pOeM bOuT RiDz

okay so I worte a poem about riddima...hope you guys lyk it. here it goes

the eyes that dwell on that charismatic face
are so awing
that neither he nor I could take our own eyes off
those pieces of heaven

what a contemplation!
a piece of heaven
right here in this un-heavenly world
oh...the contradiction!

but does it matter?
a small contradiction is little to make
for when one spares a glance
they are overwhelmed

why not?
every form she takes
complements her so astoundingly well
she is truly a beauty

by the way guys, my name is tamanna...or tammy...for those who want to comment on this and say my name in the process...im tired of ppl calling me Mosammad😆

hey tammy!
the poem is very well written..i like it 😊
....even though i did have to look up some of those words in the dictionary 😆
jk

Originally posted by: **cutiepie**

hey tammy!
the poem is very well written..i like it 😊
....even though i did have to look up some of those words in the dictionary 😆
jk

im sorry...my vocab isnt actually very advanced...i dont know wat happens to me in poems, debates, and essays!😆 and i also made some typos....gotta fix em!

noone lyked it...no one lyks my poems or my ff... 😭 😭

Hey Tammy!
very good poem! 👏 👏..I thought it was very well written..you wrote some very sweet things about ridz 😳 😊....your vocabulary is really good in this poem..I liked the word that you used...I did have to go back and read the peom again to understand everything 😆 😆 ...but I guess i am just slow 😆 😆 ...anyways great poem and thanks for sharing 👏 😃

ur poem is really sweet! 😳 i really like the last line! 😊

its was great!
nd ahaha...I 2 hadda look alot of words up...lol

Tammy, I agree with you completely. I like her a lot!

Your poem is a true expression of what Riddhima is! You wrote it very well.
Thanks.

should i write more poems?

yes..you should write more poems..I would love to write them! 😃