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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update...
So..poornima is still a mystery to be unfold..😲
Hope Jyoti excuses Siddharth
Thank you😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Still mystery was not revealed my boy so wont give cmmt untill reveal it atleast hints or clues should give na one by one ur playing with me na so no cmmts
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Hi sai nice update

Want to know more about poornima
Waiting for next update

thank u nadeeka1200
u will not know about her but u will have to wait till last update which is not so far
thanks for ur wonderful support
will update now
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rd0309

Hmm Poornima's case is still a mystery... waiting to know more

wait for 2 days FF will be completed k 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishux

Beautiful update...

So..poornima is still a mystery to be unfold..😲
Hope Jyoti excuses Siddharth
Thank you😳

thank u
hmm its a mystery will be known by tomorrow
Yes she will excuse him wait and watch how its gonna be
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: syvalini

Still mystery was not revealed my boy so wont give cmmt untill reveal it atleast hints or clues should give na one by one ur playing with me na so no cmmts

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai gud evening. Thanks for your update and pm. 👏
Hey Sai I didn't comment for 3 days because I was busy.
But I read your update daily. I didn't get time to write the comments yaar.
Really u r a great writer . Now ur updates reminds us our show back yaar.
The entry of Indrajit takkumma ahalya and poornima had made the updates same like our show but ur concept is really superb. V already know they r the villain teams. Hey really enjoyed it yaar. V r expecting some more twists in ur updates yaar. Try to bring more suspicious thing in ur update because that much v excepted yaar. V know u r making a great job. Really u r appreciatable. Hats of u Sai thanks for ur beautiful updates yaar 👏

