AarYa SS: Where You Belong. Part 8 pg 13, Epilogue pg 14

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Angel369

@Angel369

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

A beautiful story line but we never got in the show. You have shown this perfectly. Wondeful job

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Angel369
A beautiful story line but we never got in the show. You have shown this perfectly. Wondeful job

aw thanks Ankita dear 😊. I am very happy you liked my version and your compliment is heartwarming.

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lovely_nikki

@lovely_nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Hey Tessa,

The line from which I wanted to start my comment... Well I'll write it in the end as my first comment should be a good one.

First of all welcome to the writers world and Boy oh boy what a writer you are. 👏

I won't comment on the OS as I'm sure those who've commented must've said what I want to say. I'll only talk about your writing.

My first reaction was WHOA... I was blown away by your writing skills. ⭐️ (Actually this star is not enough to express my feelings). Tessa I won't lie to you and I'm Not saying this to make you happy, but your name has been entered in my favorite writers list. You are that good. ⭐️

But I was sort of disappointed also after coming across you as a writer. Why?

Because you kept silent for all this time. Had you started writing earlier you'd have participated in the contest.

Secondly you started writing when the forum is almost dead. Had you started earlier you'd have got many readers and so much more appreciation and praise that you deserve as a writer. You really are that good.

You are amongst the writers who knows how to play with words. Who knows how to express feelings of each characters, each scene with minimum words. It's something that I could never do.

Tessa I'm falling short for words, I'm that touched my your writing.

Now let me say what I should've said at the beginning...

Sorry for the late comment. Even though I had read all the chapters I couldn't comment earlier. I know how eagerly you were waiting to read my views. Sorry to keep you waiting for this long.

Well I'm honored to come across you as a writer. You are one talented writer and you deserve all appreciation and praises ⭐️

Slowly I'll start to read your other works also.

Oops forgot to mention..

Thank you for giving so many stories one after the other and for keeping the forum alive 🤗

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki
Hey Tessa,
The line from which I wanted to start my comment... Well I'll write it in the end as my first comment should be a good one.

First of all welcome to the writers world and Boy oh boy what a writer you are. 👏

I won't comment on the OS as I'm sure those who've commented must've said what I want to say. I'll only talk about your writing.

My first reaction was WHOA... I was blown away by your writing skills. ⭐️ (Actually this star is not enough to express my feelings). Tessa I won't lie to you and I'm Not saying this to make you happy, but your name has been entered in my favorite writers list. You are that good. ⭐️
But I was sort of disappointed also after coming across you as a writer. Why?
Because you kept silent for all this time. Had you started writing earlier you'd have participated in the contest.
Secondly you started writing when the forum is almost dead. Had you started earlier you'd have got many readers and so much more appreciation and praise that you deserve as a writer. You really are that good.
You are amongst the writers who knows how to play with words. Who knows how to express feelings of each characters, each scene with minimum words. It's something that I could never do.

Tessa I'm falling short for words, I'm that touched my your writing.

Now let me say what I should've said at the beginning...

Sorry for the late comment. Even though I had read all the chapters I couldn't comment earlier. I know how eagerly you were waiting to read my views. Sorry to keep you waiting for this long.
Well I'm honored to come across you as a writer. You are one talented writer and you deserve all appreciation and praises ⭐️

Slowly I'll start to read your other works also.

Oops forgot to mention..

Thank you for giving so many stories one after the other and for keeping the forum alive 🤗

Nikki you have managed to make me cry yet again as if MTB's emotional journey was not enough. I was so overwhelmed after reading your comments that I had to take a few moments and then continue reading it. I think it needless to say how moved I was, so deeply touched! ❤️

You are such an amazing writer whose craft I respect greatly so to hear this from you feels so surreal: that I am on your favorite writers list? that is the greatest compliment you could pay me and I don't have words to describe how that makes me feel. you are also one of my favorite writers, the main reason I was eager to hear your take on my stories so I could gauge how good or bad I am, so your comments left me in such awe!

thank you just seems so small a phrase for how grateful I am to you for sharing your thoughts about my writing. I have been writing for a few years now but I never felt confident to share my stories; I noticed how nice everyone was on this forum so I took a chance to see how it would be received and I do not regret for a single second having done that 😊.

I would have loved to have joined the contest but it did not even occur to me to write my stories of AarYa much less share them by then so I missed the opportunity . I would have loved a greater readership but I am still satisfied with the few I have, they push me to keep writing and I love them all, including you for that. As long as this forum is open I will keep writing for the 1 or 20 readers here for the love we all have for AarYa 🤗 I feel like we are all a small family here.

AarYa are of course such an inspiration so its easy to write about them but it is more gratifying when the stories are appreciated. I told you in my first ever comment for MTB how well you balance emotion and fun in your stories which makes them that much more endearing and entertaining.

"You are amongst the writers who knows how to play with words. Who knows how to express feelings of each characters, each scene with minimum words. It's something that I could never do." I do not know what you mean by something I could never do? you do it amazingly and with so much authenticity which is laudable and which I wish I could do half so well...

you instructed me to keep the forum going so I had to rise to the task 😆. I love doing it anyway.

seriously Nikki thank you so much and you do not have to apologize, I am sure you have other priorities so I am just happy you could share your views at all 😊. Many blessings to you and take care.

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Busi

@BusiMusi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

I can't get enough of this story. I use to be a silent reader but this story made me get out of my comfort zone. my first comment was on this ss I think. I love this story so much.

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Busi
I can't get enough of this story. I use to be a silent reader but this story made me get out of my comfort zone. my first comment was on this ss I think. I love this story so much.

awww Busi thank you so much! this is the greatest compliment you could pay me! even I came out of my comfort zone with it, I never shared anything I wrote before!

really thank you 🤗