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Part 19

Abhi- yaa bas low feel kar raha hun.

Pragya- ok tum abhi karo hum baad me baat karte hai.

Abhi- baad me sach me tum.

Pragya- aj kuch bhi ho jaaye mujhe baat karni hai tumse.

Abhi- ok, n he lying on bed pragya seat on sofa waiting for abhi wokeup.

At pragya's room.

Aanshi plying her game.

Kady came with excited- aanshi you are awesome.

Aanshi- i know that.

'Awesome nahi, to smart' joyti came with bulbul.

Bulbul- thankyou joyti.

Aanshi- thankyou joyti aunty ko kiu, mujhe kiu nahi.

Bulbul- thanks too you also.

Aanshi- ok.

Joy- aanshi tujhe nahi lagta tu bahot jaada jhooth bolne lagi hai.

Aanshi- aisa nahi karti toh mumma rude hi reheti.

Bulbul- yaa joyti she is right.

Aanshi- cute abhi sir kaise hai.

Bulbul- don't worry he is fine.

Aanshi- sachi me na.

Bulbul- haan tu fikar mat kar, chal dinner karte hai.

Aanshi- mumma.

Joy- call kar k puchu.

Aanshi nodded in yes.

Joyti called pragya, her phn vibrate, she pick up the call.

Pragya in voice- haan joyti bolo.

Jay- abhi kaisa hai.

Pragya- thik hai soo raha hai.

Joy- tum dinner.

Pragya- nahi baad me karungi, tum plz aanshi ko.

Joy- tum aanshi se khud baat karo.

She gave phn to aanshi.

Aanshi- maa u came.

Pragya- na bache u take dinner, after that u sleep.

Aanshi- ok maa.

Pragya- give call to joyti.

Aanshi gave her.

Joy- haan bolo.

Pragya- plz aanshi dinner kara ke sula dena, mai aaj sab kuch thik karna chahti hun.

Joy- abhi se aanshi ke baare me.

Pragya- koshish karungi.

Joy- hmm, take care ur self n him also.

Pragya- yaa, n end the call.

Joy to bulbul- tum dono ki anniversary kab hai.

Bulbul- next month, but why.

Joy- wo iss liye, weeding planner ki shaadi hone wali hai to wo teri shaadi ki planning nahi kar payegi.

Bulbul confused- means?

Joy- jaldi pata chal jaayega.

At abhi's room, pragya waiting for abhi woke up.

She search for something read, she found diary, she take it n seat to read.

She open n found her & abhi's shimla pic, which is pragya encircled her hands abhi's waist n abhi hold her tight by both his hands, pragya saw and create a smile on her face. Next page she open.

1st entry is love at first sight with pragya, which color she was wear, shirt , how many time she smile, how many time she check her phn, all is mention that.

2nd entry, is that she accepted his frndshp with big smile on her face.

3rd entry, is that he proposed he n she accepted him as BF.

All diary is only filed one name is pragya, pragya is these, that, likes, dislikes all are mention, after that he mention that incidence also with a sorry note, after all that entry end is, i m sorry, i miss you, i love you, plz come back in my life, its my fault, my lack of trust, she all read with terry eyes, abhi wokeup n saw pragya reading something he called her.

Abhi- pragya.

Pragya closed his diary n hide behind cushion, wiped her tears- haan, you ok, kuch chahiye tumhe.

Abhi- aahhh relax, i m ok, wo bhukh lagi hai, iss wajah se nind khuli, tum abhi tak yahi ho.

Pragya- haan wo tumhara stomach pain.

Abhi- haan thoda cum hai, tumne dinner kiya.

Pragya- nahi aakashna hai.

Abhi- mai order karta hun.

Pragya- no u go fresh , i order.

Abhi- ok, n he go for fresh.

After sometimes dinner came, pragya serav khichdi for abhi, he look at her n asked.

Abhi- tum dinner nahi karogi.

Pragya- no i am ok with salad.

Abhi question- diet & all haan.

Pragya- health k liye accha hota hai.

Abhi- yaa, they both take there dinner silently, pragya's phn ring, she pick the call, aanshi on call.

Pragya- haan baccha bol.

Aanshi- may i came there plz.

Pragya- no u can't, mai aa rahi hun thodi Der me, aap kya kar rahe ho.