thank u thank u so much i m unable to find words how to thank u u r making me emotional yaar itna tareef mat karo anyway u liked it na thats a ll i need
Episode 45
Everyone pressured shlok to go away to some where . That time they can watch Indrajit and do something. But shlok is not agreeing he wants to know who is poornima. Sojal said to shlok about astha and think about her because she is afraid. Shlok said to his father he will talk their wealth back. Waw nice shlok really u r our hero don't get afraid of any one. If he didn't do anything that will get them to the right path. Yes shlok promised his dad . V know that shlok will take it back. Really that reminds our sapna and ballu. Sai u recreated the history and their chemistry once again thanks dear. V trusted u so u proved it truly waw.
Yes his family is a great support to him and on the top of that Aastha is with him so he dont need to fear of anything oh i m glad to know that i proved it thank u chechi u r njoying updates right i knew it yaar
Shlok went outside for something. Varad loved the way consoling his parents. Really u r son and a brother really liked ur every words yaar. Niranjan and Anjali now they're helpless parents. Anjali is getting emotional. Sojal u too r the real daughter in law of their house. U also consoling them and remembering her about astha. Anjali went to the room and saw asthu sleeping. Really like a small kid. She kissed her . That was bonding between asthu and Anjali. Really liked that part.
Astha woke up and saw shlok is not in the house. She is getting worried. She called him to his phone but he didn't pick the phone. She is going waw asthu wat r u asking to them it is quite serious but felt funny also. Shlok came and asthu u scold shlok in front of others waw very brave girl. Varad teasing astha it was awesome. Really I wished it to see this on the screen yaar. But her reply made me laugh yaar. I really just imagined like shernu Avinash and Sameer is doing this part. Liked and loved it so much yaar.
Yes as i said his family is a great support to him Aastha and Anjali bond is always unique yes Aastha always want Shlok with her and in this condition she cant even bear he is out somewhere she is feared a lot
Jyothi was dying inside. She regrets that she loved siddarth. She didn't know y he did this to her family. Now she hate him but inside she loved him so much she trusted him so much but he betrayed her and her family. Really I felt it she is so poor girl. Arey astha really u r consoling her waw u know she loves him so much she saw the love in siddarth's eyes. She was trying to convince jyothi but our jyothi didn't accept she said she don't want anything. Everything has gone because of her love. Now she don't want him or anything. Really now Anjali u can decide ur daughter's life.
Hmm Siddharth truly loved her but she was thinking he betrayed her but Aastha his pure love in his eyes but Jyoti didnt slowly she will dont worry Anjali is a support to her dont worry Siddharth helps them a lot wait and watch
Episode 46
Jyothi was crying in Anjali's hand. She told to her mother that she was in deep love with siddarth. But ge betrayed them now wat will they decide she will accept this. Siddarth was calling jyothi but she didn't pick his phone. Now he doesn't know where is Jyoti living with her parents. Indrajit known about their love so he kiddnapped siddarth mother. So he wanted to do what Indrajit wants. But it betrayed his lfe his love. He was helpless he wanted her back. But where to find. Astha came to shlok . Waw shlok's word reminds once again the show. If astha is with him he have every thing. If astha is not with him he is a big zero. Waw..Then their small romantic moments was superb. I enjoyed yaar.
Hmm slowly Siddharth will help them dont worry it will be a dramatic end and happpy end wait and watch and yes Shlok and Aastha are bound to 7 births they both cant live without each other na chechi hmm thank u so much u felt like our show
Shlok was talking to astha she asked about poornima. Shlok was also confused. He didn't know who is poornima. But now he wanted to know who is she. Really v also have a question yaar. What is the relation between shlok and poornima. I think there is someone r to introduce in ur ff Sai. Hey u wrote it superb. Really ur updates r quite interesting yaar. Really u r taking us somewhere else yaar. Really I don't have any words to say about ur writing yaar.
There is no one else u will know who made it wait and watch hmm hmm itna bhi tareef mat karo i jus wrote wat i felt yaar thats it i didnt know u like it that much k k u r liking it na thank u so much for supporting me like this chechi
Bharka went to Indrajit and asked wat happened is it now he have the happy moments. But Indrajit answers was correct. I think Sai u gave Indrajit nice character because he is feeling also that shlok is not wrong. Same as niranjali was also nice. They r so happy when they saw him and said this is Indrajit properly. Takkumma is once again brain washing him. Anyway now he wants time to think about shlok and family.waw its nice yaar
Ashlok went to asthas house. They told everything to them. Arey asthu y r u shouting at ur mom. She just asked about shlok for that what u said yaar.Really our asthu trust shlok so much. They came house all their chatting was superb. But atlast astha got hurt and she went crying to their room. Sai u creation was superb
Hmm u will know about Indrajeet and Barkha soon and wat is there jus 2 updates r left i think u will know today itself yes Aastha cant bear if any one goes against Shlok chahe apni aayi kyun na ho hmm my creation was jus an imagination dont praise me that much k
Episode 47
Astha was crying because she thought everyone is thinking only about shlok not for her. She told to Anjali that everyone will be happy because she is going away from them. But Anjali told that they love her very much waw. Next day ashlok went to Mumbai.
Jyothi was crying so much . Truly she loved siddarth.Siddarth was too sad he was calling her but jyothi didn't take the phone really it was sad part. Siddarth wants her. Atlast she mgsd him she said gud bye that made him too sad m so he decided to search her. He went to AM and told wat they did to him. Because of them he lost his love. So he will not leave them. He fell down there . Poor siddarth wat to say
Hmm it was quite boring chechi i shouldnt have dragged it that much hmm Aastha hain hi itni dramaqueen hmm Siddharth is doing his job now let him do wat can he do atlast he is doing all this for her u will know today dont go anywhere and dont miss this last two updates
Shlok settled in Mumbai. He waas searching about poornima. It was nice shlok. Astha will always be with u. Avdoot and kalindhi wat to say avdoot is correct. Trust shlok . Indrajit finds shloks secret room in AM and see shlok's loves simbel to Swati. Indrajith was confused. Is shlok us telling liesor truth. If he didn't do that then wat is correct. He thought shlok us a nice guy. Indrajit waas feeling guilty because siddarth love has gone from him. It was really something yaar.
Hmm Shlok is on a mission now, Indrajeet realises his mistake soon dont worry everything will be ended happily if u want any clue read my promo once again u will know nothing is something heyyy dont take this ff to ur heart that much k jus read and leave it i know u r njoying but its jus an ff
Anyway nice update yaar. I really enjoyed it Sai. Really I am happy u r taking the story to somewhere. I hope after this u will write next ff for us. V know our trust about u will not broken. Thanks yaar for the wonderful treat yaar. U r great talent writer. I am not praising u. Wat I thought I just wrote. Anyway keep rocking always like this. Ur efforts was truly nice. Keep it up continue dear... V r waiting

wow wow chechi thank u thank u so much for writing such long, colorful and comment to every part i jus love to read ur comments thanks a lot for putting so much effort for jus commenting an ff i jus love ur comments thank u thank u so much wat can i say other than this and wat r u saying y should i write another ff haan u write it y cant u haan y r u always forcing me to write haan u already wrote few parts na complete it and then ask me to write understood haan
Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Episode 48


Ahilya saw Siddharth again and smiled at him. She immediately called someone. Shlok came to home with lot of stuff. Aastha was working in kitchen. Shlok came and carelessly put the contents on the table and hugged her from behind. Aastha "Shlok aap aagayi vaha bhaitiye main chai naashta leke aaongi."


