ISHRA FF YE KAISA MOHABBAT HAI part 14 pg 144 may 3

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Hey Sanjana 😊

This story is mystryly & confusingly interesting! 😆

Cause it starts with Raman being super angry seems as if Ishu & Ruhi are afraid of him ... As the plot advances we get to know that he loves them a lot but there is a reason behind his behavior ... He is misunderstaning Ishu it seems cause she wants to clear things out too ... But the circumstances were against her ... What is this Abi doing in middle ?!

... Raman behaved badly with Appa but later when we come to know he had gone to him to ask for apology we get a soft corner about Raman 👏 super twist he is not that bad ... You have said us y Raman is angry but still there are lost of mystries it sees ...👏 Which makes the plot very interesting ... & very well done Character Sketch but some also makes us arise questions .. Hope we will get the answers soon 😉

(Just my thought : Shagun traditional girl 😆 hahaha lol ... joke of the year! But interesting diferent point of view)

Eagerly waiting for your updates & thanks & Pls Pm me 😊

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PART 11

Before 15months

Shagun:Raman I want that please

Raman:what is this shagun,you want ice cream at this odd hour

Shagun:you know why I am asking this at this time

Raman:Because I will not say no to you

shagun:No buddy,there is a reason,can you guess?

Raman: Hmm you want to trouble me...

Shagun:No

Raman:you want to show the world how caring your husband is?

shagun:no,no...

Raman:ok then say why are you asking ice cream at this time

Shagun:I want to eat sour things also

Raman:you want eat sour things...means Raman's lips curved through his smile and shagun bends his head to down with blush

Raman cups shagun head in his hands and title up her head to see him

Raman:means...

shagun:Ha Raman,I am expecting

Raman lifts her into air and says really shagun I am going to be father...

Shagun:Raman I am pregnant,what are you doing keep me down

with that Raman makes her sit on the bed and says shagun from today onwards no no,from now onwards you don't do anything,you take rest

shagun is very happy soul because she is going to experience a new stage of her life that is motherhood

Raman:you said this news to maa and papa

Shagun:No Raman,I think that it is good to say first to my baby's father

Raman:then lets go we will say this good news to them

Raman:Before that I want to say something

Shagun:Raman thank you so much for giving this precious gift of my life to me ,today I am very happy

Raman kisses on her forehead and says I am not giving you a gift I am getting a gift from you,my baby my bundle of happiness

shagun hugs Raman and the are in same position for some time

In the living room

Raman feeding sweets to one by one shagun stands in corner with a little smile in her face

Toshi:what are you doing puttar?why you are feeding sweets to us ,did you got any contract?

Raman not contract maa I got promotion

Om:what promotion Raman?

Raman:I got promotion from husband to father

All persons faces are filled with happiness,toshi hugs shagun and om hugs Raman and congratulates them

Rinky:congratulations Bhabhi and bhai

romi:hugs Raman and congratulates him

Toshi kisses her and says thank you so much puttar you are giving very very valuable gift to us

shagun tries to take blessings from her but Raman stops her and says what are you doin shagun you are pregnant you are not supposed to bend ok

Toshi:ha shagun you take care of you and the baby our blessings is always with you

Raman:and ha from now onwards you don't go to hospital ok

Shagun:Raman I am doctor I know how to take care of myself

Toshi:share this good news with Madhavi ji also

shagun:ji mummyji

After sometime Raman and shagun went to iyer and shares this good news with them

Amma:amma kisses shagun's forehead and says we are her happy meri kanna

Appa:congratulations beta

Raman:thank you appa

Shagun:very is my sweet honewali mousi

she went to clinic for an emergency

Shagun:when she will come?

amma:she is on the way she will come by fifteen minutes

meanwhile Raman gets call from Mihir and he leaves by saying he has urgent work

amma :you sit shagun she will come

meanwhile Ishita games and hugs shagun from back side

Ishita:shagun di

shagun:how you know that I am here?

