***Ek Ajnabi Rishta*** rajveer naina (lrl) part 16 on 2 thread - Page 50

Originally posted by: rinku95

Superb
Continue soon
Thank for pm

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

Part 7..

ok thank u.. i am glad Rajveer aaj update mai dikhaa..

haaay mera hero har jagh..

mazaa aagaya...

Naina ka ateet till now bht hi acha hai.. ek aam natkhat ladki ki tarh..

hope Rishi Garewal na ho.. coz Sujal Garewal ka bhaai se mai nafrat nahi kar sakti.. please Rishi rakh lou bt surname change..

tk cr dear

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

Awesome dear

Originally posted by: manaalkhan

wow...!! Kya zabardast Update thi..!!
Finally naina ka past reveal ho rha hai..!!
can't wait to know who was rishi..
& raj's words to naina were so emotional..!
Lovely update.. continue soon &
thanks for the Pm..!

Originally posted by: RNforever

Thanks dear 😃

Tumhare liye he raj ko har jagah dekhaya h maine ...ab toh khush hona 😃

Rishi well yes maime ussi rishi ko soch kar yeh character lekha h ...but m isko rishi grawal ka tittle nhi dogi bas rishi he rahega ...hope ab tumko problem na ho imagin karne me bas rishi ko yaad rakho not rishi graewel

Yar,aaj ki update to mind blowing thi pta hi nhi chla kb khtm ho gyi,
Pta hai apki story mein ek chij hai jo real lrl se milti hai,are waise to bhot si batein hai jaise naina naveen ka pyar,naina alekh ka pyar, huda ka charm,bt ek bat or hai wo ye ki just like lrl yha bhi raj naina mein ankho hi ankho mein ishara to hone lga hai,
Pr ye rishi kaun,are sujal ke bhai ko yha rajveer ki naina ke life mein kyu uthalayi,,
.waise naveen ka gussa pehli bar dekha, lrl mein to wo bechara khi khi hi dikh jata tha pr yha pr to full angry young man bna dala.

Mujhe title bhot pasand,hai, ek ajnabi rishta,or just like previous update is part mein bhi kya use kiya uska.
Waise na naina pr ye bechari abla nari wala look suit bhi nhi krta,wo to phoolan devi hai.



Maine khi padha tha ki ek writer jo likhta hai ya to wl khud khi na khi waisa hota hai ya uska ekdum opposite, to aap ke case mein to mujhe naina or aap milte julte lgte ho

Maina janna chahungi ki hmari writer sahiba bhi khi ladko ko peet to nhi deti hai na

Continue soon, wait kr kr ke buddhi ho jana maine
Love
Shweta

Finally she's coming out if the shell, good for her also that she gets strength through Raj's words that's even better, she's developing trust in Raj.

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

chalo koi nhi birthday boy ko letey hai VarunDhawan.. uska naam b toh Rishi hai na ABCD2 mai

ok ji ap jisi chahe usse imagin karo its upto u ...but n toh rishi grawal ko he imagin karne wali ho aakhir lekha toh maine usse soch kar he h ueh character 😉

Originally posted by: mylifereality

Yar,aaj ki update to mind blowing thi pta hi nhi chla kb khtm ho gyi,
Pta hai apki story mein ek chij hai jo real lrl se milti hai,are waise to bhot si batein hai jaise naina naveen ka pyar,naina alekh ka pyar, huda ka charm,bt ek bat or hai wo ye ki just like lrl yha bhi raj naina mein ankho hi ankho mein ishara to hone lga hai,
Pr ye rishi kaun,are sujal ke bhai ko yha rajveer ki naina ke life mein kyu uthalayi,,
.waise naveen ka gussa pehli bar dekha, lrl mein to wo bechara khi khi hi dikh jata tha pr yha pr to full angry young man bna dala.

Mujhe title bhot pasand,hai, ek ajnabi rishta,or just like previous update is part mein bhi kya use kiya uska.
Waise na naina pr ye bechari abla nari wala look suit bhi nhi krta,wo to phoolan devi hai.



Maine khi padha tha ki ek writer jo likhta hai ya to wl khud khi na khi waisa hota hai ya uska ekdum opposite, to aap ke case mein to mujhe naina or aap milte julte lgte ho

Maina janna chahungi ki hmari writer sahiba bhi khi ladko ko peet to nhi deti hai na

Continue soon, wait kr kr ke buddhi ho jana maine
Love
Shweta

thanks shweta 😃
its such a big compliment for me ki tumhe story lrl jasi lagi kuch h jo dono me same h ...thank u dear
Naveen well in this story abhi maijly mera sara focus Naveen Naina pe h unka rishta unka pyaar unka trust ...toh bas Naveen ke kayi naye rang dekhne ko mile gay tumhe anger young man se le kar sweet bro tak...

i think writer wo lekhta h jo wo mehss karta h..jo wo apne aas pas dekhta h ...maine bhi wo he kiya h ...but yes ladko ko peta bhi m maine coz like naina in lrl m bohat short temperd hu 😉

Originally posted by: sridhsc

Finally she's coming out if the shell, good for her also that she gets strength through Raj's words that's even better, she's developing trust in Raj.

Very well written, keep up. When can we expect next update.

thanks sri 😃
dera raj pe trust devlop nhi karegi toh jayeg kaha naina ...aakhir aana toh raj ke pas he h usse ... 😉
i will update on next Saturday ...i always update once in a weak ...