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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhu..

Maan admitted Geet in hospital..
Never expected that their cute love story would face such situation
Dev is there to help Maan..true friend😃
Just now read Deewangi and landed here..dono Dev mai kitna farak😆
Wow soon NT will help them too..
Plzz continue soon...

Oh my! Deewangi wala Dev and KHT wala Dev? What a comparison! Zameen Aasmaan ka farak hai! I never noted how differing they would seem to readers reading both stories. Wow!
Will update in few minutes! Dont be shocked at such a fast update! Chapter 11 B actually has been divided into two parts again. Chapter 11C will be up in few days!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LM1991

Kalpana,

Its a lovely story! My heart goes out to Maan. Waiting for more suspense and thrills!
LM

Thank you for liking this story!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anky_s





I'm glad you like my opinion and review 😉 and I feel great that my comments give you an encouragement to write. It is entirely my pleasure . I know it is different from BB but some similarities took my thoughts there. The thing is that I have seen too many films and I keep getting the thought of this ff being similar to 1 or the other. Like now I have got 2 films in my mind - Notebook and Mehbooba. In fact the cheeky mind of mine was even thinking it can be a story of reincarnation
😆

P.S. : Shah Rukh - Kajol can still drive you nuts and that is the most amazing thing about them. 20 years ago they were able to give goosebumps and they are still doing it. 😳

You know, there is a reason you see so many similarities in the movies and my story. And it is not because you watch too many movies! It is because my story is inspired by Bollywood movies. The starting Preet meeting Maan idea was taken from Woh Kaun Thi.

The Dev's character is inspired from Akshay Kumar's character in Bhool Bhullaiyya. Infact, at start, I had planned for Maan to do the whole investigation. But then I realised that I need some comic scenes to lighten the serious story. And thats when I got the idea of Akshay Kumar like Dev and funny NT. Plus, unlike heroes of movies, in real life it isnt the husband who solves all problems. He actually goes to professional like the hero did in BB.

And lets not forget the whole bhootiya song singing girl that is in almost every horror and mystery movie ever known. 😆 So seeing similarity is not surprising. But just like all my stories never are exact copy of the movie that inspired it (case in point, My Fair Geet) even this movie has enough twists to make it different from the originals.

BTW, I havent seen Notebook but I love Mehbooba. Infact, I am fanatic about reincarnation stories and recently watched Hamesha and Ab ke Baras back to back. Love those two movies. Infact, if you like reincarnation stories, then coming 16th May I am launching Ab Ke Baras, MG reincarnation FF inspired by Ab Ke Baras movie but with my own twists and turns. Hope you try it.

And I cannot disclose anything without letting the cat out of the bag but here is a hint: Whatever you are thinking, you are close to the truth than other readers. Guarantee!

Thanks for reading
Kalpana
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anky_s

Part 11 (A)
I'm starting to sound clichd now coz every time I write "it was an awesome update " but again it's not my fault that I don't find any other words! 🤪


You know you can say "it was an awesome update".That does cheer me up even if I hear it hundred times. 😳

Words which can do justice with the update. You are getting better with each part.


Thank you! 😃

Oh so Maaneet landed up in hospital after spending some stupendous time at farmhouse, thoda zyada action ho gaya 😆 okay jokes apart I feel for them yaar. Poor guys god knows or correction you where these lovera have landed themselves.


Good joke. 😆

Okay so finally Maan decided to call up Dev who is not just his friend but a psychiatrist as well. So Maan does think that it has got something to do with certain mental dysfunction. Poor guy what he is going through. He was hoping for a love filled happy life with Geet but has gotten a complete different thing.


Actually Maan does not know it is some mental problem. He just thinks that Dev would look at logically and tell him what to do next as Maan is too emotionally attached to take logical decision.

Geet on the other hand is going through even more bad phase. She's suffering and no one knows what she is going through. Her condition is miserable.


I know!

Dev has similar doubts that I have had but mine are ever changing or say keep altering. He is very much concerned and worried about Geet and Maan. He knew it will be tough for Maan to accept or come to terms with the fact that Geet might be suffering from some mental dysfunction as he loves her too much.
But Maan had incoherently acknowledged this possibility.

I don't know what will next update bring but I hope it gives some relief to our lover boy!

It will give relief, but the relief will be short lived. You will understand what I mean in Chapter 12.

Thanks for reviewing
Kalpana
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Posted: 9 years ago


CHAPTER 11 (B). DEV AND HIS THEORY

NT pushed the main door open and winced when it creaked. She squeezed her eyes shut but when no noise came from the house she heaved a sigh of relief and opened her eyes. Slowly she tiptoed into the house. Just then she heard footsteps and froze. It was coming from the room nearby. The door of that room opened into the main hall where she was standing. Oh no! Kahin yeh woh toh nahi! She bit her lip in worry and looked around. That is when her eyes fell on the cupboard nearby. She went and hid beside it and heard with bated breath as she heard footsteps come closer. And then suddenly a hand came in front of her and she screamed.

