||Twinj OS:Frozen In Time|| - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazingly written... I loved the part he talked to his reflection. It was very adorable...
This cockroach has had a big role play in TwiNj's life 😆
The dialogues were also bang on
I enjoyed reading it

All the best for your exams 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved it
i read it like 3 times because i enjoyed every emotion it conveyed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Shakti...

unres yayyy first
and big kisses and hugs for the dedication! you are the cutest!! love you natasha!! ❤️❤️❤️

girl i read this thrice! i loved it that much! how can you write sooo well!!!

omg the way he was missing her, the way he felt incomplete without twinkle in the room, the way he walked passed her room and prayed that the door wasn't locked - uff the feels!!

i absolutely LOVED LOVED LOVED their entire bedroom convo! i felt like i was watching it rather than reading it! the way they both needed to pretend, even if it was for just a few minutes, they both needed to be near each other!

and gosh i felt for twinkle, i wanted to cry for her!! and kunj - yaar just hug her 😆😆 the way the both understood each other perfectly!

and the best part the return of the cockroach 🤣🤣🤣 oh god we just gotta love that cockroach!! and how adorable! kunj instantly felt bad when he made twinkle feel bad and he automatically tickled her to get that twinkle wali smile back! - that was the cutest!! i hope they show something like that in the show too!!

i absolutely loved this one natasha!! (waise i love all your OS's 😆😆) but i loved this one the most 😃😃😃 (not bc im biased at all from the dedication 😉😆😆)

and thank you for dedicating this to me 😳😳 i feel honored and im so so so so so happy we became so close through this forum ❤️


Di!a biggg huggg your way!you know how much i love your comments🤗

Thank you so muchh😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

this is literally so precious I can't basically OMG I'm all feels. They miss each other so much and he wouldn't call her back but stayed with her!!

Loved that line where he talked to his reflection about trying to get her interested in him despite being her husband.


Areeba im so glad you liked it,thank you😃😳

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

aww this was so beautiful. loved every bit of it. excellently written <3


Thank you so much Jerry🤗

Originally posted by: zaara610

Wow..Loved it..Awesome os..well written..😊


thank you😃

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

Wonderful OS 😳
Loved TwiNj bedroom conversation
Very well written 👏


thanks a bunch Anisha😃 that is my fav part too😉

Originally posted by: Duumps

An awesome OS.

Very well written.


thank you so very much😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 17.sonal

Veru Very beautiful OS...

Kashhh Aise koi scnes thy show in TEI...
I loved hw Despararte Kunj ws for her...
Flighting is Ego jus for His Syappa Queen...
Loved it..


Sonal so so glad you enjoyed reading this,thank you😃

QUOTE=Aalina.]Wow... Amazing yar..beautiful..

Thank you Aalina😃

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Amazingly written... I loved the part he talked to his reflection. It was very adorable...
This cockroach has had a big role play in TwiNj's life 😆
The dialogues were also bang on
I enjoyed reading it

All the best for your exams 😊

Aint Kunj adorable😆 you are right about the cockroach😉

thank you so muchh😳

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