Ishita:magic...

shagun:what magic ishu please tell me na baba

Ishita:nothing di I saw your slippers on outside

shagun pulls ishita's cheeks by saying meri noti sister

Ishita:leave it na di ,my cheeks became red

shagun:Vo,only this is the matter or you don't want give this chance to us because of abhi

Ishita:stop it na di ,I don't want talk about him now says a little furiously

shagun:ok ok don't be angry on me ,if you don't like it then I will not talk to you about this matter now

Ishita:it's ok di but what is the reason for your sudden visit,according to my knowledge jeju never leaves you a minute,how he sent you here,is there any matter

shagun blushes

Ishita:why di why you are blushing this much?

amma interrupts she is blushing because she I going to be mom

Ishita got up and enjoys like a kid by jumping on the floor

after enjoying enough time of jumping di it's so sweet di ,I am going to bi chitti ,I am very happy di,and takes her hand and kisses on her hands

meanwhile Raman calls shagun and informs her that he will come by one hour to take her to home and the same was informed to amma by shagun

amma:shagun you know tomorrow is ishita's engagement then why you want go now stay here you will go tomorrow after completion of Ishita's engagement,it is not good for the baby when you move from one place to another place unnecessarily

after that Ishita also request her so much and shagun accepts to stay and informs the same to Raman ,Raman agrees for that after so much of instance by shagun

Next day morning

In phone

shagun:what is this Raman?you are son in law of this house,you have some responsibility towards this house also

Raman:I know baby what can I do now it's very urgent meeting I have to attend,I will come after completion of my meeting and I will try to come as soon as possible

shagun:tek hai it's is that much important for you,and ha don't drive fast to come to function drive slowly and come peacefully and I will manage everything here

Raman:I know shagun you will understand

shagun:take care of yourself Raman

Raman:you to and take care of my baby also

shagun:ha ok I will take care of your baby

with that he cuts the call

engagement was a silent affair the one and only person who is not happy with it means Ishita she is not interested but acts as a happy because her parents want to see her married and abhi is on cloud nine,he is enjoying the moment rather than enough and all are happy Ishita also some where because due to her marriage her sister and her parents are happy

abhi wears ring on ishita's finger and Ishita also did the same and priest announces that the ritual is over

after some time they fixes marriage date after one month fifteen days all agrees happily and abhi's family leaves later bhalla's also leaves along with shagun

days went off like this amma and toshi pampers shagun whenever they get chance and Raman also takes her some beautiful places to change her mood swings and also fulfils all her wishes with out saying no and Ishita buys so many toys for the baby,actually she went to shopping to buy the stuff which is needed for her marriage but ends up with the buying toys for her sisters baby

After one month

shagun leaves to hospital like as usual and she went outside but not finds the driver their and she waits for minutes and then she leaves by her own

after 10 minutes of driving she I going on some busy road ,she takes u turn to not hit a small girl and ends with a big accident and her head got injured and she immediately taken to hospital and after knowing that news of shagun's accident all reached hospital along with Raman and ishu

alll are crying ,Ishita tears have no rest she is crying vigorously on amma's lap and toshi consoling Raman who is not ready to stop his crying

at last doctor comes and says that her head got injured very much,we can't do anything I am sorry

by the time Raman grabs his collar and acts like a mad man ,what do you mean sorry ha ,you are a doctor,you have to save her,

doctor:behave yourself Mr bhalla it is very hard to digest the fact but this is the truth she has only few hours to live

Ishita tears are falling continuously

Raman :please doctor save her I will give whatever you want,please save my wife

doctor leaves and romi consoles Raman and make him sit on the bench ,after revalation that shagun has no more his makes him ideal and sits like a mud doll on the bench

meanwhile nurse comes and informs them that she get conscious and want to meet her sister,who is her sister

with that Ishita says I am her sister

nurse:please come with me

With that Ishita left to shagun

Inside the room

Ishita is crying by taking shagun 's hand into her hand

shagun:what happened ishu,why are you crying?if you will become like this then who will handle amma and appa

Ishita:don't worry di nothing will happened to you,everything will be fine says cryingly...