"NAINTARA!", Dev shouted as he watched his wife scream his head off with her eyes closed tightly.

"NT!", Dev growled in annoyance when his wife did not shut up and did what any sane person would do; he covered her mouth with his hand.

He saw his wife open her eyes in panic which only relaxed once it clicked to her that it was her husband standing in front of her.

"Kya hua? Kya hua?", came Maan's voice as he came running down the stairs and halted right in front of a shocked NT and annoyed Dev.

"Yeh hui! Meri wife! Naintara Khurana hui!", Dev spat.

Maan chuckled. Dev was normally an affable chap with smile on his face for everybody. But when it came to his wife's antics, even Dev's pleasing personality took a back seat.

"Humne kya kiya?", NT whined and Maan could not help but laugh. Whatever the situation, these two always managed to cheer him up with their antics.

"Achcha yeh sab chodo! NT! Tum yahaan kaise? Aur Daadima ke saath kaun hai?", Maan asked.

NT huffed, "O ho Veerji! You worry too much! Humaari Maami kabse Daadima se milke bak bak karna chaahti thi toh unhein Daadima ke saath bitha diya aur kahaa ki hum do couples farmhouse mein time spend karke kal aayenge!"

Maan heaved a sigh of relief at Daadima having someone at his side while Dev rolled his eyes, "Par tumhein aane ki jaroorat kya thi?"

"Arre! Hum kaise nahi aate?", NT pouted at her husband, "Aapne jo Geet ke baare mein bataaya yeh sunke kya hum wahin reh jaate? Humein toh aana hi tha! Waise Geet hai kahaan?", NT asked looking around as if Maan or Dev were hiding Geet behind them.

Dev rolled his eyes again while Maan explained, "Geet is sleeping. Hospital mein itni weak thi ki yahaan aate waqt drive mein hi so gayi. Upar ke kamre mein hai! Jaao! Mil lo!"

NT gulped, something which Dev noticed but Maan did not, and shook her head, "Nahi Veerji! Rehne deejiye! Geet ko aaraam karne deejiye!"

"Chalo upar chalte hain! We need to talk more about this situation!", Dev spoke and all three walked off upstairs. Upstairs through the bedroom where Geet was sleeping, Maan led them to the terrace attached to the bedroom. It was big enough to have 20 people seated in it and right in the middle was a coffee table surrounded by some wicker chairs that Maan and Dev had dragged from downstairs. As all took a seat around it, NT noticed atleast five coffee glasses and raised her eyebrows. They must be really worried if they had this much coffee since the morning. She checked the time. It was only 10 AM! NT shook her head.

"So where were we?", Dev started.

"You were saying you had some theory about Geet's situation...", Maan promptly.

"Yes and it is called...", Dev started but was cut off.

"Possession!", NT announced.

"WHAT!", both men looked at NT in surprise.

NT shrugged at their looks, "What? You know I am right!" Then she looked at them with a serious expression on her face, "Geet ko Preet naam k bhoot ne jhakda hai!"

"NT! What rubbish are you talking?", Dev looked at his wife in shock.

NT huffed and pouted at her husband, "Arre! Aap hi ne toh bataaya tha ki raat ko Geet Preet ban jaati hai aur chaaku leke Maan Veerji ko maarne ki koshish karti hai! Phir toh yeh aatma hi hui na?" She turned to Maan who was looking at the husband wife duo with bewilderment. With wide eyes and serious expression on her face NT spoke, "Hum kehte hain Maan Veerji! Sambhaalke rahiye! Hum na bahut achche tantric ko jaante hain! Woh na Geet se bhoot ko chutki mein bhaga denge! Aap fikar mat keejiye!"

"What rubbish are you talking NT?", Dev stood up from his seat, "You are a Doctor! Aur tum kisi tantric ko bula rahi ho bhoot bhagaane ke liye?"

NT stood up, "What do you mean you are a Doctor! I am a Pediatrician. I maybe a Doctor but I don't have PhD in Paranormal things. I don't know how to exorcise a ghost. Uske liye toh tantric ko hi bula sakte haina? What is a pediatrician going to do there?"

"WHAT!", Dev spluttered. It took him few seconds to realise what his wife was talking about.

"Oh God!", Dev moaned and sat down with his head in his hands. Maan and NT looked at Dev worriedly. What happened to him? Kahin sar var toh nahi dard kar raha?

Suddenly, Dev stood up and glared at NT, "Arre! Meri Ma! I meant ki you are learner of science. And science does not believe bhoot prets. How can you believe in such things?"

