NEW ISHRA SS MERI KUSHI HAI TERI KUSHI MEIN part 10 page 117 dec 20

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Krishna priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi friends
I am back with a ss on our IshRa
Basically I got this idea from one movie which was I saw yesterdays'
Only concept is taken from movie but story will progressed as My wish with lots of changes
If anyone comes to know about movie then please don't say,let them others enjoy,this is my request,with hope you will understand I am updating...😊

I WILL CONTINUE IF YOU PEOPLE ARE INTERESTED...😊

Forgot to say title na ,so here is the Title

MERI KUSHI HAI TERI KUSHI MEIN 😛

Edited by KP_IshRa - 7 years ago

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Krishna priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

INDEX

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Character Sketch -scroll down

Prologue -scroll down

PART 1 - scroll down

PART 2

PART 3
PART 4
PART 5
PART 6
PART 7

PART 8
PART 9

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Krishna priya

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CHARACTER SKETCH

He is a big business man.He loves his family very much.He is a strict father because Raman is not serious about his future.He wants to Raman get married as soon as possible because he thinks that may be after marriage he comes to know his responsibilities

She is a caring wife and loving mother,she always supports his son whether he is correct or not.

the one and only son of bhallas .he is a play boy.He was not serious about his future.Always try to imitate his father.He likes his father and mother very much

He belongs to a gangster family but he leaves his family and now living with his wife and daughter.He loves his daughter very much.He can do anything for her.If anybody even thinks to do bad for Ishita he will not leave them

She is supportive mother.she don't say a word against her husband.

She is traditional girl.she loves her parents very much .she accepts whatever her appa says.

Romi,Mihir,Ashok are Raman friends

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Krishna priya

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Prologue

Days are passing some how in her life but her life filled with wagon of pain ,she also want love from her husband but he not even seeing towards her,she don't the reason for that,she toss and try to sleep But her thoughts are bulking her head and she becomes restless on her comfortable bed,she every day tries to know what is their in her husband's heart about her but in vain...

Whether she will understand her husband's heart?whether she will make her husband to love her?

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Krishna priya

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PART 1

In Bhalla House

At the dinning table

Om:where is your son?He went to party again yesterday's night na?He will not change na?

Toshi:Bhallaji leave it na,he is a kid ,let him enjoy his life

Om:for god sake don't call him a kid ,he is 25 years now,he is not a kid,he have to know his responsibilities,when I am on his age I got job and I singly handle everything as my father leave us

Toshi: I will explain him but you don't scold him

OmBecause of you he is becoming like this,at least stop now taking his side

Toshi:whatever you say bhallaji he is my son,he will understand everything slowly,please don't scold him

om:Now one can change you and your son...

with that he leaves to his office

In Iyer House

Madhu serves tea to Mr iyer ,meanwhile Ishita reaches their

Ishita:Good morning appa

Vishwa:good morning Khanna,kids on your age are sleeping at this time but you woke up early morning

Ishita:appa ,According to me,everything have to happens on time ,morning 4'o clock yoga,after that studies,after pooja and after that college...

vishwa:stop ishu ...your life is filled with these things only...You missed something important in your life

Ishita: what appa

Vishwa: love

Ishita: what appa... Every time you end our talk with this love only

Vishwa: Because love is very important in any ones life,if you love someone,please tell me,I am your friend na,please share with me

Ishita:appa Nothing like that,I am not loving anyone at present,if I love anyone I will first say to you

Vishwa:ishu Khanna,Don't afraid to say to me ,I will not show angry on you...

Ishita:Ha appa I loving someone

Vishwa:who?asks with a shocking expression...

Ishita by pulling his cheeks,he is my father...

she says very cutely and then he hugs her and Madhu also smiles by seeing father and daughter

In Bhalla Manshion

In Raman's Room

Toshi:Raman,wake up puttat it's already 10:30 If bhallaji came he will scream on you as well as on me

Raman:I know maa he don't have any another work other than screaming on me

Toshi:No...Raman,He will afraid of your future that's why he is screaming on you,but he loves you very much

By that time he comes towards his maa and hugs her by saying I know maa he loves me very much that's why he is showing this much care towards me

Toshi:Acha,you are too late now,go and fresh up ,I will arrange your breakfast,eat that and your papa gave some work to you,complete that work

Raman:what work maa...?

