Rivanya OS: Ek adhuri kahani

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Hey peeps
I am ramisa this is my first OS on Rivanya. Its a non-mythological story more of a teacher-student romance, hope you guys will like it and if you do then please leave your comment behind to let me know if i should continue.
TIA😊

Rithik kept on pacing up and down the room anxiously, looking at the door every now and then. The room was full of students giving their mid-term exams but it seemed like the teacher was the most worried of all.
'Mid-term bhi dene nahi ayi akhir baat kya hai''

The bell rang still there was no sign of the tall skinny girl. Unable to control his curiosity he called one of her friends who was just about to leave the room.

'umm Riya shivanya exam kyun miss kiya achanaak?''
'umm sir vo Shivanya usne apna semester drop kardiya''
Rithik kept looking at her words were not coming out of his mouth
Sir can I go?''
'umm who sick hai?'' Rithik asked hoping to hear 'no''
'umm nahi sir she is fine physically''.
he sighed with relief, but then again something struck him. Physically
Riya seemed to read his mind 'umm who sir uske kuch personal problems hai.
'oh ok riya tum jao'' he didn't wwant her to know or understand anything, he never even wanted Shivanya to understand anything. He wanted her just to remember...

'Sahab saare students tou chaalei geye ap nahi jaoge?''
'nahi kaka ab jayi main jaate same room bandh kaar dunga''

Rithik walked stood near the window, looking outside at THAT corridor.

'it's time for my revenge baby'' screamed shivanya
'shivu maar dungi tujhei mainei tujhei sirf ek stroke laagaya aur tui puri paint ki bucket lekei aageyi'' pleaded riya
'huh wohi tou main job hi kaar ti hoon extreme kaar tu hoo naam hai Shivanyaa'' saying that shivanya threw the red paint at riya but riya was totally unharmed instead it was a tall broad chest man covered in the color red.
Shivanya gasped widening her eyes while riya giggled from behind the man and mouthed laahu moo lag geya
She went to him who was still in shock looking down at himself.
'I am so sorry woh main apne friend I am soo damn sorryyy..are you done with your classes?? I am soo sorry''
he remained quite
Shivanya kept staring at him with a worried look
he looked at her at instantly a smile appeared on his face even he did not know why
'its ok'' he said quietly and left leaving behind trails of red paint.

Shivanya kept looking who knows the guys might just turn back and throw something at her but nothing happened he just vanished.
Riya came laughing 'tune tou bechare ka din hi kharap kar diya''
'pata nahi ajeeb hai usne kuchi bhi nahi bola''
'lagta hai fresher hai''
'nahi fresher tou lagta'' shivanya frowned
'yaaa phir shayed teacher hai'' said riya placing her elbow on shivanya
'nahi teacher nahi hai dekhana kaisei t-shirt aur jeans pehna hua tha''
'hai aur teacer ki hisaab se kaafi young hai''
'hmm chal chor raat gayi baat gayi chal class chalet hai main semester ki first din late nahi hona chahti oon kya pata teacher kharoos nikla''

Shivanya kept doodling on the blank page when riya turned
'kya yaar yeh teacher kaha hain 20mins hogeye hain class ko start huye''
'pata nahi shayad aj class nahi hoga'' saying that shivanya bend down to put the drawing in her back when a familiar voice hit her ear
'hello class''
shivanya abruptly looked up leaving her drawing on the floor.
It was the same man the same freaking man only that now he was clean and was wearing different clothes. Her mouth was wide open just like before seeing that rithik got amused but he controlled himself from laughing afterall he was the teacher
'I am sorry for being late I actually had a small accident after coming to the university this morning''
'are you okay sir''
Shivanya was so embarrassed she covered half of her face with her hand.
'Yeah I am fine indeed it was quite funny I will share it with u guys some other time, btw I am Rithik Taneja your marketing faculty and this is my new semester in this University so I hope if something wrong happen from my part you guys would forgive me so lets begin''
The one and a half hour class ended and shivanya gathering all her courage went to Rithik after all the students left.
'umm excuse me sir''
Rithik turned to face her 'yes Michelangelo how can I help you''
She didn't understand how to start 'umm sir I am so sorry I didn't know you..you...this..sub..soryy''
'Its ok you can leave''
'sir sorryy''
'leave''
Shivanya rushed to the door but stopped and looked back once then left.
Rithik went near the bench where she was sitting
picked up a paper smiled and put it in his coat pocket.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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It really nice... do continue the story I would love to read further :)
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I second the comments..it's nice..please continue.

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