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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys. Im new to this forum. I've actually been a silent reader from quite sometime but I wanted to make new friends. I noticed the bond all of you share and its beautiful. I hope I can be a part of it. The main reason of being here is twinj/sidmin of course. To make my presence known I have written an os as a gift to all of you. I hope you guys like it.

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In this os Mahi is alive, twinkle is out of prison and yuvi, being a coward (as usual), ran away.

Mahi: Di, are you okay? Im soo sorry. All this happened because of me. Please mujhe maaf kardijiye. Main kbi nhi chahti thi k aap jail jao. Yeh sab meri galti hai. (Mahi starts to weep)

Twinkle hugs Mahi

Twinkle: arey pagli chup kar. Just forget everything that happened. Ek bura sapna samjh kr bhul ja. Dekh, main bilkul theek hun. Meri choti bhen mere samne sahi salamat hai and thats all that matters.

Kunj: uff yeh larkian b na, kitna drama krti hain. Its like tum dono ne ankhon ki jaga pani ka tank lgaya hua hai. Ansu rukte hi nhi hain. Aur twinkle tu, siyappa queen toh thi hi ab drama queen b bn gyi hai.

Everyone laughs at the scene playing infront of them while twinkle glares at kunj and mutters: sadu, pta nhi smjhta kya hai apne aap ko. Ek toh jail se hokey ayi hun, aur yeh mujhe hug ya comfort krne k bejaye mera mazak ura rha hai. Dekhlun gi issey.

Leela gets tears in her eyes seeing both her daughters safe and sound while RT on the other hand feels ashamed.

RT: twinkle beta...

Twinkle: beta? Yaad agaya apko k main beti hun apki?

RT: beta mujhe maaf krdo. Mujhe sach jaaney beghair tumpe ilzaam nhi lgana chahye tha. Im sorry. Galti hogyi.

Twinkle: mujhe beta bulaney ka haq aap kho chuke hain. Main ek baar pehle aapko maaf kar chuki hun lekin is baar nhi kr sakti.

RT: lekin beta..

Twinkle: mat kahiye mujhe beta. Aap soch b kaisey saktey thy k main apni hi bhen ko pahari se giraon gi. Mahi choti bhen hai meri. Bht pyaar krti hun main us se. Main ussey harm krne ka soch b nhi sakti. Aap itna gira hua smjhte hain mujhe? Aapko mere pe trust hona chahye tha, apni beti pe, na k us yuvi pe. Main toh apka khoon hun na? Toh phir kyun nhi kiya mujh pe yakeen?

Kunj comes to twinke and gives her a side hug in order to comfort her.

RT: us waqt halaat hi kuch aise thy. Maine soche smjhe beghair hi yeh sb bol dia. I didnt mean it beta.

Mahi: Dad please. Just stop. Aap ki soch pe hairangi ho rhi hai mujhe.

Twinkle: You know what? Just forget it. You're not worth it. Na aap ek achey pati bn paye aur na hi ek ache baap. Aap humesha kehte hain na k maa mujhe mahi se ziada pyaar krti hain. Thats wrong. Maa toh hum dono ko equally pyaar krti hain lekin apne barey main kya khayal hai? Aap toh mujhse pyaar krte hi nhi hain isliye toh mere pe meri apni bhen k khoon ka ilzaam lgaya. I regret the day you came back. Kaash aap dubara humari zindegi main wapis aye hi na hotey. Maa aur main apke beghair khush thy. Maine puri zindegi yeh smjh k guzarli k mera baap mar chuka hai aur agey b yehi soch k guzar leti. Toh kyun aye aap wapis? Humein nhi hai zarurat aapki. Maine aapko isliye maaf kiya tha kyun ki maa apse bht pyaar krti thi aur main unko rotey hue nhi dekh sakti thi. Lekin jb se aap wapis aye hain unhein dard k alawa kuch nhi mila. Behtar yehi hoga k aap jaha se aye hain udhr wapis chale jaye kyun k na mujhe aise baap ki zarurat hai aur na maa ko aise pati ki jo apne parivaar pe nhi balkey kisi aur pe bharosa karey. I hate you. Meri life main apki koi jagah nhi hai. Ek baat yaad rkhna. Aapki aaj se srf ek hi beti hai. Kyun k apki bari beti aap k liye margayi hai. Main yehi smjh k zindegi guzardun gi k mere baap mujhse bht pyaar krte thy, ek bht ache insaan thy aur bht saal pehle mar gye thy. Mere samne aaj jo insaan khara hai woh mere baap nhi hai. Na main apko jaanti hun. You can leave for all i care. Jb apko pehle humari yaad nhi ayi toh ab b fikr krne ki zarurat nhi. Main apke liye aur aap mere liye mar gye hain

