***Ek Ajnabi Rishta*** rajveer naina (lrl) part 16 on 2 thread - Page 48

Originally posted by: Milleegarg

Yar tumhe kaise bhul sakti hu
Actually thora busy chal rahi thi
Bs isliye
Waise nxt part kav update kar rahi ho
Ab wait nai Ho raha
Tumhara update toh pehle hi par liya tha maine
Bt long comment dena tha isliye socha free hoke comment karungi
Ab long comment mil gya na
Ab jaldi se long update kar do
Nd thanx
Baki to yar mehnat tumhari thi
Accha lga tumhe pasand aayi
Luv u

thank u ji for ur long update ...
Wase bhi chotu comment me maza nahi aata ..
next update long hoga for u 😳 i will update on Saturday night ...abhi toh lekha bhi nhi h kuch
n yes bohat tasty bani thi sabji ...Maine same recipe se aalu bagen bhi bana liye 😉 dekha kitni chalu hu m ...wase bhi cooking is not my cup of coffee its too strong for me baby 😆

Originally posted by: RNforever

thank u ji for ur long update ...
Wase bhi chotu comment me maza nahi aata ..
next update long hoga for u 😳 i will update on Saturday night ...abhi toh lekha bhi nhi h kuch
n yes bohat tasty bani thi sabji ...Maine same recipe se aalu bagen bhi bana liye 😉 dekha kitni chalu hu m ...wase bhi cooking is not my cup of coffee its too strong for me baby 😆

Ll wait 4 long update babes
Update soon
Ohh smart girl hmm
Aise hi chalta raha toh but jald cooking sikh jaogi mam
I must say
😉
Chalo 1 baat or pta chali tumhare bare mai
Mam ko coffee bdi pasand h kyu 😉

Originally posted by: Milleegarg

Ll wait 4 long update babes
Update soon
Ohh smart girl hmm
Aise hi chalta raha toh but jald cooking sikh jaogi mam
I must say
😉
Chalo 1 baat or pta chali tumhare bare mai
Mam ko coffee bdi pasand h kyu 😉

thank u thnk u ji
yes i love coffee specially strong one...
jitni strong utna maza 😉
but tum mat pena tumhare liye sahi nhi h

bole to update is jhakkaas 😉

Originally posted by: anju_panghal

bole to update is jhakkaas😉

aajkl time hi ni milta yar..exams ki taiyari ufff...

isliye aaj ye part padha h ..

ab to bs raj naina k scenes dikha do...

waiting😊

thank u 😃
hmmm late comment kiya par kar diya na ...arna maine toh aone readers ki girte sankhya dekh kar socha ki update karna he band kardu ... 😉
jab aap jase readers nhi toh hum lekh kar kya kare gay

***Ek Ajnabi Rishta****


Part 7




Sab naina ke ase baat karne se bohat khush ho jate hain...
Naveen woh toh itna khush tha ki kuch bol hi nahi paa raha tha ...



Naveen : (happily ) bacha tu yeh kase...mera mtlab alekh ki tarah kase ...


Naina : (with small smile) woh bhai Mumbai me toh sab aise hi bolte hain na toh ...bas isliye mujhe bhi aati hain ..yeh tapori language...


Shalini : mumbai??? Tum Mumbai me rahti thi...


Naina ne haa me ser hila diya ...


Pooja: oye toh phir tu yaha ambala me kya kar rahe thi ... Yaha kase aaye kon the wo log ... Tere saath aisa kyu kiya ...tu phele se janti thi kya unhe ...



Pooja bina naina ke jawab ka intzar kiye sawal kiye jaa rahi thi ...
Aur naina pooja ko uske ateet ke bare me puchte dekh kar dar gayi ... woh apna beeta hua kal yaad nahi karna chati thi ...dar ke wajah se naina ke ser pe pasine aane lage aur ..jab Naveen ne yeh dekha toh usse gussa aa gaya ...usne sabko kaha tha ki koi bhi naina se uske bete hue kal ke bare me nahi puchega ...



Naveen : (angrily ) shut up cadet ghai ...maine kaha tha koi bhi naina se yeh sab nahi puchega apko samjh nahi aati koi baat ...



Pooja Naveen ko gusse me dekh kar dar jati hain ...

Sab bilkul shant ho gaye pure room me bas naina me seskiyo ki aawaz aa rahi thi...


Naveen ne jab naina ke rone ki aawaz sunni toh turant uska gussa shant ho gaya aur woh naina ko chup karane laga ...