When NT opened her mouth to explain, Dev cut her off, "You know what! Forget it!" He then turned to Maan who still sat with confusion on his face, "Look Maan! My theory is that Geet has Multiple Personality Disorder!"

"What is that?", Maan asked and Dev explained while standing up and pacing around, "I will explain it in simple terms so as to not confuse you. Multiple Personality Disorder or Split Personality Disorder is a mental disorder where when a patient faces trauma that they are unable to handle, another personality gets born in them. Preet Ahluwalia must be Geet's alter ego. Now mind you, Maan, this might just be theory and not true. The case might be something else too. I need to confirm my theory before we take any step further."

Maan nodded and opened his mouth to ask something when NT butted in.

"Haan haan! Karo theory prove!", NT grumbled and then glared at her husband, "Lekin hum keh dete hain, yeh koi bhoot voot ka chakkar hai!"

"What nonsense?",Dev growled, "Chalo maan liya yeh bhoot ka khel hai! But can you prove it?"

"Arre! Sabse bada proof toh aapke saamne hai!", NT stood up, "Geet raat ko hi Preet banti hai! Aur sabko pata hai ki aatmaaein raat ko hi strong hoti hai! Isliye toh subah mein Geet ko chodke chali jaati hai! Jaroor yeh koi manhoos chudail hai!"

"Ek minute ek minute!", Dev scratched his head, "Pehli kehti ho bhoot, ab kehti ho chudail! Pehle confirm your theory aur phir bataana!"

"Arre! Confirm hi toh karna hai!", NT ran to Maan and grabbing his arm, she hauled him up, "Tantrik ko bulaa do Veerji, iss bhoot ko ek raat mein rafa dafa kardenge!"

"Oh for God's sake NT", Dev growled while pulling Maan away from NT's grip, "Stop this nonsense! I am telling you it is MPD!"

"And I am telling you it is BPC!", NT stomped her foot.

"Ab yeh kya bala hai?", Dev frowned.

"BPC! Matlab Bhoot Pret Chudail!", NT retorted.

Dev groaned, "And I am telling you it is MPD!"

"And I am telling you it is some bhoot!", NT growled.

"MPD!", Dev spat.

"BPC!", NT hissed.

"MPD!"

"BPC!"

"MPD!"

"BPC!"

"Oh! Shut up! Shut up! SHUT UP!", came Maan's voice and both NT and Dev looked where Maan was standing with his hands on his hips, eyes glaring at them.

"Look guys!", Maan snarled, "I don't care use bhoot ne pakda hai ya Multiple something something hua hai! I. DON'T. CARE.!"

He glared at the husband wife duo for a second and then his gaze softened and his shoulders hunched. His voice, soft and tender came out, "All I want is my Geet back!" He looked at them pleadingly, "Mujhe meri Geet sahi salamat lauta do! Bas! Use theek kardo! Mujhe aur kuch nahi chaahiye!"

He slumped down on the chair and NT and Dev looked at each other ashamed. In their quarrel, they forgot the brevity of the situation. NT looked at Dev worriedly and Dev nodded. He would handle the situation, his eyes seemed to say. NT smiled sadly and Dev walked to Maan. He placed his hand on Maan's shoulder and Maan who was looking down sadly looked up. "Everything will be fine! We will do everything to get your Geet back to you!" Maan smiled sadly and Dev patted his back.

Another short update!

Oops!

Sorry folks!

I don't know why but I have the urge to stop and update after every scene it seems!

Turns out, I really like seeing some of your reactions for every scene! (wink wink)

Chapter 11 (B) might have ended folks!

But Chapter 11 has not fully ended.

Chapter 11 (C) will be up around 16th May!

O Sajna...

Thank you, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb nt theory...
Hope geet get well soon n dev help in that to maan
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 11A
Maan has taken Geet to hospital he was hell worried about Geet well being he called dev and asked him come to hospital dev was equally worried about maaneet he reached hospital and found maan and reached him doctor came and told the. Geet is fine and they don't have to worry...but maan Condition made dev worry and asked him to tell what exactly had happened maan narrated everything and dev was shocked hearing what happened with Geet he was hoping it's not the case what he is thinking ...maan knew he has to fight long battle regarding Geet health ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update nt is so cute dev can be jovial patient person but when it comes to his wife's antics he loses his sanity maan laughed seeing their expression nt scared of geet coz she thought geet par bhoot chada hai both quarrelling over the fact that geet is suffering from a personality disorder while other think she is haunted by the ghost both fighting forgetting the gravity of the situation dev consoles maan giving him hope when he himself don't know how much is there
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved Dev_NT jodi. Both so cutely fighting over MPD/BPC😆😆
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nice update! well written! Dev n NT argue over MPD and BPC! update soon!

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