Aanshi- doremon movie.

Pragya- ok mai thodi Der me aati hun.

Aanshi- ok bye n end the call.

Abhi- umm, u was told me k , u wanted talked with me.

Pragya- yaa but aanshi ko.

Abhi- its ok.

Pragya- if u don't mind, we meet in corridor.

Abhi- ok n he smile.

Pragya- mai jaati hun.

Abhi- which corridor.

Pragya- mine room, u 1st met aanshi, at aquarium side.

Abhi- ok, n pragya go to her room.

At pragya's room, kady n aanshi waiting for pragya. She came.

Pragya- hello, kady you go to bed.

Kady- bye aanshi, gn sd tc, she go to door.

Pragya- kaha jaao rahi hai.

Kady- maa ke paas, papa ne double room book kiya hai.

Pragya- iss ka kya kru, show other bed room.

Kady- umm band kardo.

Pragya- ok bye gud ni8.

Aanshi- how is abhi sir.

Pragya- he is ok, ek baat bologe, sachi-sachi.

Aanshi nodded in yes.

Pragya- uss din aap disturbed karne wale uncle bol rahe the, aaj subhe se aap unnhe abhi sir kiu bol rahe ho, aisa kiu n she seat beside aanshi n gave side hugged.

Aanshi- aise hi.

Pragya- aanshi don't lie with me, tell me the truth.

Aanshi- wo... Mumma.

Pragya gazed her- answer proper.

Aanshi- abhi sir mere papa hai.

Pragya take a deep breathe- who told you?

'Maine bola hai', men voice came, they both looked at voice.

Abhi- kal raat ko suresh ne mujhe baataya, AHH... Baataya nahi, he give me surety that aanshi is my, mujhe bas lag raha tha ussne bas, thodi Der baad aanshi suresh ko bulane aayi thi, wo aandar gaya lekin, meri aur aanshi ki aadat fish counting wo wahi par ruki, tab Maine usse kaha, that i m her father, madam boli, maa se puchkar baatati hun, beti toh meri hai 100% sure.

Part 20

Abhi conti- beti to meri hai 100% sure kabhi nahi hogi, saari gandi aadatein meri li hai, sab acchi baatein tumhari hai.

Aanshi- maa abhi sir is true.

Pragya with tears, she wipe tears n said- yes.

Aanshi- sachi muchi!

Pragya- haa, ur father abhi mehera n she lose her grip, aanshi get up n run towards him n abhi pick up her arm in his n give tight hugged with a lots off love, pragya saw them with teary eyes.

Aanshi brocked the hugged- aap phir se busy nahi rahoge na papa.

Abhi- what you said now.

Aanshi- papa aap humare saath rahoge na.

Abhi- haan aj ke baad papa kahi nahi jaayenge, aapke saath hi rahenge, always with you.

Aanshi- i love you papa.

Abhi- i love you forever.

Pragya saw aanshi n abhi's smiling faces, n she click pic on her mobi, unknown by both.

Pragya- aanshi its to late now, come go to bed.

Aanshi- 5mins maa.

Pragya- no 5mins.

Abhi- yaa she is right, jab aanshi ko nind aayegi tab wo soo jaayegi.

Pragya- arrey lekin.

Aanshi- kuch lekin wekin nahi mumma.

Pragya- as you wish, n she go to corridor. After an hour, abhi came n saw pragya reading something on her mobi.

Abhi- thankyou.

Pragya- she is you daughter, its ur right.

Abhi smile- phir bhi thankyou, itna sab kuch hua phir tumne aanshi ko.

Pragya- i was in love with u, aanshi mere jeene ki wajah bann gayi.

Abhi- i m sorry, what i did.

Pragya- its destiny abhi.

Abhi- pragya i wanted backed you in my life.

Pragya cut in middle- i m not old pragya abhi.

Abhi- so what.

Pragya- maa papa kaise hai.

Abhi- they both are fine, they both in kerla now for holidays.

Pragya- kerla!

Abhi- haan wo maa ko Change chahiye tha to, parso ghar aayenge, they missed you.

Pragya- u always meet them.

Abhi- maa papa tumse bahot jaada pyar karte hai, Maine galti ki thi ye baat tumne maa papa ko kiu nahi baatai.

Pragya- himmat nahi hui.