Naina : (hugging Naveen) bhai mujhe yaad nahi karna woh sab ...mujhe nahi karna wapas se yaad kuch bhi ...kyu kiya unlogo ne mere saath aisa kya bigada tha maine unka ...kyu mujhse mere jeene ki har ek wajah cheen le unhone ...

Naina Naveen ke gale lage rone jaa rahi thi aur Naveen usse chup karane me laga tha ...



Naveen : (consoling her) bas baccha chup ho jaa ...kuch yaad karne ki jarurt nahi hain tujhe ...jo bura hona tha ho gaya ab bas sab acha hoga ...khushiya hogi aur kuch nahi ...



Naina : (still crying) par bhai mere saath hi kyu???? maine toh kuch bhi nahi kiya tha ...woh sirf ek hadsa tha...maine nahi mara tha usse ...toh phir kyu unhone baba ko mar diya ...




Sab naina ki baat sunn kar shocked the naina aakhir bol kya rahi thi ...
Maine nahi mara ???? Baba ko mar diya ????


Kisi ko kuch samjh hi nahi aa raha tha ...aur sabse jada toh Naveen confused tha ...kyuki naina aur woh apne papa ko papa kahte the toh ab yeh baba kon hain ...kiske marne maarne ki baatein kar rahi hai...




Shalini naina ke pass aa kar baithi hain ...


Shalini : (confused) naina tum yeh kya bol rahi ho ...kon baba...kisne kisko mar diya ??? Tumhara toh kidnap hua tha na ...phir ????



Naina kuch nahi bolti apna muh Naveen ki seene me chupa leti hain jase sabke sawalo se bachne ki koshish kar rahi ho...usse kuch bhi yaad nahi karna tha ...



Naveen : please shalini usne kaha na usse kuch nahi kahna ...toh phir rahne do ...


Abhimanyu : par Naveen naina kya bol rahi hain ...unki baat toh samjhne dejeyi...



Naveen : (angrily) jab woh comfortable nahi hain kuch bhi batane me toh kuch bhi puchne ki jarurat nahi hain usse ...



Alekh : par sirf apun log bas ek bar...


Alekh itna he bolta hai ki Naveen usse dhurta hain aur woh chup ho jata hain ...


Naveen naina haath pakad kar usse anadar room me le jaa raha tha ...


Raj : ek minute Naveen ...


Raj yeh kah kar naina ke samne aa jata hain ...



Naveen kuch bolne wala hota hain ki raj kahta hain ...


Raj : bas ek minute Naveen main naina ko force nahi karuga kuch bolne ke liye bas ek baat kahne hain usse ...



Naveen kuch nahi kahta aur raj naina ke samne khada ho jata hain ...



Raj naina ko uske shoulders se pakadta hain ..aur dono ke body me ek alag si lahar mehsoos hoti hain ...



Raj : (holding her from shoulders...deep looking in her eyes) main tumse yeh nahi kahuga ki apna beeta hua kal baato yaa usse yaad dila kar tumhare purane jhakhmo ko taza nahi karuga ...
Main bas itna kahna chahta hu ki tum ek bar me he apne aandar ka sara dard nikal do ...yuh bar bar tumhare ateet ka jekar hoga aur jane aanjane hum sab tumhe takleef dete rahe gay ...
(Naina raj ki aakho me bas dekhe jaa rahi thi)
Bas ek bar himmat kar ke apna beeta hua kal baata do ...taki koi jane anjane bhi tumhe takleef na de ...naina dard batne se ghatta hain aur apne aandar chupa kar rakhne se woh dard nasure ban jata hain ...

Main bas itna chahta hu ki uss dard ko nasur bane se phele hi tum usse apne andar se nikal phako ... Yaha hum sare tumhare apne hain ...tumhare khushi chahte hain ...aur yeh (pointing toward Naveen) tumhara bhai ...usse toh kuch dekhta hi nahi hain tumhare alawa din raat sote jagte bas ek hi dua karta hain ki uski behen thik ho jaye ...phele jasi uski gudiya ban jaye...


Ek bar himmat karlo apne aandar ka dard nikal do apne bhai ke liye hi sahi ...koshish toh kar ke dekho ...


Naina Naveen aur baki sabhi aakho me aasu the ...


Naina : (Naveen ko dekhte hue) main bataugi...batogi apna dard apne bhai ek saath ...apne bhai ke liye...



Naveen : dekh baccha koi jabardasti nahi hain agar tu comfortable nahi hain toh mujhe aisa kuch nahi jana ...



Naina : (with full determination) nahi bhai aaj main yeh dard apne andar se humesha ke liye nikal dena chahti hu ...rajveer ji bilkul sahi kah rahe hain ...dard jitna main apne andar rakhugi woh mujhe utne he taklif dega ...aur phir mere taklif se apko taklif hogi jo main kabhi bardash nahi karugi ...


