SwaSan Musical OS: Bas Itna Hai Tumse Kehna - Page 8

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Wow Nitz!!! I just praised your talent on your other VM a few minutes ago but I didn;t know you were so talented at this too, although should have guessed!! This was so lovely- the song lyrics each time suited the scene you were describing so well perfectly. The way you explored Swara's POV, realisation etc was 👏👏. Of course Sanskaar's feelings on gaining consciousness were great too but as we are missing seeing Swara's on the show this was a balm! But my absolute fave bit is the Swara- RP interaction! I LOVED that and if we saw this on the show, I would be overcome with happiness.

Please write more Nitzy and if you don't- I'll annoy you to all the time! Loads of love honey xx

MY first reaction to your comment... OMG ..


then ...Oh Sweet... !!


Now that my transformation into a tomato is over... lets talk.. 😆
You have no idea ... how many ladoos are phooting in my chunnu sa heart after reading you comment... Seriously, I too had no idea that I can write a story.. I have written an essay and all.. but never had done stories.. to delve into a character ... its mind blogging... I have no idea how you do that so amazingly... The Swara.. Ihave written here is the Swara I want in show.. not the overtly mahana ..selfless Swara.. who doesn't give damn about the person for whom she is whole world. Sanskaar part just happened to me.. itself... I dont know I was in trance once I started writing.. Initially when i started this OS... my idea was Sanskaar will not gain consciousness and the whole thing will be in Swara's POV.. .but that last para of song.. thats totally Sanskaar so had to do that.. 😳 Swara and RP... I have a thing for sweet and strong FIL and DIL's parent-child bond ..this is one relationship that is not explored in shows.We have seen Swara's and DP and glimpse of Swara and RP when he apologized for Sanskaar behalf. So got the idea from there.. 😳😆 I too want to see something like this in show.. God we want so many things to happen and all we get is crap-fest..
Eh... I will definitely try ot write more.. I have ideas floating around in my head.. will try soon to pen down.. but first thing ..first... me now off to turn your idea into reality.. 😆😳
Love you too... 😃😳

Awesome Os!

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Awesome Os!

I loved the way you wrote Swara's emotions! That little interaction between Swara and her father-in-law was great seeing that we don't see much of Ram Prasad in the show.

Love how Sanskaar keeps calling Swara 'sweetheart'!

Will there be a sequel to this OS?

Thank you so much for your sweet words dear... 😳 I am glad you liked the way I sketched Swara... This is the Swara... I want in show for whom Sanskaar has become her world. 😳
About sequel of this OS... maybe... there ideas floating in my mind... 😳

Originally posted by: pakpearl

Wow Nithya..

Thank you Fauzia 🤗

wow meri jaan

Hello Nithya.😊

Just read the OS Nitzu. Gosh! Eeps! Its so cute. I loved it like anything. Though i dont agree abt swara just wanting to know his side of the story n not doubting him but other than that everything was ❤️Loved RP in this. Precious father daughter moment there😳 n then everything abt swasan is so sweet n just ❤️❤️❤️❤️ he loves the rain but he loves the first ray of the the sun on her face...that part was just too romantic to read n then how he knows that she is pretending to be asleep from the blush blooming on her cheeks ❤️ its all too good.