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CHAPTER 10. KAUN HO TUM? PREET YA GEET!

Geet Handa was not a happy person. No! Wait! She was Khurana now! Yes! So Geet Khurana was not a happy woman. Why would she be? It has been only few days since her marriage and her marriage was already on rocks. Her husband refused to speak with her or even remain in the same room as her. And the main problem was Geet did not understand why her husband took such extreme measures. So she fell asleep on two nights after the wedding instead of celebrating their marriage but that did not mean he should leave the room and start to avoid her! It was too extreme action for one simple mistake. And he could have woken her up too right? But he did not do that! He did not wake her up but instead got offended! Hey Babaji! What an ajeeb husband Geet got!

"Phitte mooh tera!", Geet ranted as she paced in her room, "Bas hogaya Mr. Khurana! Bahut chalaali apni manmaani! Arre! Main jaldi so gayi toh usmein meri kya galti hai!", she paused and then, "Actually meri hi galti hai! Par... Par... Par Maan aap mujhe neend se uthaa nahi sakte the kya? Nahi! Woh aap nahi karenge! Aap toh kapda, boriya bistar uthaake baaju waale kamre mein shift ho jaayenge! Babaji!", she looked up and glared at her Babaji, "Kis namoone se meri shaadi karwaadi? Yeh mila tha aapko mere liye?", then she frowned, "Nahi! Yeh galti bhi meri hai! Main hi thi jo inse milne se pehle inki deewani hogayi! Uff! Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha! I am so confused! Ab main kya karun Babaji?"

Geet pouted as she finally sat down on their bed. No! Not their bed anymore! It was only hers nowadays! Geet sighed as she thought of what to do. She still remembered how six days back she was excitedly preparing the room for her wedding night. It was the night after their reception and Geet was excited to take their relationship to next level. But then.. then... then she fell asleep! Babaji! Jisne bhi neend ko banaaya na uska main gala ghot dungi! Mere wedding night ka bhi kabaada kiya aur meri shaadi bhi barbaad kardi!

For last six days, Maan had avoided Geet. Infact, the only reason she knew that he lived in the same house as hers was because Daadima had yet to say anything about it. But he never came in front of her. He went to exercise around the time she woke up and came back precisely when she was in shower. And by the time she was out, he was gone to office without even eating breakfast. And he came home only after she fell asleep. She tried to change the time of her shower hoping to catch him coming to his room but it seemed as if he had sixth sense in knowing when she went to shower. Because he managed to get in, shower, get ready and get going before she could even pin her dupatta, brush her hair, apply her sindoor and step out of her room.

But today Geet had enough. She had waited for Maan to cool down and become normal with her but six days was too much for Geet's patience. I am going to bridge this gap between us, either by hook or by crook. Beware Mr. Khurana, I am coming!

Geet stormed over to her grandmother-in-law's room.

"Daadima! Help!", Geet spoke as she stopped in front of Daadima who was seated on the sofa reading a magazine.

Daadima blinked in surprise. Shaadi ko sirf aath hi din toh hue hain! Already Geet beta madat maangne aagayi? Hey Babaji! Maan ne aisa kya kiya?

"Kya hua Geet beta?", Daadima patted the seat beside her and Geet sat down with a pout on her face. As she opened her mouth to tell everything, she remembered her parents telling her about how Daadima was unwell. She closed her mouth. Poori ram katha sunaaungi aur Daadima ki tabiyat kharaab hui toh? Nahi nahi! Mujhe aur kuch sochna hoga!

"Woh Daadima... Kya haina ki...", Geet fiddled with her duppatta unsure of how to say the matter in gentle way and not give Daadima a heart attack in the process.

Daadima simply thought that Geet was feeling shy and smiled at her pota bahu.

"Daadima... Haan! Daadima Maan aur mere beech mein jhagda hua hai! Aur aap toh jaanti haina ki woh kitne ziddi hain! Bahut manaaya par maane nahi! Toh main soch rahi thi ki Maan aur main kuch time akele bitaayein? Lekin usmein mujhe aapki madat chaahiye!"