Abhi- i m sorry.

Pragya- mai nayi shuruvat karna chahti hun, but with some time.

Abhi- are you sure! I mean u take ur time.

Pragya- maa papa ko yaha bulao mai unnse milna chahti hun.

Abhi- u don't worry mai aakash ko bolta hun.

Pragya- aakash is here.

Abhi- yaa studies puri hui aa gaya,

lekin office abhi tak join nahi kiya hai.

Pragya- chota hai, join karga, waisa bhi wo join kare ya na kare office to tumhare hisab se chalta hai.

Abhi- usski side lena kabhi chodogi nahi na.

Pragya- mujhe dusara kuch kam nahi hai.

Abhi- tum change hone ka drama kar rahi ho pragya, like mujhse nafrat karna, aaj bhi wahi fikar karti ho, pragya tumhe aj tak jhooth bolna nahi aata.

Pragya- kya karu sach bolne ki aadat ho gayi hai.

Abhi- pragya kya tum wo baat bhula sakti ho.

Pragya- abhi kaha nayi shuruvat chahti hun.

Abhi- will u marry me? Without expectations from you, mai tumhe apni zindagi me chahta hun.

Pragya- maa, papa se milne k baad baatati hun, n she get up from there, good night, take a rest.

Abhi- yaa, she go to her room.

Next evening, prkash n sarla came to rajastan, aanshi n pragya came from shopping, prkash n sarla in pragya's room, aanshi n pragya came.

Aanshi- maa kal wo pink color ka teddy n fish also.

Pragya- aanshi Delhi jaane ke baad fish, jinte chahe utn... N she look prkash n sarla seat infront of her, her eyes filed with tears.

Aanshi- aap naanu naani hai na. Sarla nodded in yes, aanshi run n take blessing from them, pragya didn't said a single word.

Prkash- beta aap humne jaante ho.

Aanshi- haan, mumma ke paas aap dono ka photo Jo hai.

Bulbul came there- aanshi.

Aanshi- haan.

Bulbul- chalo tumhe kuch dikhana hai, aanshi go with her.

Sarla- itna sab kuch hua pragya tune humein baatana thik nahi samjha.

Pragya in crying tone- maa wo mam Dar gayi thi.

Prkash- sarla ye humari pragya nahi hai, Jo Dar gayi aisa bol rahi hai, bachpan se lekar uss din tak choti se choti baat share karti thi lekin yeh baat baata ne ke liye Dar gayi.

Pragya- papa aisi baat nahi hai.

Prkash- toh kaisi baat hai.

Pragya- i m sorry maa papa.

Sarla- tujhe maffi ek hi shart par milegi.

Pragya- konsi?

Prkash- parso shaadi abhi k saath.

Pragya- lekin papa.

Prkash- kuch sawal nahi, parso shaadi hai tumhari abhi k saath n he go from there.

Pragya- maa papa.

Sarla- tujhse naraz hai thode, tu prkash ki baat maan le pragya.

Pragya- thik hai maa.

After three days abhi pragya go married, pragya aanshi shift to Mumbai forever with abhi, abhi pragya's relation till not move, pragya wanted move but she stuck in between mind n heart. 15 days after marriage, pragya visit arora house, prkash is not in home, pragya asked.

Pragya- maa papa kaha par hai.

Sarla- clinic gaye hai.

Pragya worried- kya hua papa ko.

Sarla- kuch nahi hua hai, kuch na ho iss liye abhi lekar gaya hai regular check up k liye.

Pragya- abhi!

Sarla- haan wahi toh lekar jaata hai prkash ko clinic, 7 saal se wo bulbul, purab, purvi ne hi hum dono ko sambhal hai, tu ghar chod kar kiu gayi thi usska reason tune nahi baataya lekin abhi ne humein khud sab kuch baatya lekin bahot Der hogayi thi, sab kuch sach pata chala lekin tu yaha swara jaao chuki thi, beta abhi ne tumhe dhundne ki bahot koshish ki lekin tu kaha par hai baat pata nahi chali.

Pragya only listen her.