Twinkle runs to her room sobbing. Everyone is left distraught at the scene.

RT: leela tum toh meri baat smjhne ki koshish kro.

Leela: twinkle sab kuch bol chuki hai. Main ab kuch nhi kehna chahti. Aap jaa sakte hain

Mahi: apney jo kiya woh galat tha. Aur apki yehi saza hai k aap akele rahein jb tk k aapko sahi trhan ehsaas nhi ho jata apni galti ka. Please leave.

RT leaves from there.

Leela starts crying thinking about twinkle.

Mahi: maa main jakey di ko dekh k ati hun.

Kunj: ruko mahi, main jata hun

Usha: haan kunj beta tum jao.

Bebe: haan ussey abhi kunj ki zarurat hai.

In twinj bedroom:

Twinkle is crying badly. Kunj comes there and gets upset seeing his punjabi phataka aka his siyappa queen so sad. He goes near twinkle and places his hand on her shoulder.

Twinkle hugs him tightly

Twinkle: kunj, mere sath hi aisa kyun hota hai? Kya main itni buri hun jo sab mujhe chor k chaley jatey hain? Pehle papa, phir yuvi, aur ab jb mujhe mere papa dubara miley toh woh ek baar phir mera dil tor k chale gye. Kyun mujhe pyaar nhi milta? Am i not worthy of love?

Kunj wipes her tears.

Kunj: twinkle please rona band kr. Main teri ankho main ansu nhi dekh sakta. Roti tu hai lekin takleef mujhe hoti hai. Aur tu bilkul b buri nhi hai. Yuvi and rt uncle dont deserve a gem like you. Baki sab hain na tere sath jo tumse bht pyaar krte hain. Tumhari maa, maahi, mummy jee, papa jee, anand bhaiya, maama jee, maami aur cherry bhaiya b, sab care krte hai tumhari. They all love you.

Twinkle: aur tum?

Kunj: yeh b koi pochne wala sawaal hai? Zindegi hai tu meri. I love you more than anything in this world. Meri har dhadkan pe tera naam hai. Be inteha pyaar krta hun main tere se.

Twinkle: I love you so much kunj. Please mujhe chor k mat jana. Main marjaon gi.

Kunj: sshh aisi batein nhi krte. I promise you that i will never leave you. Waise b koi apni jaan se dur ho sakta hai kya.

Twinkle kisses kunj's chest.

Kunj: waise main tujhse bht naraz hun

Twinkle: kyun?

Kunj: bht tarsati hai tu mujhe. Siyappa queen. Main toh tujhse bht pyaar krta hun lekin tu bilkul nhi krti. Isliye mujhe abhi tk kiss nhi di.

Twinkle: kunj tum pagal ho. Aur mujhe siyappa queen na bulao. Nhi dun gi kiss. Kya krloge?

Kunj: fine na do. Dont talk to me. I dont like you.

Twinkle: thats because you love me.

Kunj gives no response.

Twinkle: kunj?

Kunj: no reply

Twinkle: sadu sarna? Baby? Jaanu? Cutie? Mere handsome pati? Jawab toh do?

Kunj gets up to leave. Twinkle gets up and back hugs him.

Twinkle: kunj please aise chup mat rho. Tumhari khamoshi nhi main bardashti kr sakti.

Kunj turns around to face twinkle.

Kunj: toh phir de kyun nhi deti jo main chahta hun? You love me na? Toh problem kya hai? Na tarsa itna.

Twinkle: woh... Ummm... Main...

Kunj: theek hai na de. Main jaa rha hun.