Daadima smiled at Geet, "Haan haan beta! Tumhein jo madat chaahiye hum tuhmein denge! Hum jaante hain Maan kitne ziddi hai aur unko kuch samjhaana kitna mushkil hai! Tum jo chaaho woh hum karenge!"

Geet smiled back, "Daadima! Main soch rahi thi ki kyun na terrace pe main ek romantic candlelight dinner rakhun? Lekin problem yeh hai jhagde ke baad se Maan jaldi ghar aate nahi hai! Toh aapko sirf itna karna hai ki unhein ghar jaldi bulaana hai!"

Daadima thought for a second as Geet nervously watched. Will Daadima accept her request? Hey Babaji!

"Plan toh achcha hai tumhaara beta!", Daadima spoke still in thought, "Lekin humaare paas isse behtar idea hai!"

Geet's eyes widened, "Kya Daadima?", she asked excitedly.

"Upar chhat pe dinner karne se achcha, tum dono humaare farmhouse kyun nahi chale jaate?", Daadima suggested and Geet blinked, "Farmhouse?"

"Haan! Dekho beta! Maan toh kaam mein busy hone ke wajah se honeymoon ko postpone kar chukka hai! Toh kyun na tum dono farmhouse jaao aur ek raat ke liye wahin reh lo! Tum dono saath akele waqt bitaa paaoge! Tum Maan ko manaa bhi sakti ho wahaan aur uske saath waqt bhi bita sakti ho!", Daadima explained while Geet's cheeks burned a little at the thought of honeymoon.

"Lekin Daadima hum aapko akela chodke kaise jaa sakte hain?", Geet bit her lip in worry. And her worry was not unfounded. Maan had confessed to her before their marriage that he wanted his wife to take care of his Daadima because of her ill health. She was not allowed to get any bad news and is not supposed to be left alone for too long! Infact, Maan had cancelled the honeymoon as he did not want to stay away from Daadima for too long. Work was just an excuse! Aur Daadima keh rahi hai ki hum dono inhein akele chodke kahin aur jaayein? Nahi!

"Geet beta! Uski fikar tum kyun kar rahi ho?", Daadima broke into her thoughts, "Hum ek raat akele nahi reh sakte kya?", Daadima frowned.

Geet shook her head, "Nahi Daadima! Maan aur main aapko aise akele nahi chod sakte! Nahi! Mera chhat waala plan hi achcha hai! Aap bas Maan ko jaldi ghar bula deejiye please!"

"Uffo Geet!", Daadima huffed, "Tum bhi na! Shaadi ko che din nahi hue, aur tum bhi Maan jaisi ban rahi ho! Akele nahi chod sakte? Hum kya chote bachche hain? Achcha theek hai! Hum shaam ko NT ko yahaan bula lenge! Waise bhi reception party ke baad hum usse mile bhi nahi! Aaraam se hum uske gappe ladaayenge! Ab toh theek hai?"

Geet still looked worried and Daadima narrowed her eyes, "Geet! Its my order! Tum dono farmhouse jaa rahe ho matlab jaa rahe ho! Aur yeh tumhaari Daadi Saas ka order hai!"

Geet sighed in defeat and nodded.

"Toh theek hai! Hum NT ko bula lete hain! Tum use humaari davaaiyon ke baare mein bata dena aur phir Farmhouse ke liye nikal jaana! Wahaan jaake tayyaariyaan bhi karni hogi!", Daadima spoke, "Hum

shaam ko Maan ko farmhouse bhej denge!"

Geet nodded and left to get things ready while Daadima started to dial NT's number.

Maan sighed as he kept the phone down. It was five in the evening and he had got the weirdest call on his phone. Daadima had called up saying Dev wanted to meet him at the Farmhouse to talk about something. When Maan had enquired why Dev had not called him right away Daadima had said Dev did not have his phone number. But that was not what Maan felt weird about the phone call. No! The weirdest thing was that at the end of the conversation, Daadima had said not to worry about her as NT is with her. Daadima ne aisa kyun kahaa? Main kyun unki fikar karun? Ghar mein toh Geet hai hi! Maan shrugged. Forget it! He turned to focus on his report wanting to finish reading it before he left. Dev would not mind waiting for a while, would he?