Sarla- pragya abhi k maff kar de aur Jo hua use bhul jaa aur aage badh, abhi tujhse aj bhi utna hi pyar karta hai

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19 and 20 is really amazingg
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Read all the updates in one go.Awesome updates, beatufully descirbed. Loved it. Continue soon plz.
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Part 21

Sarla continue- pragya abhi tujhse aj bhi utna hi pyar karta hai, jitna pehle karta tha, aur mujhe pata hai tu bhi usse utna hi pyar karti hai, karti hai na?

Pragya not answer on abhi's love- maa mai nikalti hun wo aj shaam ko aanshi sab ke farm house jaa rahi hai toh.

Sarla- thik hai sambhal kar jaa aur aapna khayal rakhna.

Pragya reached mehera mansion, abhi came from office n went to his room n saw pragya packing somethings.

Abhi- kaha jaa rahi ho.

Pragya- aanshi jaa rahi hai, sab ke saath.

Abhi- ohh! Tum bhi jaa rahi ho.

Pragya- nahi! Wo Mann nahi hai.

Abhi- ok, mai change karta hun.

Pragya- ahh! Abhi.

Abhi- haan.

Pragya- wooo.

Abhi- bolo.

Pragya- can we go for dinner out.

Abhi- after aanshi see off.

Pragya- ok, but where!

Abhi- ur fav.place.

Pragya only smile n abhi went for change.

They both see off to aanshi, pragya give too much instructions to aanshi and also does n don't list, after sometime they go for dinner, that is there first date place.

Abhi- thankyou.

Pragya- kis liye.

Abhi- bahot saal baad yaha par aaya hun.

Pragya- same here n smile.

Abhi- koi khaas wajah.

Pragya- ghar par baata dungi.

Abhi- ok, dinner order karta hun.

Pragya- pehle se hi order kiya hua hai.

Abhi looked at her amazement- are you ok?

Pragya- mujhe kya hua hai.

Abhi- nahi, tum mere saath aj kuch alag behave kar rahi ho.

Pragya- accha nahi lag raha hai.

Abhi- accha nahi lag raha hai, infact special feel ho raha hai.

Pragya- tumhe nahi lagta tum drama king ho gaye ho.

Abhi- tum Jo villain hui ho n smile.

Pragya also smile.

Abhi- aj bahot dinno baad clg days yaad aaye.

Pragya- me too, how carzy i am that days.

Abhi- haan, baat aj bhi change nahi hui, sirf jeans chodkar tum Saree wear karne lagi ho.

Pragya- kuch bhi.

Abhi- arrey seriously am i! See tum uss din no me bidas thi, Jo aj bhi ho, jhagda wo aj bhi karti ho, rudeness also same with all, dil me koi baat ho to usse chupane ki koshish bhi karna tum aj tak sikhi nahi ho, jaise ki tumhari narazgi mujhe Waha par aanshi k saath dekh kar hi dur ho gayi thi lekin EGO Jo mehera's me bhara hua hai, uss EGO ka asar hai tumhe.

Pragya blushed core of heart.

Abhi- pragya ab bahot ho gaya yaar ruthana manana, sab chod dena.

Pragya- wahi mai bhi bolna chahti thi, not done yaar tum meri line kaise bol sakte ho.

Abhi laughed on her- aa gayi meri tom boy.

Pragya hits on his hand.

Abhi- arrey! Mar kiu rahi ho.

Pragya- how can you called me tom boy.

Abhi- kiu tum nahi ho.

Pragya- ab 6years bachhi ki maa hun.

Abhi- toh kya hua, tum mere liye wahi pragya ho.

Pragya- ghar chalo phir batati hun.

Abhi- ye baatane ke liye tum mujhe yaha lekar aayi thi.

Pragya- nahi.

Abhi- toh phir kya.

Pragya- kuch nahi.

Abhi- pragya these not done yaar.

Pragya- everything is done in love & war.

Abhi- ab samjha aanshi ko dadi amma karne ke piche tumhara hi haath hai.

Pragya stand n said- mujhe tumse baat hi nahi karni hai n she go from there.

Abhi- pragya sunno toh.

They both seat in car.

Abhi- pragya ab toh thikh se baat karo, jab dekho tab nak (nose) pe gussa rehta hai.

Pragya- ghar jaldi chalo na.

Abhi- thik hai mat baat karo mai bhi tumse baat nahi karunga, n abhi also not talking with pragya, they both reached home, abhi went to his room with grumpy face, pragya also followed him, he go directly in change room.