Kunj again turns around to leave. Twinkle grabs his hands and makes him face her. She crashes her lips on his. At first kunj is shocked but then he places his hands on her waist and enjoys the deep, passionate and soothing kiss of his wife. They release each other due to the lack of air.

Kunj: what changed your mind?

Twinkle: main aisi 100 kisses de sakti hun tumhe bs jaaney ki baat na kiya kro. Main tumhe kho nhi sakti.

Kunj: really? Toh main jaa rha hun. Ab do kiss ek aur.
He winks at her. Twinkle smacks his arm.

Kunj: chal ab so ja. You need rest.

He carries her to the bed and makes her lie down.

Twinkle: please mere sath rho. Mat jao.

Kunj: idhr hi hun meri siyappa queen. Kbi nhi jaon ga. Har pal sath rahun ga. Forever and always.

Twinkle: i love you

Kunj: i love you too.

Both of them dose of into a peaceful sleep in each others soothing embrace.

The end.

I hope you guys liked it. Im sorry if i killed you with boredom. Jutey, chappal, tamatar all are allowed. If you liked it then please hit the like button and leave your comments. Thank you :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!! It's so lovely OS dear..👏make more like this..!!😊
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Originally posted by: roshni101

Hey guys. Im new to this forum. I've actually been a silent reader from quite sometime but I wanted to make new friends. I noticed the bond all of you share and its beautiful. I hope I can be a part of it. The main reason of being here is twinj/sidmin of course. To make my presence known I have written an os as a gift to all of you. I hope you guys like it.

X------------X-------------X------------X
In this os Mahi is alive, twinkle is out of prison and yuvi, being a coward (as usual), ran away.

Mahi: Di, are you okay? Im soo sorry. All this happened because of me. Please mujhe maaf kardijiye. Main kbi nhi chahti thi k aap jail jao. Yeh sab meri galti hai. (Mahi starts to weep)

Twinkle hugs Mahi

Twinkle: arey pagli chup kar. Just forget everything that happened. Ek bura sapna samjh kr bhul ja. Dekh, main bilkul theek hun. Meri choti bhen mere samne sahi salamat hai and thats all that matters.

Kunj: uff yeh larkian b na, kitna drama krti hain. Its like tum dono ne ankhon ki jaga pani ka tank lgaya hua hai. Ansu rukte hi nhi hain. Aur twinkle tu, siyappa queen toh thi hi ab drama queen b bn gyi hai. ( 😆 Typical Kunj)

Everyone laughs at the scene playing infront of them while twinkle glares at kunj and mutters: sadu, pta nhi smjhta kya hai apne aap ko. Ek toh jail se hokey ayi hun, aur yeh mujhe hug ya comfort krne k bejaye mera mazak ura rha hai. Dekhlun gi issey.

Leela gets tears in her eyes seeing both her daughters safe and sound while RT on the other hand feels ashamed. (Yayy yayy, he so deserves it. If it was me I would have let him die somehow)

RT: twinkle beta...

Twinkle: beta? Yaad agaya apko k main beti hun apki? (👏 Go for it Twinkle)

RT: beta mujhe maaf krdo. Mujhe sach jaaney beghair tumpe ilzaam nhi lgana chahye tha. Im sorry. Galti hogyi.

Twinkle: mujhe beta bulaney ka haq aap kho chuke hain. Main ek baar pehle aapko maaf kar chuki hun lekin is baar nhi kr sakti.

RT: lekin beta..

Twinkle: mat kahiye mujhe beta. Aap soch b kaisey saktey thy k main apni hi bhen ko pahari se giraon gi. Mahi choti bhen hai meri. Bht pyaar krti hun main us se. Main ussey harm krne ka soch b nhi sakti. Aap itna gira hua smjhte hain mujhe? Aapko mere pe trust hona chahye tha, apni beti pe, na k us yuvi pe. Main toh apka khoon hun na? Toh phir kyun nhi kiya mujh pe yakeen?

Kunj comes to twinke and gives her a side hug in order to comfort her. ()

RT: us waqt halaat hi kuch aise thy. Maine soche smjhe beghair hi yeh sb bol dia. I didnt mean it beta.