Shaam ke saat baj gaye aur yeh Maan abhi tak yahaan nahi pahunche! Kya hua? Geet paced the floor of the farmhouse. The farmhouse was a one story house with a bedroom on the upper floor and living room and kitchen below. The farm house had a big lawn in front of it which led to the main gate of the compound. Except Geet there was no one in the area as she had given the security guard a day off, the gardener came only in the morning and the cleaning maid came only once a week.

As Geet paced, she worried kept on glancing at the glass doors of the house. Daadima ko phone karke poochun kya? Nahi! Unko kyun tension dena? Main aur thodi der wait karti hun! Lekin... agar woh nahi aaye toh?

Then Geet looked around and another worry came to her mind. There were things to be set up that can only be done few minutes before Maan arrived. Mujhe unke aane se 15 minutes pehle pata lagna chaahiye ki woh aa rahe hain! Woh kaise karun?

Suddenly, an idea sparked in her head and Geet smirked. She dialed up her husband's office number from her phone. His secretary lifted it. Geet introduced herself and asked if Maan was still in the office. The secretary was used to getting calls from Geet in last few days so happily replied that MK Sir was still in the office. Geet requested the secretary to call her once Maan left for the day and cut the call. Problem solved!

Maan blinked in surprise as his eyes fell on the time. It was after 8 PM. He closed in eyes with disappointment. Daadima ne kahaa tha jaldi farmhouse pahunchne ko! Aur main late hogaya! Maan shook his head. He stood up and placing all the documents in its place, he walked off. He had an appointment to keep. Better late than never! Maan did not notice his secretary dialing a number as he walked off.

Maan reached the Farmhouse and looked around. Why was there no light? And where is the security guard? Dev bhi na! Guard ko drinks lene baahar bheja hoga! Not new for them! Many times Dev and Maan had partied in the farmhouse or sat talking about their problems with a glass in their hand. But why are the lights off? So gaya kya?

With curiosity Maan reached the main door and raised his hand to knock. But as he knocked the door opened by itself. Yeh kya tha? For a second, he was reminded of the Lodge where he first met Preet. No! It was Geet! Maan's eyes turned hard but he shook his head as if dislodging the thought out of his head. No thinking about your wife Maan! Your best friend and cousin brother needs you! Focus on that!

As Maan entered the house, he frowned. Yeh candles kyun lage hain har jagah! His eyes widened as he took in the amount of candles lit around. Yeh toh abhi lagaayi hui hogi! Dev ne abhi candles kyun lagaayi? Light chali gayi hai kya? As he stepped inside, out of nowhere music started playing. Ab yeh kya naya drama hai?

And then his eyes fell on the person standing in the middle of the floor with her back towards him. It was a lady dressed in a maroon saree with brown sleeveless blouse. Payal adorned her ankles while her wrists were filled with bangles. Her long hair was left open and as the wind blew from the open door behind him, the hair moved aside giving him a glimpse of her smooth back. Just then the drum beats in the music started and she started to move with it. Every move matched the beat and all Maan could do was watch curiously. What is happening here? Who is this lady dancing? Where is Dev?

The music slowed down and guitar started to play. "Kaun Ho Tum?", Maan whispered as he walked few steps ahead. He took in a sharp breath as the music silenced for a second and the lady turned. It was Geet! She looked at him seductively just as she continued to dance with the music. Maan could only watch mesmerized as his wife danced like a siren bewitching him with her every move. Then the drum beats started again followed by a female voice singing.

Yeh Pyaasi Mohabbat

Yeh Pyaasi Jawaani

His wife continued to dance sensuously while keeping her eyes right on his face.

Adhuri Adhuri

Yeh Dil Ki Kahaani

She lip synced with the song as she started to come closer to him.

Jhuki Hui

Hai Raat Yeh

Maan was unable to look away from Geet as she raised her hand and gently placed it on his cheek.

