FF: That Moment AGAIN UPDATED!! Pg 13 - Page 3

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

I absolutely love this! Its bloody amazing! I think your words are like a waterfall splashing in my mind like music. Its really melodic and subtle emotions have been written like magic. Keep writing. I love how you have conveyed feelings so gently and that makes it so beautiful. A line that caught my attention was "She somehow didn't believe that he would ever be able to gain hers."

Its very enchanting and somehow I can feel the feathery breeze of every word and its just so artsy and amazing.

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Awesome story line.

The two updates were mind blowing.

I read the two updates in one go.

You beautifully portrayed the feelings of sonakshi

Waiting for your next update

Originally posted by: juthie_j

Another beautiful one . I really like your way of portraying dev and Sonakshi's feeling towards each other. Really looking forward to see what's going to happen ..😊 update soon...

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice update..well written

Originally posted by: cherrynicolem

First of all Thank you!

Its beautifully written

Ahh! Spark!!! I Guess connection is going to start

Thank you for the pm