Sachin came running "oho Romeo kitni baar kah chukka hoon romance karne vakt door band karna hain ye bhi nahi pata hain kya tumhe." Shlok suddenly saw him and left her. Aastha was blushing. Sachin "dekho phuljadi kaise blush ho raha hain." Aastha "heyy Sachin bas ab tum vaha jao main chai naashta leke aaongi."


Sachin haan jaldi aana aur aap mat buliye aapne kaha hain ki aaj ham carom khelenge." Aastha "haan jahapana mujhe yaad hain ab tum vaha jaake bhaito ham khelenge theek hain." Sachin "hmm jaldi aana." And he went near Shlok "hmm Romeo tum isse kaise rah sakta hain jab dekho to padayi karlo yaha bhaito khel mat khelo kaisa yaar aisa hain tho aur tum hamesha usse romance karta hain."


Shlok smiled inwards. Shlok "hmm tera aai se kya kahke aaya ab." Sachin "arey chodde yaar chup chup chup aa rahi hain fuljhadi." Aastha came and put the contents there. Shlok excused and went in for fresh up and saw her bra still lying under pillow and smiled to himself. After naashta Aastha was playing carrom with him seriously. Sachin too was completely in the game but Shlok was just staring at his cute childish wife from away.


Sachin came front a little bit and whispered "hey fuljhadi romeo tumhari taraf hi dekh rahe hain na."Aastha "haan meri taraf hi dekh rahe hain." Sachin played another shot and smiled inwards "hey fuljhadi aur ek baar dekho tumhari taraf hi dekh rahe hain na." Aastha "haan Sachin kya karu main jaisa dekh raha hain ki mujhe pehli baar dekh raha hain mujhe hi ghoor raha hain."


Sachin beat his head himself and shouted "arey Romeo aisa kya ghoor raha hain hamesha aao aake bhaito yaha aur tum achchi se dekh sakte ho apni fuljhadi ko." Shlok then suddenly looked away and got embarrassed but he suddenly shouted "hey Sachin tunhara aayi aa raha hain." Sachin "Kya!!" Shlok "haan go and hide somewhere fast." Sachin went and hid behind the curtains.


Shlok saw and laughed out loudly. Aastha "Shlok y r u laughing where is she." Shlok "koi nahi hain." Aastha released a huge sigh "Shlok kyun tang kar rahe ho chota bachcha hain wo." Shlok "kaun chota bachcha ye isko kah rahe hain kya dekha kaise kaise bade bade baate kar rahe hain." Sachin came outside and saw at him angrily "haan hasiye hasiye kal aapko bachche honge na tab dekho kaise tang karega wo."


Within no time Aastha blushed. Sachin "dekho kaise sharma rahe hain." Aastha "Sachin bohut hogaya tumhara." Sachin "achcha teek hain main kal aata hoon bye ab aur khana bohut achcha hain ek dam hain." And he left. Shlok came to her and said "suna usne kya kaha." Aastha "Shlok aap bhi na kal hi chodo mujhe ab ghar saaf karni hain aap jayiye." Shlok smiled and left her.


Kavya was crying again "chachi kab aayenge main chachi ke paas jaana hain chachi chachi chachi." Sojal "mat ro Kavya chachi aajayegi chachi se baat karogi kya." Kavya "haan main kitni baar bolu chachi nahi aa rahi hain kyun aai chachi doesn't like me haan aur chachu bhi gaya kya wo log firse chachu ki guest room gaye the kya mujhe bhi jaana hain vaha."


Sojal "Kavya chachi vaha nahi hain aur tum mat ro Aastha chachi jald hi aayenge tum fikar mat kar mat ro." Anjali "Kavya idar aao meri bachchi chachi baat karenge tumse." And she handed phone to her. Kavya "hello chachi." Aastha "hello Kavya kaisi hain tu." Kavya again cried "chachi kab aaogi mere paas aap jaante ho main aapko bohut miss kiya."


Aastha felt heavy and said with tears "Kavya main bhi tumko bohut miss kiya jaldi hi aaongi beta jaldi hi aaongi tab tak tum meri teddy se khelna main aane ke baad saare games khelenge." Kavya "chachi aap hamesha aise hi kahte hain lekin aap ab tak nahi aai." And she cried. Aastha "Kavya beta good girls aise nahi rote hain beta main aaongi na pacca tum mat ro agar tum roenge to main late aoongi."