Ruki Hui

Hai Baat Yeh

Her other hand inched up to his chest and Maan's felt his heart speed up.

Yeh Chaandni Raat Aage Chale

Geet pulled his face closer to her.

Ho...Kuch Pyaar Ki Baat Aage Chale

Suddenly, Maan remembered. He was supposed to be angry at Geet. He stepped back and Geet pouted.

Yeh Pyaasi Mohabbat

Yeh Pyaasi Jawaani

Geet winked at him as she continued to dance in front of him. He could not help but stare at her.

Adhuri Adhuri

Yeh Dil Ki Kahaani

Her eyes looked at him with love, her body tantalized him.

Jhuki Hui

Hai Raat Yeh

She again crept closer to him.

Ruki Hui

Hai Baat Yeh

He looked away but Geet simply smiled.

Yeh Chaandni Raat Aage Chale

She pressed a kiss on his cheek making him look at her in shock.

Ho...Kuch Pyaar Ki Baat Aage Chale

He pulled away from her and walked few steps away. Geet did not take his action to her heart and started to dance with the music. Maan looked at her sideways and was confused. Isn't she the same girl who did not want to do anything with him? She claimed that they had no relationship! Then why this sudden change? Yeh ho kya raha hai? He looked on confusedly as Geet danced over to him.

Kab Kaun Jaane Kahaan Chala Jaaye

She placed her hand on his chest as she looked at him imploringly.

Mausam Yahaan Se Wahaan Chala Jaaye

She continued to lip sync the song.

Aisa Na Ho Yeh Samaa Chala Jaaye

Maan looked into her eyes confused by her sudden change.

Oh... Kab Kaun Jaane Kahaan Chala Jaaye

The intensity of her eyes captured him and he was unable to look away.

Mausam Yahaan Se Wahaan Chala Jaaye

Maan did not notice Geet's fingers nimbly unbuttoning his black vest over his shirt.

Aisa Na Ho Yeh Samaa Chala Jaaye

Maan finally looked away unable to handle the love in Geet's eyes.

Jhuki Hui

Hai Aankh Bhi

With one hand she nudged his cheek and made him look at her again.

Ruki Hui

Hai Saans Bhi

Her fingers sneaked over to his tie but he did not notice, too lost in her eyes.

Kuch Toh Mulaqat Aage Chale

With a smirk on her lips, she unknotted his tie.

Ho.. Kuch Pyaar Ki Baat Aage Chale

Maan, unable to handle his feelings anymore, pushed her hand away.

Yeh Pyaasi Mohabbat

Yeh Pyaasi Jawaani

Geet continued to dance as Maan turned away from her.

Adhuri Adhuri

Yeh Dil Ki Kahaani

He closed his eyes as Geet hugged him from behind. Maan clenched his hands tightly as they itched to gather his wife into his arms. He was shocked when he pulled away from her and his vest slipped away. He turned around and looked at her in shock just as she grabbed his tie and pulled it off too.

Geet smiled at him mischievously while waving his vest and tie at him. When did she get time to unbutton my vest and remove my tie? Geet stepped over to him and tried to grab the collar of his shirt. He grabbed her hands to stop her but Geet was undeterred. She simply kissed his hands and Maan dropped her hand right away. Geet giggled and Maan turned to walk away. Geet grabbed his hand.

Bol Yeh Nazar Yeh Zubaan Chali Jaaye

She stepped in front of him with her back to him, grabbed his hands and tried to get him to hug her.

Yeh Dil Gaya Ab Yeh Jaan Chali Jaaye

When Maan resisted, she turned around and grabbed his shirt, pulling him close.

Dur Dur Tak Yeh Daastaan Chali Jaaye

With both her hands she jerked the shirt and pulled it apart. He looked with wide eyes as button fell all around.

Bol Yeh Nazar Yeh Zubaan Chali Jaaye

She placed kisses all over his chest.

Yeh Dil Gaya Ab Yeh Jaan Chali Jaaye

With a growl he grabbed her hair and yanked her away from him.