Mahi: Dad please. Just stop. Aap ki soch pe hairangi ho rhi hai mujhe.

Twinkle: You know what? Just forget it. You're not worth it. Na aap ek achey pati bn paye aur na hi ek ache baap. Aap humesha kehte hain na k maa mujhe mahi se ziada pyaar krti hain. Thats wrong. Maa toh hum dono ko equally pyaar krti hain lekin apne barey main kya khayal hai? Aap toh mujhse pyaar krte hi nhi hain isliye toh mere pe meri apni bhen k khoon ka ilzaam lgaya. I regret the day you came back. Kaash aap dubara humari zindegi main wapis aye hi na hotey. Maa aur main apke beghair khush thy. Maine puri zindegi yeh smjh k guzarli k mera baap mar chuka hai aur agey b yehi soch k guzar leti. Toh kyun aye aap wapis? Humein nhi hai zarurat aapki. Maine aapko isliye maaf kiya tha kyun ki maa apse bht pyaar krti thi aur main unko rotey hue nhi dekh sakti thi. Lekin jb se aap wapis aye hain unhein dard k alawa kuch nhi mila. Behtar yehi hoga k aap jaha se aye hain udhr wapis chale jaye kyun k na mujhe aise baap ki zarurat hai aur na maa ko aise pati ki jo apne parivaar pe nhi balkey kisi aur pe bharosa karey. I hate you. Meri life main apki koi jagah nhi hai. Ek baat yaad rkhna. Aapki aaj se srf ek hi beti hai. Kyun k apki bari beti aap k liye margayi hai. Main yehi smjh k zindegi guzardun gi k mere baap mujhse bht pyaar krte thy, ek bht ache insaan thy aur bht saal pehle mar gye thy. Mere samne aaj jo insaan khara hai woh mere baap nhi hai. Na main apko jaanti hun. You can leave for all i care. Jb apko pehle humari yaad nhi ayi toh ab b fikr krne ki zarurat nhi. Main apke liye aur aap mere liye mar gye hain (😭)

Twinkle runs to her room sobbing. Everyone is left distraught at the scene.

RT: leela tum toh meri baat smjhne ki koshish kro. (😡)

Leela: twinkle sab kuch bol chuki hai. Main ab kuch nhi kehna chahti. Aap jaa sakte hain

Mahi: apney jo kiya woh galat tha. Aur apki yehi saza hai k aap akele rahein jb tk k aapko sahi trhan ehsaas nhi ho jata apni galti ka. Please leave.

RT leaves from there.( 🥳)

Leela starts crying thinking about twinkle.

Mahi: maa main jakey di ko dekh k ati hun.

Kunj: ruko mahi, main jata hun

Usha: haan kunj beta tum jao.

Bebe: haan ussey abhi kunj ki zarurat hai.

In twinj bedroom:

Twinkle is crying badly. Kunj comes there and gets upset seeing his punjabi phataka aka his siyappa queen so sad. He goes near twinkle and places his hand on her shoulder.

Twinkle hugs him tightly😳

Twinkle: kunj, mere sath hi aisa kyun hota hai? Kya main itni buri hun jo sab mujhe chor k chaley jatey hain? Pehle papa, phir yuvi, aur ab jb mujhe mere papa dubara miley toh woh ek baar phir mera dil tor k chale gye. Kyun mujhe pyaar nhi milta? Am i not worthy of love? 😳

Kunj wipes her tears.

Kunj: twinkle please rona band kr. Main teri ankho main ansu nhi dekh sakta. Roti tu hai lekin takleef mujhe hoti hai. Aur tu bilkul b buri nhi hai. Yuvi and rt uncle dont deserve a gem like you. Baki sab hain na tere sath jo tumse bht pyaar krte hain. Tumhari maa, maahi, mummy jee, papa jee, anand bhaiya, maama jee, maami aur cherry bhaiya b, sab care krte hai tumhari. They all love you.

Twinkle: aur tum? 😳

Kunj: yeh b koi pochne wala sawaal hai? Zindegi hai tu meri. I love you more than anything in this world. Meri har dhadkan pe tera naam hai. Be inteha pyaar krta hun main tere se.