Kavya "nahi chachi I wont cry come soon.." Aastha "teek hain mere bachchi listen to ur aai haan." And she cut the call and cried again. Shlok saw her crying. Shlok went near her "Aastha mat ro u know we r going home soon don't worry yaar." Aastha delighted "sach sach kah rahe hain tum." Aastha "haan Aastha I promise u." Aastha tightly hugged him and cried. Aastha "bohut miss ho rahi hain Shlok bohut miss kar raha hain." Shlok wiped her tears and kissed her "I promise Aastha sab teek hoga."


Indrajeet doesn't know wat to do he doesn't want to do. He was feeling guilt for his condition. Siddharth slowly woke up and saw here and there. He slowly woke up and went out to see Indrajeet pacing in the hall. Shlok was talking with someone and came to know it is time. Niranjan too was thinking about Shlok kaun kiya hoga ye sab itni din hogaye Indrajeet bhi calm hain kuch nahi kiya usne bhi ya fir he was misguided in knowing the truth who might have wrote that letter.


Whoever it is they want to ruin Shlok but who has that negative on Shlok do they want to ruin bcoz of Aastha oh my god y didn't he get that idea until now. He immediately took phone and called Shlok. Shlok "haan Baba kaisa hain aap." Niranjan "Shlok main teek hoon beta bahu kaisi hain." Shlok "haan Baba wo bhi teek hain kuch kaam hian kya itni raat ko phone kiya aap."


Niranjan "haan beta phone ek baar Aastha ko de." He gave phone to Aastha. Aastha "haan Baba kaisa hain aap." Niranjan "main teek hoon mere bachchi tum kaisi hain." Aastha "main bhi bilkul teek hoon aur aapka beta mujhe achchi tarah se dekh raha hain aap chinta mat kijiye." Niranjan "Aastha I want to ask something I mean do u have any boy friends b4 marriage I m sorry to ask like this but I had to I mean if someone had crush on u b4 marriage they might do this for Shlok's downfall I know u feel low but we need to think in all ways right so tell me Aastha aisa koi hain kya tumhari clg main koi tumhe pasand ki hain kya I m sorry to ask like this beta."


Aastha "nahi Baba aap sorry mat kahiye main already iss taraf socha but aisa koi nahi hain baba aur main bhi kisi ko nahi pyaar kiya sirf Shlok ke bina main sach kah rahi hoon Baba." Niranjan "ji nahi beta tum sach hi kahti bas main unki Baba hoon na har taraf main sochna hain na sorry beta agar aap hurt hui tho."


Aastha "nahi Baba aap aisa mat kahiye ji Baba ab main rakhti hoon aur kuch kahna hain kya." Niranjan "kuch nahi beta aap dono sukh rahe." Aastha "Ji Baba" and she cut the phone. Aastha bcame thoughtful. Kaun ho sakta hain lekin ab tak wo log bhi kuch nahi kiya uski man main kya chal raha hain. Aastha now wants to go to Pune.


Indrajeet want one more clarification he was restless so he went to his room and took poornimas diary. He saw each and everything her love towards she had all the photos of him but nothing was there including both of them hmm bohut shaan hain Shlok but she didn't write anything against him fcourse how can she he acted well he didn't find anything and he turned the last page and saw a letter writing


"Shlok this is for u I love u Shlok I love u so much so wenever I meet u I don't know whether I meet u or not but this is the one I want to give u in our first meet don't know is this love or not but I know I cant bcome urs but I cant stop loving u Shlok but everything ends here but u r a beautiful memory to me Shlok."


And he took the card in which the edition of both photos and something wriiten on it he just threw the contents its just a crush damn it then wat that letter is about.


Y did Shlok write like that to have pills and cant bcome urs is she really pregnant. Oh God wat the hell is this. He again saw the letter which is in his hands and saw

wenever I meet u I don't know whether I meet u or not but this is the one I want to give u in our first meet


oh god that means she never met him at all then doesn't he know about her at all. Yes he was right in all the way that means he is right ye sab main pehle kyun nahi dekha and he threw the diary there and went out hurriedly. Ankush was following a man who was going into the AM.


He hid behind the door and slowly went in without anyones observation. Barkha observed it and followed him. Ankush saw him going up he was rare here he was new to this place too who is this one he thought. Aastha felt happy after Shlok said that they will leave to pune soon. She was dancing with joy.


Shlok too thought hmm aaj sab hojayenge and he came out of washroom and saw his wife shining with smile and went near her. Aastha was arranging sheets on the bed. Shlok suddenly turned her and kissed her violently. Aastha was shocked. Shlok was sexy in this form. She cant help it and gave in easily. She too want to enjoy this moment. Shlok entered his tongue into her and tasted her and her odor is killing him he always hadn't enough of her he just made her lie on the bed and kissed her madly.

