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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzles

waiting for the villian

Where is Swati? 🤪
who married her 🤪


Nice update sai šŸ‘


Best of luck for your project 😊

u will know wait and watch
anyway thanks for commenting
thanks
and also all the best to ur xams
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

wow.. double dhamaka...
double update...
nice return gift from u bhai...

awesome updates...
continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm..

thank u diduuu
will update now
pleasure is mine thank u diduuu
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishux

Wow ...double updates..

Wonderful update..
Omg now what will happen to Aastha
Thank you 😳

thank u
nothing happens to her
dont worry
Sai never let happen to her šŸ˜†

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: syvalini

hai sai...

wow double updates...
now the story is very interesting...
who was that unknown person makes curiosity in readers
may be swathi left shlok because of this person who is treatening shlok i guess so,
now shlok was very restless of hearing the person words... scared for asthu...
is something should be happen in coming...
is that astha was in danger?
who is that sid n y his behaviour was weird
is he doing any harm to niranjan family
oho!!!!!! so many questions sai while studying did i get these many doubts or not but here all r doubts...
so ur the master of this ff na clear my doubts as early as possible understood...
otherwise i will give u punishment in reverse...
do u know wat the punishment is...guess n tell
good going sai...
continue... waiting...

thanks a lot akkiii
hmm u feel now the sttory is intersting really i really want to hit on ur head😔
unknown person u already know him buddhu
hmm hmm all ur questions will be answered soon until then sabar rakhiye dont worry aakkkiii
chadivi vadileyandi updates ni anta ekkuva pattinchukokandi k u will feel gud then
anyway hmm punishment šŸ˜† k i m ready akkiii
anyway thanks a lot for ur encouragement and for being one of my noblest readers
thanks a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Thanks for your updates and pm. I am happy because u gave us double update. I didn't expect this. šŸ‘
Anyway nice update yaar. Really v enjoyed it. But in ur every updates u will stop at last in a suspense.
For this v r really waiting for the next update curiously. Thanks yaar for the superb updated.šŸ‘

shlok got the phone call and it was telling about Swati. Her names always made him .He was more angry so he went to bar and drank full. He didn't go to AM he went to his guest house. Astha was getting worried so she called him but he didn't take the phone. Really felt bad for astha and shlok. Shlok was drinking in the guest house also. Astha was dying inside. She wants to see her shlok she wants to see him. She looked out side it was raining.
Always in raining time in every stories there willl be a hot romance yaar. U once again u proved it.
Really v enjoyed it yaar.
šŸ‘
Hmm romance in rain is always beautifulthank u chechi yes ending with suspense sometimes is gud but not always anyway u liked it na njoy the upcoming updates hope i wont disappoint u keep supporting me like this always
Astha decided to look shlok in his guest house. So she came in her two wheeler to guest house. She saw his car so she went in . She saw shlok. Seeing her he hugged her and after that it was too hot really I can't explain yaar reallyut was superb. So they consummated that day. But morning shlok didn't remember it but after sometime they once again met as real husband and wife. Itt was awesome
Sai really no words yaar. Reading ur ff it really encourages us to write more yaar. Anyway thanks for your super duper update.
thanks a lot chechi i jus wrote wat i thought i didnt really concern about ur wishes i thought to write watever and update one by one chapter daily but i didnt think u like it this much all credit goes to u ppl who r reading it even it is gud or bad thanks a lot chechi
Shlok was disturbed by the phone call. He doesn't know what to do. Astha observed him and asked what happened but he didn't tell anything. He only said he love her so much so don't leave him. Shlok astha will not leave you buddhu because she is in deep love with you and she is ur only drama queen. How can she leave u haan.
He dropped her in his house and gone to office because he wants to know who the hell is calling him by phone. Asthu was also thinking about shlok.

yes there is one person disturbing him a lot u will know the reason soon who he is and y he is doing all this thanks for ur wonderful colorful comments chechi Ashlok rocks wait till the end u will njoy it i hope so thanks a lot chechiii
Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode 38


Shlok was shocked "who the hell r u.." His voice was broken immediately he cut the call and called her. Tears started in his eyes. He was waiting impatiently Aastha phone uthao. Aastha saw her mobile and saw it is Shlok arey Shlok phone she cheerfully picked up. Aastha was going to tell.


Shlok "hello Aastha kaha ho tum kaise ho." Aastha felt weird "Shlok shaant ho jao shaant ho jao kya hua koi bura sapna dekhliya kya mujhe kya hua infact main ab baahar aagayi hoon main aai aur saubai shopping karne aai hoon aur mandir bhi gaye aap kyun achanak phone ki aur kya baat kar rahe hain aap." Shlok then released a sigh and said "kuch nahi Aastha main office main so raha tha bohut bura sapna aayi."


