FF: That Moment AGAIN UPDATED!! Pg 13

Hello everyone!😊

I have recently joined this forum and am very excited to meet you all. Originally, I had only planned on an introduction, but I couldn't stop myself from writing this Fanfic.😉 I place the full blame on DevAkshi for luring me in and enthralling me with, their story. I hope you will be able to read and patiently suffer through a good example of my mediocre writing.

Fanfic: That Moment

Part 1

Dev smiled inwardly as he remembered the events of the last couple of days. Strange as the occurrence was, he had felt a warmth suffusing him as he heard Sona..No, Dr. Bose praising him and thanking him. He had initially felt annoyed at having to play babysitter to the chef's kids, but watching Dr. Bose's face light up with happiness at seeing the cake had been worth every one of those efforts.

Dev rolled his eyes, as he listened to his client going on and on about one thing or the other, True, he was a man dedicated to his work, but even he couldn't understand the point of discussing matters which had already been settled. Getting fed up, he finally interrupted his client's monologue, and saying he'd call later, hung up the phone call.

He felt a grin forming on his face at his impish behavior. He didn't know what was the matter with him. Having never experienced a true childhood, he was quite unfamiliar with the sudden feelings of exhilaration and mischief he felt at his own childish antics.

He couldn't hide the surprise on his face as he noticed the stranger sitting on the couch, sipping tea while he descended the stairs. On inquiry, the stranger revealed himself to be a Mr. Roy, there to pick up Sona..Dr. Bose. When Roy told him about his and Sona's parents arranging this impromptu meeting, he had no more doubts as to who Roy was.

Dev was surprised at himself, till now he had felt nothing but indifferent to Roy. However, when he realized Roy's relationship with Sona, he had felt an intense dislike for the man, even though he had done nothing to warrant it.

Dev turned as he saw Roy looking at someone over his shoulder.

He froze.

It was her.

Wearing a yellow gossamer sari, her frequent blushes made her appear even more breathtaking.

She had never appeared more beautiful to him, no one had.

He didn't understand why she fascinated him, why he couldn't stop thinking about her.

Years from now, he would look back on this day, on this moment as the moment it all truly began...

Like it? Hate it? or Love it?Chappals and Tamatars are most welcome😛

Constructive criticism and advice are much appreciated.😃

Reviews and comments are highly anticipated.😆

Do you'll want me to continue it?😳

Index:

Part 1 - Page 1

Part 2- Page 3

Sneak A Peek In - Page 5

Part 3 - Page 7

Part 4 - Page 9

Part 5 - Page 10

Part 6 - Page 13

So good. Like you, I was also lured by this serial. It seems different:) Your OS is very subtle, I liked Dev's inner monologue. Do write more.

Beautiful os. .

It's really beautiful. You should continue writing stuff like this👏

Originally posted by: c85rie

So good. Like you, I was also lured by this serial. It seems different:) Your OS is very subtle, I liked Dev's inner monologue. Do write more.

Originally posted by: SWARNA99

Beautiful os. .

Do write more dear. ...

Originally posted by: juthie_j

It's really beautiful. You should continue writing stuff like this👏

Originally posted by: Sky23

Like it please continue.

Originally posted by: sneharay

Its a beautiful Os..

Originally posted by: diksha0102

Good start.

Do continue please.