Swara's Ordeal (7): Ends in love, laughter and happily ever after?

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Nyna my dear...I never knew you'd posted this till I came across it purely by chance. 🤗 So glad you decided to post this. PM me next time my dear.

It was really nice. Some delightfully tongue in cheek moments in those quite sincere and solemn vows too. I loved the scrumptiously sly references to "paanch minute mein bahut kuch ho sakta hai", "Meri pasand bahut hi achi hai", "it's the intention that counts, though I may not always be able to follow this vow", and "I will still do exactly what I decided but at least I would have listened to you". 😆 😆

That bit about putting disagreements as "I don't agree with you" rather than "you are wrong"; was so very true. Basis for a successful marriage. 😊

All in all, a nice blend of sincerity and humor.

Lots of Love

Viji

Viji🤗

So glad you liked the letter, as I had earlier written to you, I was mulling over whether to post it or not. After your pm, I decided to go ahead.

And, yes will PM you next time.

Love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: lucky.m
awww ..so so cute nyna😊
Esp the vows of working as team ,keeping herself before evryone else and listening to him .special mention to the line I feel differently rather tahn saying you are wrong ..lovely one

👏👏👏

Lucky

Dear lucky,

Thank you for reading and your lovely comment.

Nyna

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Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Acha tha...
The little bit fun element was nice idea...
Keep writing more.

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: rayab_rajpoot
Acha tha...
The little bit fun element was nice idea...
Keep writing more.

Thank you😊

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Nalini Ansh

@Bennet.Lizzy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Hello Nyna!

🤗

Haha didn't I tell you I would be ready to dig out your works? Well I'm on it officially...so if you have an index please post that to me. 😉

Love , laughter and happily ever after!! I guess it will end so dear but i just imagined sanskar's going through the vows with an exasperated shake of his head. You know with the a hands by his side, head tilted down to the rights and shaking with his lips lightly pursed. And swara giggling at his miffed expression.

That was really adorable. I had a big smile reading through them. A perfect description of their little differences. Such a mature yet cute way to show swara acknowledging the ups and downs of their relationship. And putting them down on a paper,rather scribbling, at the nick of time, just for the fun of it. I can feel the excitement she was going through. There was a certain swasanianness to it..so adorable again..

😃

On to more from you..

Lots of love

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy
Hello Nyna!
🤗

Haha didn't I tell you I would be ready to dig out your works? Well I'm on it officially...so if you have an index please post that to me. 😉

Love , laughter and happily ever after!! I guess it will end so dear but i just imagined sanskar's going through the vows with an exasperated shake of his head. You know with the a hands by his side, head tilted down to the rights and shaking with his lips lightly pursed. And swara giggling at his miffed expression.

That was really adorable. I had a big smile reading through them. A perfect description of their little differences. Such a mature yet cute way to show swara acknowledging the ups and downs of their relationship. And putting them down on a paper,rather scribbling, at the nick of time, just for the fun of it. I can feel the excitement she was going through. There was a certain swasanianness to it..so adorable again..

😃
On to more from you..

Lots of love
N

Nalini🤗🤗🤗🤗

That is what we all hope for - for our golden couple - a beautiful happy ever after!

I think Swara would be 'mortified' if Sanskaar managed to read any of the letters she penned, but if he did, his reaction would be exactly as you wrote, though I wonder how exactly he would take his 'revenge' especially when she actually writes down that he is cute, in an indirect reference though.😉 Food for thought

And you felt the excitement - great - I was super excited to write them down and the words just sort of formed themselves. (I think this was the easiest to write, of all the letters in this series😊)

Coming to the index, I have been mulling over that idea, just not sure if my ramblings deserved to be indexed. Maybe I will get around to do that. Meanwhile, let us come to a pact: I will make an index soon and could we have another dandelion soon, please!!!!

Anyway, here are the links to the earlier letters in this series and to another OS - Hope at least a few of them live up to some of the expectations😆

OS: Love across time and beyond space: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4566438/swasan-os-love-across-time-and-beyond-space

Letter 1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4536969/os-swaras-ordeal-1-first-flutter-of-silken-wings

Letter 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4539918/os-swaras-ordeal-2-phoenix-rising

Letter 3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4544150/os-swaras-ordeal-3-an-ephemeral-redamancy

Letter 4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4547401/os-swaras-ordeal-4-to-wait-or-to-forget

Letter 5:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4547407/os-swaras-ordeal-5-mellifluous-quatrain

Letter 6:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4562344/swara-ordeal-6-and-love-is-fire

and finally, one which I am not sure as to what it can be classified as: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4555834/swasan-os-wedding-ballad (I am very curious as at your take on this piece😉)

love,

Nyna

PS: some issue with this page,I think, the hpyerlink not 'picking' the address😭

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Nalini Ansh

@Bennet.Lizzy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Nyna :)

Thankyou for the short index. I would surely go through as soon as I can. Well the last one needs a special comment. I'll surely give one. I'm in a hurry right now, so I don't want to rush through it. Want to sit back and enjoy every bit Again before I could make myself capable of commenting on something so great. To be honest I don't know what to say. But it's a pleasure to say what I can when given a chance. So I will. Soon.

Hmm another dandelion is coming to bloom. I depend on my surroundings to write. It's weekend so my home in a kind of cacophony with all my cousins. So may be by Monday!! But be forewarned to shed a few tears this time. Couldn't help it. I kind of cried while writing the initial few paragraphs. Hope you will fare well when you get to read it.

Gotta go.

Happy weekend!!

Love

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy
Nyna :)

Hmm another dandelion is coming to bloom. I depend on my surroundings to write. It's weekend so my home in a kind of cacophony with all my cousins. So may be by Monday!! But be forewarned to shed a few tears this time. Couldn't help it. I kind of cried while writing the initial few paragraphs. Hope you will fare well when you get to read it.

Gotta go.

Happy weekend!!

Love
N

Do not worry, I love emotional stories too - I laugh like crazy (usually PG Wodehouse and my Asterix series) and cry openly, which elicits a more than fair share of comments from the public (I am not sure why there is a general perception that you should read without display of emotions - stories are meant to appeal and touch our hearts😕) But thanks for the warning, will remember to read in private.

For a change looking forward to a Monday (I usually hate Mondays with a vengeance - as a popular quote goes, Mondays is wasting one-seventh of your life😆

love,

Nyna

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