Aastha laughed and said "Shlok mujhe na aapki bohut yaad aa rahi hain jaldi ghar aao na." Shlok "Love u Aastha love u so much aur haan ghar jaane ke baad ek baar phone kar main kuch batana hain." Aastha "achcha teek hain." And he cut the call and wiped the tears. Ye kya ho raha hain kaun hain ye and then he got another call he quickly picked it. He heard someone laughing.


Him "Kya hua dar gaya." Shlok "kaun ho tum kya chahiye tumhe agar himat hain tho mere samne aao saale kya haal karunga tera." Him "cool down buddy there is lot to come this is just a trailer from now u will be away from smile u will shed tears soon mark my words Shlok Agnihotri u and ur wife will suffer a lot from now u will know the meaning of the words difficult, tension and most of all hungry gud bye." And he cut the call. Shlok "hello hello." And he was hell shocked. Kaun ho sakta hain main jaanna padega. And he took his phone and went to police station.


Aastha and all the three of them returned to home and saw Jyoti running. Anjali "Jyoti kya kar rahi hain kyun dhoud rahi hain." Jyoti suddenly saw them and was shocked. Listening their voice she was shocked. Siddharth hid himself behind the pillar but his shoes was seen by Aastha and sensed something wrong.


Anjali "Jyoti kya hua I m talking to u." Jyoti "Kuch nahi aai vaise hi mujhe na something happened to my leg so I was running its like something stuck in my knee so I was just relieving it that's all aur haan Baba aap ki bare main poocha." Anjali saw her keenly and said "K." and they left. Aastha is more suspicious on Siddharth now ye kya ho raha hain mujhe pata lagana hoga.


Anjali went to Niranjan and said "Sahab aap ne bulaya aap jaante ho na ham mandir gaye hain." Niranjan "main ne kab bulaya main bas rest hi le raha hoon." Anjali "lekin Jyoti ne kaha aapne bulaya." Niranjan "wo aise hi tumse jhoot kaha tum jante ho wo jab bhi galat karti hain aise hi jhoot kahkar bat jaati hain." Anjali "achcha teek hain main aap ye Prasad khalijiye ham mandir gaye hain na."


Niranjan ate Prasad and felt relaxed. Aastha went to her room and thought to call him again wo achanak phone kyun kiya hmmm. She was very tired first of all he didn't leave any energy in her today morning and she didn't eat bcoz Shlok didn't eat and then she went out she needs a sound sleep so she didnt think about anything and just put her hand bag on the table and just collapsed on the bed and drifted into sleep. She didn't eat anything too. Anjali realised it by seeing food on the kitchen table as it is.


She called Aastha. She didn't come haan ye ladki kaha gayi hamesha aisa hi careless karti hain and she went to her room and saw her sleeping like a child. Anjali smiled and came near her and placed her on bed nicely and removed her hair strands from her face and kissed her on forehead and smiled. She decreased the temperature of ac and covered her with blanket.


She also closed the door and didn't allow anyone to disturb her. Anjali went away and saw Siddharth going somewhere. Anjali "Siddharth tum kaha jaa raha hain." He stopped suddenly and saw her in fear. Siddharth "kuch nahi wo uncle so rahe hain na I will go to home once if u allow me." Anjali "achcha teek hain aur ek baar un logo ko bhi yaha le aao koi baat nahi teek hain."


Siddharth felt heavy in his throat and said teek hain and he left. Jyoti saw everything from behind and smiled herself. Shlok rushed to police station and asked them help. They too listened the tape of the recordings of all those calls. Policeman recognised him and asked "tum vahi ho na us ladki ko apni guest house main rakha uski protection keliye."


Shlok "haan ab kyun pooch rahe ho uski bare main." Policeman "I think this is due to that I mean someone might have avenged u for that someone were against Avdoot so I think they were avenging u for that." Shlok "nahi Sir if that is the case then y do he need to speak about Swati who was existed in my life b4 all this." Policeman "teek hain Mr Shlok Agnhotri we will try our best if u want protection we will give u."


Shlok "nahi nahi I want it to be secret I don't want to disturb them khamoka paresshaan hojate wo log I want to know whether it is fake call or is it anything serious that's it." Inspector "aap chinta mat kijiye we get these type of complaints often we will find it definitely aap mujhe wo theen number dijiye we will inform u if we get any clue." Shlok gave those numbers and said bye to him and left to his office. Ye sab kya ho raha kaun mujhe pareshan karna chahte hain kisko hain itni himmat.