Pragya wait for him, he came after sometime, wearing his night kurta payjam, n stand in balcony. Pragya in hear- ufff! Ye gussa aj bhi wahi hai, mujhe pata hai ye gussa kaise dur karna hai, she go in kitchen n came with kulfi bowl.

Pragya- for you.

Abhi- mujhe nahi chahiye.

Pragya took bowl on table n she take her right hand on abhi's left shoulder- sunno toh.

Abhi- bola na nahi baat karni hai.

Pragya stand infront on him- itna gussa suit nahi karta.

Abhi- didn't said a word. Pragya encircled her hand by abhi's neck.

Abhi- chodo mujhe.

Pragya nodded in no and she tight her grip.

Abhi open his mouth to say something but pragya took her her on his lips and started to kiss him, first abhi not responsed her, but pragya not in mood leave abhi's lips, sometime abhi also response her kiss, the kiss is now in passionately one, sometime later they both brocked the kiss, for take a fresh air.

Pragya- pehle hi kaha tha jis din tum aise gussa hoge tab mai aise hi kiss kar ke tumhara gussa thanda karungi, haan ye baat alag hai tab maine kaha tha ke cheek par, abhi officially shaadi hui hai to.

Part 22

Pragya- pehle hi Maine kaha tha jis din tum gussa hoge tab mai aise hi kiss karke tumhara gussa thanda karungi, haan ye baat alag hai tab Maine kaha tha ke cheek par but abhi officially shaadi hui hai toh.

Abhi didn't say anything n she scoop her in arm, pragya hold his neck.

Pragya- abhi mai gir jaaungi.

Abhi- nahi girogi, mai humesha rahunga tumhe sambhal ne ke liye.

Pragya- humesha.

Abhi- forever.

Pragya- i love you.

Abhi took her on bed- i love you too n he started nuuzzled her.

Pragya- abhi.

Abhi in nuuzzled states- hmmm.

Pragya- door is open.

Abhi- ghar me koi nahi hai aur mai ye maukka haath se jaane nahi dunga n he started his nuuzzled, lights off.

One & half year later in hospital, out of OT, abhi walk here n there, bulbul n purab with there bundled of joy rahul.

Bulbul- relax abhi, itna kiu tension le raha hai.

Abhi- how much loud she screaming yaar, my god! Aanshi ke waqt kaise managed kiya akele, i m too much worried now.

Purab- relax abhi pragya dusri baar maa ban rahi hai aur tu bhi.

Abhi- haan lekin mai pehli baar ye experience aakash raha hun, again a loud screaming came out from OT.

Abhi listen n again- ye sab meri his galti hai, oh god!

Purab n bulbul both saw his condition n smile to each other, same time nurse came out n said.

Nur- congress Mr.mehera twin girls hui hai.

Abhi shocked with happy tears, sarla n prkash came with aanshi.

Prkash- pragya kaisi hai.

Abhi- twin girls hui hai papa.

Sarla- kya.

Abhi- haan.

Abhi asked nurse- pragya kaise hai aur hum pragya se kab mil sakte hai.

Nur- wo thik hai, aur thodi Der me hum unnhe room shift aakashenge tab aap sab mil lena. Some time later pragya n twin baby's shift to room, all go to meet pragya.

Abhi asked first- how are you?

Pragya- i m fine abhi, aanshi baccha.

Aanshi- mumma i n here, she stand near babies cradle, see na mumma they both are looking so cute.

Pragya- you like both.

Aanshi- like with love mumma.

Abhi go near cradle- they both looking so cute pragya n smile with teary eyes.

Aanshi- papa maa aapne kya naam soch hai.

Pragya n abhi said to same- hum dono ka fav.name.

Bulbul- ek mint aanshi tujhe pata hai, what the name.

Aanshi- haan pata hai mujhe.

Purab- to jaldi bolo.

Aanshi- mumma ka fav.khushi n papa's fav.arya hai na maa papa.

Abhi n pragya smile- haan.

Sarla, prkash, purab n bulbul n aanshi busy in babies.

Abhi give hugged to pragya n soft kissed on lips- i love you pragya, thankyou for given me these precious gift.

Pragya- i love you too.



The End.

Love RaYa .

Arpi.

Thankyou for reading,

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OMG! Such a happy ending.
Finally everything is good b/w them.
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