Phir naina Naveen ka haath pakad kar usse sofe pe baitha deti hain aur khud uske bagal me baith kar uske kandhe pe ser rakh kar apne ateet ko yaad karne lagti hain ...



Naina : puchiye kya jana hain aap logo ko ...


Shalini : naina tum Mumbai kase gayi...aur baba kon hain ...tum toh apne papa ko papa kahti thi na Naveen ke jase ...phir baba kon????



Naina : babaaa...(yeh kahte he uske chahre pe ek bohat he khubsurat se smile aa jati hai...) Baba mere baba...jinhone mujhe pala hain ...maa baap ka har ek farz nibhaya hain ..unhone ...



Sab confuse ho rahe the naina ki baat sunn kar ...



Abhimanyu : par aap toh kidnap hue thi na.. Toh phir ...


Naina : haa mere zindagi me bura waqt toh tabhi shuru hua tha ...jab mera kidnap hua tha ...mujhe laga tha ki wahi aant hain mera par agar bhagwan na chaheyi tab tak kisi ko kuch nahi hota bas main bhi bach gayi ...waha se aur mere zindagi me ek nayi kahani shuru ho gayi...



Raj : kya mtlab????



Sab naina se kuch na kuch sawal kar rahe the par Naveen wo bilkul chup baitha tha wo bas naina ka haath thame tha...
sach toh yeh tha ki woh naina ka ateet sunna hi nahi chahta tha ...kyuki duniya me shayad hi koi bhai hoga jo apni behen ke saath aisa kuch hua sunn kar bardash kar sake...
Naveen bhi bas naina ke ateet se bhagna chahta tha kyuki wo dard uske bardash ke bahar tha...




Naina : jab mera kidnap hua toh papa ne kisi bhi tarah ka soda karne se mana kar diya aur jab unlogo ko laga ki ab main unke kisi kaam ki nahi hu toh woh logo mujhe marna chahte the...par mere kismat achi thi main yaha se nikal ke bhag gayi...par jab waha se nikle tab pata chala ki main toh apne shehar me hi nahi hu...




Yudi : what do u mean ...shehar me nahi ho...


(Guys jab naina kidnap hue tab woh log apne ghar pe the nainital me)



Naina : hum nainital me rahte the par wo log mujhe kidnapping ke baad dosre sheher le gay ... Delhi...main delhi me thi tab ...un logo se jaan bachte bhag rahi thi ek anjan sheher me ek 8 saal ki bachi apno se dor ...bhukhi pyass se mera bura haal tha ...tab mujhe ek masiha mila ...mere liye toh wo bhagwan se kam nahi the ...unhone mujhe khana khelya...
Phir Maine unhe btaya ki kase un logo ne mera kidnap kiya aur ab mujhe marna chahte the ...
Tab woh mujhe apne saath apne ghar le gaye...unhone mera bohat khayal rakha...
Woh akele rahte the ...unki biwi aur beta ek car accident me mare ja chuke the koi nahi tha unka iss duniya me ...

Unhone mujhe apne beti ki tarah rakha ..mujhse kaha ki main unhe baba kah kar bulau...


Aise hi kuch din unke saath beet gaye ...phir maine unse kaha ki mujhe mere ghar jana hain mere maa papa bhai ke pas toh woh mujhe le kar nainital aaye...


Main choti thi tab address toh yaad nahi tha mujhe par baba ne kisi tarah mere ghar ka pata lagane ki koshish ki aur mujhe waha le jane lage par ...raste me hi hume woh terrorist mil gaye shayad woh abhi bhi mere talash me the...


Baba ne mujhe un sabse kisi tarah bachaya aur waha se bhag gaye ...baba ne dar kar delhi bhi chod diya ...


Main unke jeene ki wajah ban gayi thi ...baba ka kahna the ki main unki andheri zindagi me jeene ki wajah ban kar aayi hu ...

Uss din ke baad baba ne mujhe aapne parivar ko bhul kar ..unke saath ek nayi zindagi shuru karne ko kaha ...

Main dari hue thi ...ab mere pas baba ke siwaye koi nahi tha ...main unka haath thame chal padi apni nayi zindagi ki taraf...

Woh ek ajnabi the aur usse ek ajnabi insaan se mera """Ek Ajnabi Rishta"""" jud gaya tha ...

Kahne ko koi nahi the woh mere par ab main unki aur woh mere duniya the...

