 😡
Ok finally she retorted back him nicely
To which she has to face physical abuse
Finally she took a wonderful decision to divorcee him and lead an independent life 👏
I thought Akka u ll show more about jalal-jodha relationship
But ok it's an OS
A treat for us on pari's bday
Thanks for this 😃 😃

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Awesome update sis 😃

You have written very well

Jo did right by sending her so called husband to jail 😆 Shabash HUG Avika SIS 🤗

She did what ever he told her to do but He's so bad 😡 I hate him thanks for pm

Edited by sorathsheikh - 9 years ago

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kartikaJA

@kartikaJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

woo awesome update
finally jodha take decision
and left Surya
she show her that girls are not week

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swriter

@swriter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Wonderful is di but now I want some more in this is plzzz
Can u write second part in this is plzzz for me di.
I m waiting for it di. 😃

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priya

@sweety992

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Ofcourse jodha did right dear
Thanku dr

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Titus

@Akdhalover6

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Amazing os dear
You see us harsh reality of our indian system if you have to marry your daughter you should have to give money and expensive gifts in name of "shagun".
Aur kuchh ladke vale to itne muhphatt hote hai ki apni demands khud hi mang lenge voh bhi bina zijag.
And jodha did well to put her husband behind the bars...for it she deserve "roadies salute" (because she does a work like a roadi)
and i loved that it's a happy ending.

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sunitha

@sonnet87

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

wow such an awesome one shot Avika 👏 really an inspiring one for all da girls, who should learn to take action against any kind of violence on them.

today I read payal's os also nd that nd urs give insight to all girls' feelings nd their expectations in marriages. I loved both as these give reality check on our condition in patriarchal society.

the most I loved is it ends in positive way. we girls should mould our future ourselves, eventhough we fail at first attempt should not give in finding our real happiness just like jo did here😉

Thank u for da pm dear😊

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Titus

@Akdhalover6

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: avika444

Hey hala thanks a lot for commenting dear
Didnt expect ur comment hear but yayy u did
Hmm yes this isnt an jajo os , its about a girl and her family who had to go through lots of pain and anguish becoz of the stupid dowry system in India .
I dont whether its applicable in ur country or not but in india yess girls usually have to go through the points i wrote in this os .
I just want to show the harsh but truth reality of indian society who claims to be modern but still they r sick in their minds .

Os to ss hahaha
I cant do it re
Anyways thanks for reading

avika di u should have to think on idea given by hala di...this is awesome concept and i know you are capable of write ss on this