New Abhigya OS- Their phase of happiness

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone! I'm new here on IF. I was very frustrated on the ongoing track and wanted to share with you how I want it to go so I created an new account. This is my very first story, so plz go easy on me I am doing this on my phone so plz avoid mistakes.

Abhigya OS- Their phase of happiness (sry guyz couldn't think of a perfect title.

A-Abhi
P-Pragya
T-Tanu
Al-Aliyah
N-Nikhil

(Starts when tabhi marriage is canceled and Taaliya talk in their room and nikhil comes in)
(Abhi in his room)
A-why did pragya stop my wedding? Does she still love me?
I have to find out or else I won't be able to bear the regret.
...walks to robin and asks where is Pragya and robin says she is in dadi's room. As he goes, he sees nikhil walking into Aliya room.
A-how come nikhil keeps showing up in my house and that too why is he in Aliya's room?!
Taaliya and nikhil convo..:
N-Why u 2 fools never listen to me?!
Al-will u plz stop it? We r here trying to find how that pragya got Tanu name on the divorce papers and here u come and eat our heads!!
T-I don't understand anything yaar how did this happen?!
N-If u stayed with me and not that abhi, u don't have to go through this today! I told you I will take care of u and give u whatever u want just don't seperate me from my baby!
T-just stop it nikhil! I told u already that even if this is your child, it will only get Abhi's name. I won't let that pragya take him away from me. She said that she had not changed and she knows about us. I won't let her reveal my truth.
They didn't realize that someone was listening to all this.
😆
Abhi decides to ask him about the business and property papers in lawyers office.
He stops at the door...(hears Taaliya and nikhil convo)
Enters..
A-How dare you Tanu!! 😡 Tell me the truth! Is this my child? He yells
T- Abhi? What r u talking about?
A-(Slap) is this child nikhil's?
T- ...ab..abh..Abhi umm..
A- ANSWER ME! He roared.
T-yes 😕
A-Nikhil I can't believe u hid this from me just leave from here!!
(Nikhil leaves)
A-(Drags tanu downstairs at the door) Don't u ever dare step foot in this house ever again!i don't wanna see your face just leave from here or else idk what I'll do to u.
(Tanu out of fear leaves)
Abhi just gives Aliya a hard glare and retires to his room. (Didn't have anything for her so ya)
In the morning:
(Everyone had left for an event and pragya had a plan for Tanu while Abhi stayed at home as the event was related to God --couldn't think of anything else.)

A-let her come! I will make sure she confesses her love for me
Pragya enters later on..
Sees Abhi unconscious on the floor with a slit on his wrist blood flowing...
😲 comes to him tears welling up in her eyes
P-Suniye, plz open ur eyes! What happened to you!? Plz come back! Holds his hand and say I love you so much 😭 plz come back!!
A-opens his eyes and says I love you too my fuggy
Pragya realizes that he is faking.
P-what r u talking about? (Starts to leave)
A- holds her back and says- plz stop ur drama I know u r still my fuggy! Why? Why did u hide to me that I am not the father of tanus child. You knew right? Was I not trustworthy?
P-How do u know?
A-I heard Taaliya and nikhils convo tells her what they said.
P- Suniye, I'm very sorry I really wanted to tell you but I was afraid you wouldn't believe me
A-Fuggy, always remember that I will believe and trust u no matter what and forever.
P-I'm very sorry plz forgive me I love you so much!
A-I love u too my fuggy..
So who else knew about this..??
P-Dadi, purab, bulbul(bulbul isn't dead), rachna, akash, and maa..
A-what?! Everyone knew except me!?
P-I said sorry na!
A-okok leave it! U wanna make up for all the days we were apart?!
P-😳
On that day, it was the end of struggle and then started their phase of happiness.

Done. So how was it? Plz comment so I have more feedback as I am new. I apologize for mistakes and I have no intention of plagiarism if by any chance it seemed like itThanks guys! Waiting 4 comments
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank u so much 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you! I will definitely luk at ur index hopefully I have time. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ah! Ur exposure was so easy.
I do not get cvs why r they taking so long??!
I loved ur story :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sijay.is.real

Ah! Ur exposure was so easy.

I do not get cvs why r they taking so long??!
I loved ur story :)


Yes I know they make it so complicated! Thank you so much! I will try better stories next time.

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