VIDHA SS: I Am Nothing Without You - Page 13

Originally posted by: sura123

Wow..

It's amazing Barbie... Loved it😊

Romance part was awesome😆

thank u so much..😳..i am glad that u loved it..really..was the romance part good?..i took almost an hour to write it...i dont know how all the writers write romantic novels...😕😆😆

Originally posted by: simplejoy

Third r fourth eksathe porlam.fatafati romance likhechish tui.
Janishna married couple ki kore ,tai na? Eta ki bolli reee tuiii.hahahaha.
Anyway u made this track look better.u r really better than d cvs.
Keep writing and entertaining us.

ami tai bhabchilam je tumi 3rd part e reply koroni keno but bujhechilam je may be u did not get time to read it and will surely read them when u r free😃..

Originally posted by: mehraan

Hey Bb...nice writing n a good start for taking up writing...ur surely talented dear...I loved how vipu exposed Raja using his smartness n intelligence...N loved the romance...!!!Can imagine wholeheartedly imagine Vidha hugging each other passionately

yes vipu is intelligent in my story...and u keep on imagining their passionate hug and smooch😆😆 and then take a cold shower because vidha is too hot to handle😆...thanks for appreciating my work..will try to write more when I will get time😃

Originally posted by: --HANSA--

wow end too
awrsome each part are too good well written too love it

thank u so much...i am happy that u loved my SS...but seriously yaar this is my first SS and its too tough to write stories...u r an experiienced writer..I am wondering how u people manage to write so many stories...My poor hairs..i have become half bald while writing this one😆...anyways i am really glad that some betters writers like u have found my story intersting😃

Originally posted by: Dolly-heart

Barbie , you did a fantastic job. You have nothing to worry about, you are going to be a great writer , one day.

Your romantic scene definitely did not look like a first time. Next you will be soon be going past the kiss to slow and caring loving... and then the next phase will take... you and your imagination to next level...

Good luck...

No dolly, this is the my first SS and second story I have written but yes credit definitely goes to the hundreds of romantic novels which i had read (i am a book lover but dont read too many english stories...but koi bhi language mein ho..romance is same everywhere😆...anyone can make guesses about how a couple romances or kisses without themselves being experienced in those fields😉) and the romantic movies which i see😆😆..

Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

thank u so much...i am happy that u loved my SS...but seriously yaar this is my first SS and its too tough to write stories...u r an experiienced writer..I am wondering how u people manage to write so many stories...My poor hairs..i have become half bald while writing this one😆...anyways i am really glad that some betters writers like u have found my story intersting😃

happy to know you too came in our place now n know how its difficult to do Ff Ss

have you edit part one from pg 1

The romance portion was too good...loved it ...😳