Toshi:He gave one check to me, you have to deposit in the bank.

Raman:But why I,I have some other works than this

Toshi:Acha,what work you have...?

Raman:I and my friends are planning to go a movie

Toshi:Raman,Please after depositing this cheque on bank,you go to movie,If bhallaji knows about your rejection to do a small work,he will get angry,so please for me...

Raman:ok,I will do this for you only

with that he leaves to fresh up

In the college

Ishita:what happened dears,why are you smiling this much

Ishita's friends:Because today is holiday

Ishita:But why?

I.f:Because today is bandh...

Ishita:oh God I came unknowingly,if I know this at home,I will not come to college na

I.f:It's ok dear we will go to movie today

Ishita:No buddies,I can't come with you because I not informed my father

I.f:Oh common ishu,where are you living,this is 21st century,now also you want to take permission from your father,say a lie to him na like you have some extra class today

Ishita:No I can't say lie to him,I don't break my appa's trust

I.f:You can't change ishu,ok we will go to movie,you go to your home safely...

With that they leaves

In other hand Raman went to deposit the cheque the bank procedures takes much time which irritates him to core

Meanwhile he receives a call from his friend

Mihir:wher are you Raman?

Raman:Don't ask Mihir,I am stuck in bloody bank

Mihir:why you went to bank?

Raman:Hai na my respected father ,he gave me a work to deposit a cheque on the bank

Mihir:But show will start on 30 minutes

Raman:what can I do now?

Mihir:Raman:leave it na,cheque will be deposited tomorrow also,you come now,we will enjoy

Raman:It's ok Mihir,you people enjoy today,we will enjoy tomorrow

Mihir:ok Raman,bye

Raman:(self talk)Because of this cheque I missed my movie

Bank employee:sir, our computers get hanged so it will take some time to process,please wait for sometime

Raman:What yar ,Now I have to wait some more time,on second thoughts Mihir idea was correct,I will deposit cheque tomorrow and now I will enjoy the movie

with that he goes to movie and enjoys the movie and reaches home late night and makes a sneak steps to go inside his house in dark,suddenly lights gets on and Raman stands like a statute

om: Aagaya aap ,where you went?You deposited the cheque where is the receipt?

Raman:Papa vo...

Om:Stop it Raman,I know you not deposited the cheque,because you are not sincere towards any work shouts loudly on Raman

By listening his shouting toshi also comes to hall

Toshi:What happened bhallaji ,why are you shouting on him what he did?

Om:what he did,you are asking that to me,I said na he is so careless

Toshi:what happened bhallaji boliye toh sahi

Om:Today I gave him a cheque to deposit but he not deposited that

Raman:But problem is not mine I went their but computers get hanged so I think...

Om: So you went from their,you know after you went computers gets normal as usual,but you went with out waiting
Toshi:so what bhallaji,he will deposit tomorrow

Om:How he will deposit,the cheque had expired today,tomorrow it will become bounce,

Toshi:he don't know that na

Om:stop it toshi,don't take his side,because of you only he become like this,you are saying that he don't know that,he didn't know that because he not even see the cheque once if he saw that their mentioned the expiry date but he can't

Raman:sorry papa ,I not did this intentionally

Om:what sorry Raman,you know the value of cheque,how you know,you don't even saw that right,It's value was 50 lakhs

Raman stands silently

Toshi:we can't change past naa bhallaji leave it...

Om:Yes ,you are correct we can't change past but we will change future,that's why we are going to see a girl for Raman tomorrow

Raman:what ,I don't want to marry now...

Om:I am already made commitment,so you are coming,that's it

with that he leaves

Raman also leaves to his room angrily

Toshi follows him

That's all for now friends

Hope you liked it

Tell me whether I continue or not?

Eagerly waiting for response

DO LIKE AND COMMENT

Thank you
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Edited by Lovely_IshRa - 8 years ago

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raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

Congrats on ur new story

Interesting concept

Ishita is a dutiful daughter while Raman is a play boy

Update soon

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Sharmin

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Posted: 9 years ago

Interesting plot dr...
Raman as a play boy while ishu as a dutyful daughter...
Really...
Thosi ji z d one whoz spoiling raman yar...
Ishu z realy cute yar...
She did & do all the work vth appa's permission only..
Interesting..
Update soon..

Edited by fSharm - 9 years ago