Shagun:I know ishu I am a doctor,I know don't have much time

Ishita:No di please don't say like this

shagun:first of all you stop crying and listen I want something from you

Ishita:what di

shagun:first promise me that you will do that for me without saying no

Ishita:I promise di I will so whatever please tell me what you want

Shagun:will you become surrogate mother for my baby

Ishita:but

Shagun:I know ishu I got injured on my head I am sure that nothing will happened to my baby you consult the doctor and asks him to transfer m baby eggs to your womb

Ishita:nothing will happened to you and baby di please don't say like this

shagun:please ishu give a chance to my baby to see this world ,go before it becomes late ,please...

Ishita calls doctor and doctor checks her and says her eggs not effected that much if they transfers them may be the baby will born

with in seconds they made arrangements to transfers her eggs into ishita's womb and successfully transfer them

before Ishita getting conscious shagun's breath was mixed on air

Days went on like this all forgets shagun but two persons are not who is Raman and Ishita

Ishita is some how better than Raman because of the baby I her womb but Raman become a drunkard

After two months in bhalla house

door bell rings

Mr bhalla:toshi ji see who is on the door

she open door and finds unconscious Raman on Mihir hand

Toshi:what happened Mihir ?

Mihir:aunty like as usual he is drinking their he felt unconscious so I bring him to home,but call doctor he is having high fever I think

with that Mihir makes him sleep on the bed,Mr bhalla calls doctor

doctor:what happened to him ?why he is drinking this much?I am warning you if he drinks like this his kidneys be in so much danger,please stop him to take drink ,I am giving some medicines,his temperature will get down

with that doctor leaves and Mihir also

Toshi ji cries seeing Raman,Mr bhalla consoles her but in vain because she is not stopping her crying,

toshi:if I leave him like this he will not come to our world I have to do something

om:what can we do now?

Toshi:shadi...

Om:are you become mad?how will get him married,he will not agree for this?

Toshi:you leave that matter to me I will handle him ,he will agree for me

om: If Raman also agrees to marry but who will agrees to marry him?

Ishita:is their some one who agrees for this

om:who?Toshi:Ishita...

Om:what?

Toshi:ha bhallaji,Ishita she will agree to marry Raman

Om:but why she will agree?

Ishita:because she is having Raman's kid on her womb

Om:but you know na her engagement is already completed then how will she agree?

Toshi:I will make her agree for this

Om:but you don't have right to force her

Toshi:she willingly accepts this proposal that was my promise to you

Next day in the iyer house

Toshi ji reaches their with some fruits

amma:how was Raman?

Toshi:he I ok but he is not eating on time he is not sleeping on time

amma also felt bad for Raman but she can't do anything

Toshi:(to amma and appa)I want to ask something from you for my Raman and I have full rights to ask

amma:what you want

Toshi:I want Raman and shagun's baby

amma and appa in one time:what?

By the Ishita who is listening their conversation from inside comes out and says what are you want to separate me and my baby

Toshi:see Ishita I don't want to separate you both but I don't have any other option because of this baby may be Raman will forget shagun,and for know your marriage is stopped but in future you have to marry abhi then your in laws will not allow you to take care of this baby

Ishita:I will not give my baby to anyone,if abhi don't accept my baby I will not marry him

amma:you don't worry toshiji,I will take care of baby ,I am also pati to the baby

Toshi:ok then you want baby ,we want baby so make it is for both of us by making Raman and Ishita shadi

amma ,appa and Ishita shocks

That's all for now dears

hope you like it dears

precap:will Ishita agrees to marry Raman?if yes then how she will reject abhimanyu,if no how will she handle toshi

Next update will as soon as possible based on response

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PART 12

Edited by Sanjana_IshRa - 10 years ago