Apni asli pariwar ke yaad ke naam pe mere pas kuch tha toh woh sirf yeh tabizzz


(Naina ne apne gale me wo tabizz ko chute hue kaha )



Abhimanyu : tabhi aap uss din itne panic ho gayi thi ...jab apki tabizz kho gayi thi...


Naina ne haa me ser hila diya...



Ali : phir kya hua naina ...



Naina : (with small smile ) hum mumbai chale gaye ...baba ne waha kaam dhundh liya hum bohat khush the waha ...baba mujhe maa baap dono ka pyaar dete ...mere har ek zidd puri karte ...


(Naina ki aakho me ek chamak aa gayi apne baba ke bare me baat karte hue ...sab yeh baat notice kar rahe the ...aur Naveen woh naina ko aise khush dekh kar smile kar raha tha )


Naina : (excited) to Naveen) pata hain bhai ...main bohat shararat karti thi baba ko khub pareshan karti thi ...
Aur baba woh toh mujhe sharart karte dekh gussa hone ka natak karte ...asal me toh unhe mera sharart karna bohat acha lagta ...
jab aas pados ke log mere shikayat karne baba ke pas aate toh baba unke samne mujhe khud daante...aur main rone lagti aur jab woh log chale jate tab baba mujhe manate chocolate dete aur kahte ki agli baar main aur jada shararat karu...


Baba ne he bigada tha mujhe...

(Phir zor zor se haste hue) aur pata hai bhai kabhi kabhi toh main baba ke saath he masti karti thi unke kurte me cockroach dal deti...
Baba bohat gussa hote par phir khud he shant ho jate ...
Pata hai mere favorite kaam kya tha ...( naina Naveen ko dekh kar puch rahi thi ...Naveen ne naa me ser hila diya)


Naina : (very proudly) ladko ko petna ..(sab yeh sunn kar harani se naina ko dekh rahe the...LADKO KO PETNA ???? yeh wahi naina hain jo aaj ke time me ladko se itna darti hain...naina apne ateet ke sabse khubsurt palo ko yaad kar rahi thi aur apna sara dard bhul gayi thi) aur nahi kya kya ...yeh ladke jada smart bante the na toh main sabko peet deti thi...sab baba se shikayat karte ki unki beti nahi beta hain woh bhi ek no.ka gundaa jo jab dekho sabko petata rahata hain...
Pata hain main toh kapde bhi ladko ki tarah hi pahna karti thi ... Mujhe yeh ladkiyo wale kapde pasand nahi the ... School me sab mujhe tomboy kahte the kyuki sari ladkiya makeup karti boy friends banti aur main sabse ladi jhagda karti ...in short gunda gardi karti thi main...
(Aur phir jor jor se hasne lagi)

Pata he nahi chala aise kab waqt beet gaya ...maine apni schooling bhi complete karli ...pata hain bhai.. top kiya tha maine mere school me12th me ...(proudly)

Bohat padhai ki thi maine ...baba ne kaha tha ki agar main top karugi toh woh mujhe scooty delaye gay ...
Waise toh mujhe bike chaheyi thi par baba ne kaha ladki ho scooty he milegi ...(making face) toh mujhe scooty se hi kaam chalana pada

Aur phir jab maine top kiya toh baba ne mujhe ek bohat achi scooty delayi thi...



Naveen aur baki sab naina ki baato me uski khushi uska bachpana mehsoos kar rahe the ...kisi ko pata he nahi tha ki naina itni shararti thi ...)))




Naveen : (with big smile ) acha ji mere pyari gudiya ne top kiya tha 12th me very good ...phir tujhe scooty bhi mil gayi ...uske baad kya hua ...tumne apni scooty se kitno ka accident kiya ...



Naina : (with wide eyes) apko kase pata maine apni scooty se logo ko thoka tha...
(Haste hue) pata nahi gali ke kitne logo ko apni scooty se maine thoka ...
Baba toh scooty dila kar bhi pareshan ho gaye the mujhe kahte the ki tu toh mujhe chan se jeene he nahi degi ...
Scooty dilaya toh yeh haal hain bike delata toh kya karti ...



Sab naina ki baat sunn kar hass rahe the ...



Huda : arre yaar maine toh tujhe meena kumari samjha tha tu toh phoolan devi nikli...


Naina : (proudly) phoolan devi nahi jhasi ki rani kaho...mere waha toh sab mujhe yahi kah kar bulate the...


Pooja : oye naina ab aage bta phir kya hua ...uske baad toh tune college join kar liya hoga na ...waha bhi khud masti ki hogi na



College ke naam se hi naina ke chahre ka rang udd gaya ...
Shayad wahi se shuru hue thi uski zindagi ka sabse ghenoni kahani...


