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Posted: 10 years ago

#721

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik
Res😃 Your fic demands proper comments, nothing in a sleepy haze😆

Wake up, sleepy joe!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#722

Originally posted by: alisha17
Superb update
Loved it

Thanks Alisha - very happy you liked it!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Brilliant update bubble...thanks n love u...🤗

Thank you so much, my love!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#724

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Loving it

Thank you very much Kritz! Glad you're enjoying this story!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#725

Originally posted by: soapbubble

Wake up, sleepy joe!

Aye aye, Bubble😉 Suuuprabhat!! Unresd on 105😊

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#726

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik
Res😃 Your fic demands proper comments, nothing in a sleepy haze😆
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Super Update Bubble!! I liked how Ragini gradually realised, after a lot of ruminating, that Laksh really has chosen her this time.. Finally she'll find the much needed peace of mind and the much longed for love too... I'm so happy!! Everything is soo positive😃😃 The all-seeing view from SwaSan's convo was such a nice touch yaar👏.. Everyone knows Laksh has fallen in love, but the prem-rogi himself..😆 Loved how he is all excited for the wedding, literally breathing down SwaSan's necks for the arrangements.. And exactly why it matters so much, he doesn't realise.. Swasan's whispered convo was rather cute too😃 Loved it😊😊

She thought long and hard about - angle badal badal kar dekha usne... har pehlu se... and she concluded on the basis of strong circumstantial evidence and gut feeling 😆 😆 😆

Absolutely this should give her peace of mind!

Thanks - earlier Swasan's convo was supposed to be the only insight but then I elaborated a bit.

Prem Rogi!! 😆😆 - he was excited but there was also quite a lot of fear propelling him on the day... he was actually worried till she turned up! And he still doesn't know! 🤔 He doesn't have time to think poor guy, unlike his wife, who pushed everything to one side till she worked it out.

Swasan are very tight with each other... ideal support systems for the complicated cross family ties these four have!

Thanks!!! 🤗Glad you loved it!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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The Best of Things

(Ragya, Swasan) Fan Fiction Series +16

By Bubble

Chapter 66

Lakshya had taken off his pagdi and kicked back in relief. Next to him, Ragini had pushed back her ghunghat as well. The four sat around a table in the restaurant... sandwiches arrived - Lakshya was eating something substantial for the first time in the day and Ragini found that she was suddenly very hungry as well. Swara and Sanskaar sipped their teas.

Lakshya set down the glass of water he had just drained and looked at his wife.

"Happy?" he asked.

She nodded. The composure, which had deserted her for the past couple of days, was back.

"Thank God!" he said. "The lengths you have to go to keep women in a healthy frame of mind!" he said to Sanskaar, "It's not funny."

Swara and Ragini raised their eyebrows at him.

"I know!" agreed Sanskaar tongue in cheek, "The things we have to do for our peace of mind."

The dry tone went wasted on Lakshya. "What shall we do now?" he asked. His plan for the day accomplished, he was now happy to go along with other people's ideas.

"Now that you've married again, why don't you take Ragini to that fabulous resort Spandana for a few days? Like a honeymoon?" Sanskaar suggested, with a hint of a smile.

Lakshya looked struck by the thought.

Sanskaar continued, "In fact, it's all arranged. It's about an hour and a half from Rishikesh and the car is coming to fetch you - they're expecting you tonight. I've booked you in for three days - but you can stay longer if you like... my treat!" Sanskaar smiled at the look on Lakshya's face.

Swara said, "Sanskaar and I will stick to the original plan... go on to Benaras to Dida. It'll take about the same time and we can loop back in Cal... ok?"

Lakshya turned to look at Ragini, who just nodded. It was an excellent plan! She needed him to herself for a few days... there were some things she needed to know.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Brilliant chapter. I just loved laksh's restlessness and his determination of not letting her go.
I am not very good at commenting but I'll say you make me love ragya more with each chapter.

Oops sorry I didn't noticed that you just updated. This comment is for part 65. :)

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Originally posted by: Aayushi15
Brilliant chapter. I just loved laksh's restlessness and his determination of not letting her go.
I am not very good at commenting but I'll make me love ragya more with each chapter.

Oops sorry I didn't noticed that you just updated. This comment is for part 65. :)

Thank you so much, Aayushi! 🤗 I'm so happy you are liking Ragya more and more!

Lakshya didn't know what to say to her, so he just went ahead and showed her 😳

No problem - we seemed to have posted at the same time 😊 Do keep commenting - I love to hear your thoughts.