Episode 49

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Thanks for ur updates and pm 👏
Really nice update yaar. Loved it truly. Arey Sai wat r u doing yaar. Ur every updates reminds us our show back. Today also u brought it by bringing our naughty boy Sachin. Really loved the way he entered in the ff. Sai did everyone feels or not I don't know but I think in our show every characters were perfect henna. Child actors Kavya and Sachin . They acted their part so nicely and cute henna. No mistakes henna. Really hats of the director and the whole crew for giving us a memorable gift like our wonderful show and our cutest couples Ashlok. Because of them v r here together henna. Really I am happy because of this show v got so many friends and some beautiful writers like u Sai. Really I am proud because I am in IF. So that v can read so much stories. Please write more yaar. Reading so much ashlok stories our ashlok is in our heart yaar. For every writers thanks yaar. Every one keep writing like this always. God bless everyone yaar.
Ahalya is calling someone to take siddarth. I think there is some one to enter our ff. Shlok coming to home with so much stuff. Waw now he is buying stuffs superb. He came and hugged asthu from behind. Wat yaar shlok r u going to romance ur wife hahaha hahaha. But our naughty Sachin henna didn't allow ashlok to romance waw. Sachin u r right always in the show also they will forget to close the doors yaar. Because of this rani every time witnessed their romance yaar. Hahaha. Asthu u know carrom board game v know it from our show but Sachin u too waw so u r going to play with ur phuljadi. But before that wat u said to shlok learn carrom waw nice dialogue Sai I liked the way ur writing. Shlok getting embarrassed it was nice yaar. Throughout the play shlok was admiring his cute drama queen wife his asthu. Arey how can he take his eyes from her she always looks beautiful. Sachin came front to asthu and told look ur shlok looking u she said she knows that he us looking wat can I do superb Sai loved it yaar. Sachin called shlok and told come and sit with them so he can see his phuljadi near. Shlok got embarrassed and looked away suddenly shlok telling Sachin that his mom coming. Hearing this Sachin ran and hide behind the curtain. Seeing this shlok started laughing and told his mom is not coming. Sachin came with angry face hahaha. Really I want to see this part in onscreen yaar. After that Sachin told ashlok once if their children's come they will make difficulties to ashlok hahaha Sachin u know one thing astha is only acting like child. Then for this shlok is having the difficulties henna. Am I righ. After Sachin gone shlok asked asthu did u heard wat Sachin told. But it was so romantic yaaar. Superb Sai I have no words that's all. Reading ur ff I think I am watching this on tv that impacts gave us by ur daily updates yaar thanks. Loved the way of ashloks interactions yaar. Really enjoyed it.
Kavya was missing her chachu and chachi. Really astha loved her so much. Really Kavya don't cry beta tumari chachu and chachi will come soon yaar. But she was crying. Atlast Anjali failed asthas phone and Kavya talked with her chachi. The both cuties talk was really superb and nice yaar. Really it made my eyes water drops yaar. Astha also miss their family after talking to Kavya she was crying . Waw shlok came and said to her that they will go to their home soon because his job almost done henna. Now he know that poornima studied in his college but don't know who played it. I think Swati is there in this play its my guess.Indrajit felt guilty for wat he done to siddarth. Yes v know if someone has guilty he will be nice man. I think atlast u will create that Indrajit is a nice character henna Sai. Niranjan thinking about shlok. He thinks that someone wants to ruin shloks life because of astha. Niranjan wants to confirm sad o hw called and asked to her . Niranjan u asked is the right thing but before u astha also thinked. But they didn't get any answers. Anyway nice part yaar.
Indrajit was confused. He wants to confirm about shlok and poornima once more so he read the dairy. But after reading his confusion gone. Now he understand that shlok is not telling the lies . He was truly nice man. He got anger and throw the dairy. Really liked the part. Arey. Y Ankush is going to AM. I didn't understand the reason. Barkha also saw him. Please sai don't do anything to Ankush. Waw asthu u r dancing. And the last part our ashlok romance waw superb. Really I think the next part starting will be Ashlok romance henna. Any way one thing clarified that poornima have no relationship with shlok. Shlok is really a gentleman. Thanks yaar. Sai ur updates r superb yaar. V really enjoyed it so much yaar. Thanks for ur superb update yaar. Keep it up. U rock star. Continue soon. V r waiting for the next update. V trust you so much yaar.
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update :) lots of drama to happen I guess :) waiting :)

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