Naina : (with fear) college???... M..woh..m...

Sab naina ke yuh haklane se samjh jate hai ki ab wo waqt aa gaya naina ki zindagi ka jise shayad woh kisi se batna nahi chahti thi...



Naveen : (take her hand in his) kya hua baccha ...tu kuch bol kyu nahi rahi...



Naina : (baat talte hue) bhai mujhe neend aa rahi hai ...main sone jaa rahi hu ...



Aur bina kisi jawab ka intzar kiya naina waha se chali gayi...yaa yeh khadu ki almost bhagte hue andar room me gayi...



Sab confused rah gaye ki yeh achanak hua kya ... Naina apni kahani sunate sunate ...yuh bhag kyu gayi...



Alekh : apun ko lagta hai shayad college me he kuch hua hoga ...


Shalini : you are right alekh ...warna jo ladki itne khush thi apna bachpan yaad kar ke woh achanak dar kyu gayi...kyu apni kahani adhuri chod gayi...



Abhimanyu : i think hume unse baat karni chaheyi...



Naveen : nahi rahne do abhi agar woh nahi batana chahti toh mujhe nahi jana ...



Raj : par Naveen mujhe lagat hain hume naina se baat karni chaheyi...aaj agar usne himmat karke apne andar ka dard bahar nikal diya toh aage aane wali zindagi bohat aasan ho jayegi uske liye ...



Naveen raj ke baatein sunn kar soch me pad jata hain ...



Alekh :Naveen sir apun ko lagta hai rajveer sir bilkul thik kah rahi hain ...



Naveen jaa kar apne room ka darwaza khatkhta hain ..par naina koi jawab nahi deti ...


Naveen : (knocking door) baccha please darwaza khol ...dekh ek bar mujhse baat karle agar tujhe sahi nahi lagta toh tu kuch mat btana koi kuch nahi kahega tujhse ...i promise...



Naveen ki baat sunn kar naina darwaza khol kar bahar aati hain ...



Naina ki aakho me aasu the...


Naina : (with tears) aap mujhe galat toh nahi samjhe gay na ...jase sabne samjha tha ..maine kuch bhi jan kar nahi kiya woh bas ek galti thi ...mera bachpana jiski saja mujhe aur mere baba ko mili ...



Naveen : (cupped her face ) main kabhi bhi apni behen ko galat nahi samjh sakta ...main bas tujhe tere uss dar se nikalna chahta hu ...(with tears) sach kahu main jana hi nahi chahta ki aakhir hua kya tha tere saath ..kyuki kisi bhi bhai ke liye yeh bardash karna bohat muskil hai par raj sahi kahta hain ...agar ek bar humne himmat karke uss dard ka samna kar liya toh aage ki zindagi bohat aasan ho jayegi ...



Naina ek bar raj ki taraf deti hai ...kahi na kahi naina ko raj ki aakho me dekh kar ek takat ...himmat mil rahi thi apna beete hue kal ka samna karne ki ...



Naveen naina ko wapas sofe pe baithata hain ...


Naina : main bohat khush thi ..baba ne scooty delayi thi...mujhe mere maan pasand college me admission bhi mil gaya ...bada college tha kafi mahga... shehar ke bade bade gharo ke bache aate the usme padne ...par mujhe waha admission milne me jada preshani nahi hue kyuki top kiya tha maine ...scholarship mile thi mujhe aur mere ek saheli ko hum dono bohat khush the aapni nayi life ko le kar ..nayi zindagi naya college naye dost ...sab kuch naya naya ..par mujhe nahi pata tha ki mere zindagi ke yeh khush ke pal kuch hi waqt ke hain ...uske baad sab badlne wala hain ...
mere zindagi me ek aisa grahan lagne wala hai jo mujhe aur mere baba dono ko khatam kar dega ...(with tears) sach kahu toh shayad maine khud he barbad karli apni zindagi ...apne haatho se ..sabne roka mujhe kitna kaha ki usse dor rahu ..par maine kisi ki nahi suni ...kash uss waqt maine sunn le hoti sabki baat toh aaj iss hal me nahi hoti main...



Ali : aap kisi baat kar rahi hain naina ...kiski wajah se hue apki zindagi barbad ...kon tha woh.



Naina : mere zindagi ka sabse bada grahan tha woh ...RISHI...


END OF PART 7


Love Arti

nice update. raj se naina ko himat milti hai waah. bt ab yeh rishi kaun hai?

Very loving update

Gr8 going Arti dii

wow mrs raj tok dia pane iss update mein naina was a tomboy😆 hhehe kuch kuch mein bhi😛