Twinkle: I love you so much kunj. Please mujhe chor k mat jana. Main marjaon gi. 🤗

Kunj: sshh aisi batein nhi krte. I promise you that i will never leave you. Waise b koi apni jaan se dur ho sakta hai kya.

Twinkle kisses kunj's chest. ☺️

Kunj: waise main tujhse bht naraz hun

Twinkle: kyun? 😲

Kunj: bht tarsati hai tu mujhe. Siyappa queen. Main toh tujhse bht pyaar krta hun lekin tu bilkul nhi krti. Isliye mujhe abhi tk kiss nhi di.

Twinkle: kunj tum pagal ho. Aur mujhe siyappa queen na bulao. Nhi dun gi kiss. Kya krloge? 😆

Kunj: fine na do. Dont talk to me. I dont like you. 😆

Twinkle: thats because you love me. 😳

Kunj gives no response. 😛

Twinkle: kunj?😳

Kunj: no reply😛

Twinkle: sadu sarna? Baby? Jaanu? Cutie? Mere handsome pati? Jawab toh do? 😳

Kunj gets up to leave. Twinkle gets up and back hugs him. 😳 Aww

Twinkle: kunj please aise chup mat rho. Tumhari khamoshi nhi main bardashti kr sakti.

Kunj turns around to face twinkle. 😲

Kunj: toh phir de kyun nhi deti jo main chahta hun? You love me na? Toh problem kya hai? Na tarsa itna.

Twinkle: woh... Ummm... Main... ☺️

Kunj: theek hai na de. Main jaa rha hun.

Kunj again turns around to leave. Twinkle grabs his hands and makes him face her. She crashes her lips on his. At first kunj is shocked but then he places his hands on her waist and enjoys the deep, passionate and soothing kiss of his wife. They release each other due to the lack of air. ☺️

Kunj: what changed your mind?

Twinkle: main aisi 100 kisses de sakti hun tumhe bs jaaney ki baat na kiya kro. Main tumhe kho nhi sakti.

Kunj: really? Toh main jaa rha hun. Ab do kiss ek aur.
He winks at her. Twinkle smacks his arm. 😳😆

Kunj: chal ab so ja. You need rest.

He carries her to the bed and makes her lie down.

Twinkle: please mere sath rho. Mat jao. 😳

Kunj: idhr hi hun meri siyappa queen. Kbi nhi jaon ga. Har pal sath rahun ga. Forever and always.

Twinkle: i love you 😳

Kunj: i love you too. 🤗

Both of them dose of into a peaceful sleep in each others soothing embrace.

The end.

I hope you guys liked it. Im sorry if i killed you with boredom. Jutey, chappal, tamatar all are allowed. If you liked it then please hit the like button and leave your comments. Thank you :)



Lovely OS dear! Welcome to the family🤗


Hope you would have a great time here😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was such a sweet OS,Keep writing!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey welcome to the forum!
Is this your first os? Dude, this was great! Such an adorable read.

Hoping to see you more active!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi dear...
Welcome to the forum...🤗
I'm so happy that u decided to make a post...& not only that but also an OS...
Love the OS to the core of my heart...
Superb dear...
This is for u:



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loveeely OS!!! Welcome to the forum doll!! Dont stay silent! Participateee and stay active and writr more! 🤗
U use to watch dekha ek khwab? I used to watch that show also lol. Shritama was part of it. Funny coincidence nah shritamas character in that loved the yuvraj.. and in this show also.😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SiyapaaQueen

Loveeely OS!!! Welcome to the forum doll!! Dont stay silent! Participateee and stay active and writr more! 🤗

U use to watch dekha ek khwab? I used to watch that show also lol. Shritama was part of it. Funny coincidence nah shritamas character in that loved the yuvraj.. and in this show also.😆


you too roch? I used to be crazy about the series. I didn't like the female lead though..she was too annoying always playing hard to get. Loved Ashish as yuvraj😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello! Roshni right? Welcome to the forum and dont be silent!
We love new members and the OS was amazing, do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yeah be active more often and write more of that great stuff😉

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