Aastha had a sound sleep and slowly got up and her room was dark. She didn't know wen she slept but she got up and felt cold and also blanket on her and was confused and got up and freshed herself and came down. Anjali was talking to Jyoti about her studies. Jyoti "Aai main ab band karna chahti hoon ye aakhri saal hain padai ki ye hone ke baad yehi job dhoondongi aap ki wishes chahiye mujhe."


Anjali "lekin tum abroad jaana chahte the na." Jyoti "nahi aai main aap log se door nahi jaoongi pls Aai main yehi kaam dhoondongi." And they heard voice of vessels from kitchen. Jyoti "Aastha vahini hain kya kitchen main." Anjali "hmm lagta hain uth gayi hmm ye ladki ek kaam bhi theek se nahi karsakti hamesha kuch na much gadbad karti hain." Aastha saw all the mess she created and shouted loudly.


Both looked towards each other and ran towards kitchen. Anjali was first and saw the whole mess. Anjali got furious "Aastha kya hain ye sab kitni baar kah chuki hoon sambhal ke rahna sambhal ke rahna lekin har baar kuch na kuch gadbad pucca hota hain teri saath." She saw all the wheet floor on her and on the ground. Aastha "aai pls aap mujhe baad me daantlijiye pehle mujhe uthao bohut dard hua." And she was crying in pain.


Anjali "Aastha Aastha kya hua kaha dard hua." And she was trying to lift her. Aastha caught her leg and was going to her room. Anjali helped her. Sojal came out to see wats happening. Sojal "Aastha kya hua." Aastha "haan aai ab saubai ye sab aapki vaje se hua hain kyun rakha wo wheet floor itni oopar aap jaante hain main bohut choti hoon isiliye aap jaan boojkar kiya hain aai iski vaje se hua hain.."


Sojal "haan mujhpe shak kar rahe hain aai aap iski baat mat le ye aise hi hamesha karti hain bohut badmaash hogayi aaj kal." Aastha "achcha teek hain I m sorry aap itni tension mat lo." Anjali "Sojal wo sab saaf karo jao main Aastha ko apni kamre pe le jaungi." Aastha mocked her by showing her tongue. Sojal also warned her by showing her finger. Aastha went to her room. Sojal smiled to herself and thought sach main gone case hain ye.


Anjali made her sit on the bed. Aastha laughed out loudly. Anjali thought isse kya hua achanak kyun has rahe ho. Anjali "Aastha kya hua kyun has rahe ho." Aastha again laughed out loudly. Anjali "Aastha mujhe gussa aa raha hain kyun has rahe ho." Aastha "aai mujhe kuch nahi hua hain aise hi acting kar raha thaw o sab dekhke socha ki aap mujhe daantlenge tho ye naatak kiya." Anjali "Kya!! Tum sach main bohut badmaash hogayi jao jo karna hain karlo." And she left.


Aastha thought kya ye sach main serious tho nahi hogayi na. Anjali left the room angrily. Aastha thought she really crossed the limits. So she went after her. Aastha "aai I m sorry sorry sorry." Sojal saw her perfectly alright nothing looks like any difficulty pain in her leg. Sojal "kya hua Aastha itni jaldi theek hogayi tumhari dard."


Aastha bcame silent "mujhe koi dard nahi hua main sirf majak kar rahi thi." Sojal "Kya!! Aastha tum sach main bohut badmaash hogay let Shlok bauji I will complain him u see wat I m going to now bcoz of u I cleaned the whole kitchen do whatever u want now." Aastha "saubai pls aisa mat kahiye pls I m sorry main aapki choti behan hoon na pls I m sorry pls maan jayiye na aur aai ko bhi thoda patayiye na bohut gussa hain mujhse."


Sojal "kabhi kabhi bade bade baate karte hain tum teek hain tum jao main dheere dheere aai ko pataoongi tum jao ab aai tumpe gussa hain dinner pe I will ask slowly." Aastha went to her room disappointingly and thought to call to Shlok she was hungry. She called him and asked "Shlok aapne khana khaya." Shlok said "haan Aastha I ate and I m busy pls don't call again baad main baat karta hoon." And cut the call. Aastha slowly came out of her room to face Anjali at the dining table.

Episode 39

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update Sai... Very relieving one...
Loved the their relationship ... .
Waiting for vilian and shlok's past...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update, relaxed to see nothing happened to aastha, nice going, again suspense started- who is the one waiting to create problems, waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update😳
Loved the way you portray Aastha's relationship with sojal and anjali...😳
Curious to know more about the vilain

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