Dur Dur Tak Yeh Daastaan Chali Jaaye

As he took in her alluring eyes and her luscious lips, his grip on her hair loosened.

Jhuka Hua

Hai Aasmaan

Her hand sneaked from his shoulder to his neck and she pulled him closer.

Ruka Hua

Hai Yeh Jahaan

He leaned forward finally giving up on his anger.

Saara Jahaan Saath Aage Chale

She smirked at him and pulled away making him frown.

Ho... Kuch Pyaar Ki Baat Aage Chale

She signaled him to follow her and went up the stairs. He smirked as he followed her.

Yeh Pyaasi Mohabbat

Yeh Pyaasi Jawaani

He entered the bedroom where he found her waiting for him.

Adhuri Adhuri

Yeh Dil Ki Kahaani

He grabbed her hand and placed a kiss on her knuckles.

Jhuki Hui

Hai Raat Yeh

He pulled her close and lifted her in his arms.

Ruki Hui

Hai Baat Yeh

He placed her on the bed and bent forward.

Yeh Chaandni Raat Aage Chale

His hand pushed away an errant hair strand from her face and she closed her eyes.

Ho...Kuch Pyaar Ki Baat Aage Chale

She looked at him as he leaned closer. His eyes flickered to her lips and to her eyes giving her chance to move away. But she did not budge. She simply looked at him with emotion filled eyes. Maan could not stop himself anymore and placed his lips on hers. He lovingly kissed her letting her know through his lips how much he loved her. Her hands snaked up his neck to his hair and she pushed him closer and Maan was overwhelmed because finally he and Geet were going to be husband and wife in every manner.

Just then Maan was pushed off Geet and he fell onto the floor. He looked up at Geet confused as to why he pushed her.

"Yeh kya kiya aapne?", Geet whispered as she looked at him with horror. Maan frowned. What wrong did he do? Didn't she want what he wanted?

"Hey Babaji!", Geet placed her hand on her lips horrified. Her eyes looked at him with fear and Maan was shocked. Why was she scared of him? She looked around in fear, "Yeh main kitthe aagayi?" She looked at Maan with panic, "Tussi mennu kitthe laaye?"

Maan's eyes widened more. Didn't she drive over here in one of the family cars? Then how she does not know how she came here? Maan stood up and took a step towards her. Geet, in alarm, stood up on the bed, "Mere kol na aana! Main keh rahi hun mere paas na aana!"

It then clicked to Maan that Geet did not recognize him. Something was wrong here! Something was very very wrong! He was so lost in thoughts that he did not notice Geet noting his distracted expression and taking action. He came out of his thoughts only when he was pushed out of the way and he looked at as his wife ran down the stairs. He followed her, "Geet! GEET!"

Maan reached the ground floor and saw Geet heading towards the door of the house. She pushed it open and ran out just as Maan followed her. She ran towards the main gate of the property and Maan worried that he will loose her the moment she stepped out of the property. He put a burst in his running speed just as Geet's foot hit a stone and she fell down.

"GEET!", Maan was horrified as Geet fell down. He neared her and bent down. He turned her around and was shocked to see her forehead bleed while her eyes were closed. He looked around and saw a sharp stone lying there. She must have hit her head on it, he thought.

"Geet! Geet!", Maan mumbled worriedly as he patted her cheeks but Geet did not react.

"Geet! Utho please!", Maan pleaded but Geet did not open her eyes.

"Please Geet!", Maan whispered.

"GEET!"

Oh my!

Ab kya hoga?

The song is from the movie Gupt (1997) picturised on Kajol and sung by Alka Yagnik!

Next update, the mystery finally starts to open up slowly!

Thank you, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

Edited by Kalpana_KaCy - 9 years ago
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Loved chapter 10 👏
Eager for the next part, mystery deepens, what's happening to poor Geet.
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Confusion is increasing day by day
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ye kya, itna accha romance chal raha that, maaneet itne kareeb aagaye the n then again geet preet ban gayi... waiting for next
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finally some action.
kitna tadapaya maan ko. ab use bhi doubt hua

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