Twinj OS: Love Is Pain Part 2 (for hrideyy)

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...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

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RUBI

@bluelake99

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Posted: 9 years ago

RES

😊 I CAME SECOND !!

UNRES :

IT JUST WORTH IT ..
UR WRITING S SUMTHING ELSE DEAR ..

D 4RST PART S UNIQUE N ITS WAY ..
WHERE TWINKLE'S POV WERE HIGHLIGHTED THROUGH KUNJ ND KUNJ'S DETERMINATION AS
A HUSBABAND ND COMPANION WAS SHOWN ..

DAT SMALL 'STOP' GET ITS OPEN END N DS 2ND PART ..
THIS PART ALSO RESOLVES AROUND TWINKLE'S THOUGHT OF SCARED PAINFUL LOVE ,, AND KUNJ'S TASK TO GET INSIDE HER BROKEN HEART TO MEND ND SEWED THE VOID GAP !! 💔 ❤️

SPEECHLESS BY YOUR THOUGHT SHAKTI ON YOUR PHILOSOPHY OF OCEAN ..

AND THE LAST GOLDEN FEATHER ADDED IN THE END WHEN U TWISTED THE THOUGHT OF TWINKLE IN A POSITIVE WAY JUST LYK OTHER SIDE OF COIN SO SMOOTH YET COMPLICATED ..
AND KUNJ'S CONSISTENCY THROUGH OUT WITH TWINKLE S COMMENDABLE ..
KUNJ S PURE BLISS HERE ..

THEIR UNSPOKEN FEELINGS SPEAK LOUDLY IN THAT PEACEFUL VALLEY IN FRONT OF DEEP , CALM OCEAN SURFACE ~~ WHERE THEIR SCRATCHED HEART LONGING TOGETHERNESS AND MELTED IN EACH OTHERS ARM !!

~~ A IMPERFECTLY PERFECT ENDING ~~

Edited by bluelake99 - 9 years ago

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

This was so adorable! Loved it.

P.S I'm loving how you're writing part two's on your old OS'

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3dancelover

@3dancelover

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

i loved it!

Shakti you are truly an amazing writer

loved the ending!

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...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tranquility123
This was so adorable! Loved it.

P.S I'm loving how you're writing part two's on your old OS'

thank you 😳😳

😆😆 im glad you like the part 2's 😃

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...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 3dancelover
i loved it!
Shakti you are truly an amazing writer
loved the ending!

uma 🤗

thank you so much! that's such a huge compliment 😳😳

i'm so glad you liked it 😳😳

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kingmessi

@kingmessi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

This is SO BEAUTIFUL LIKE??? HOW DO YOU WRITE LIKE THIS ALL THE TIME IT AMAZES ME.

I tell ya, I'm now prepared to give TWO limbs to have you become part of the TEI CVs team, I think by the time I've read all your Twinj stories I'll have given all my limbs to have you on the CVs team lol.

This was so lovely and heartfelt and just...left me feeling so happy. Like I can relate the lesson learnt in this not only with love but with other emotions and/or situations we try to avoid etc. Idk if I'm making any sense but I guess what I'm trying to say is your writing really hits a chord within me :) <3

Keep up the already fabulous work bb!

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...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kingmessi
This is SO BEAUTIFUL LIKE??? HOW DO YOU WRITE LIKE THIS ALL THE TIME IT AMAZES ME.

I tell ya, I'm now prepared to give TWO limbs to have you become part of the TEI CVs team, I think by the time I've read all your Twinj stories I'll have given all my limbs to have you on the CVs team lol.

This was so lovely and heartfelt and just...left me feeling so happy. Like I can relate the lesson learnt in this not only with love but with other emotions and/or situations we try to avoid etc. Idk if I'm making any sense but I guess what I'm trying to say is your writing really hits a chord within me :) <3

Keep up the already fabulous work bb!

😳😳😳 that is honestly very nice and sweet of you to say!! i cannot tell you how much that means to me!!

thank you so so so so so very much!! 😳😳

i'm so glad you like my works and i'm so happy you liked this one!! 😳

😆😆 i wanna be part of TEI CVs team!! 😃 😆😆 you dont have to give any of your limbs we should just go bombard them! 😆

i'm so glad you can take any type of meaning out of my work, i always hope that my works put a smile on everyone's face 😃

thank you so much 😳😊😊

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...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhiGya_ArHi
Lovely OS dear

thank you so much!! 😳😳😊

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#10

Shakti It was amazing

I loved kunj's efforts to make her smile and she did too,I know she will take time but everything will be alright,And this was written so well shakti,and thank you for dedicating it to me🤗

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