RaGa FF:sometimes heaven sometimes hell.part7 pg10 13th march 15

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bigddfan1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

where are u pls eager to know further. did u forgot about ur story

pls update soon

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Doha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

hey everyone
yeah i know i have no reason to leave the story like this .
u can throw what ever u want .
now i am updating part 7
get ready

Edited by doha.omar - 9 years ago

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kuhelidebbarma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Waiting for the next update...

All your chapters are fantastic!!

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Doha

@doha.omar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

part 7

gayatri was walking with preet "ranaji ki choti bahin" they were talking about preet and ranaji's childhood ..how BRM took care of them,loved them and protected them spically ranaji as he is the young king of amerkot . a maid came to tell preet that BRM called her to help her in marragie arrangment.she excused herself and went to BRM . there was gayatri alone feeling exhusted she didnt sleep well yesterday so she decided to walk to her room and take a nap ,while walking toward the room she heard a strange voice, weak but anyone can hear it she followed that voice of screaming woman till she reached the voice source which it's BRM's room. well that was shocking . asked gayatri herself if she sure because the voice vanished maybe it's because she is tired, because she did not sleep well ..she was about to leave when she heard the voice again this time it couldn't be an illusion.. it's werid that the voice coming from this room and the strangest is that it was coming from a mirror... but how ...she go toward the mirror to comfort but suddenly the mirror open automaticlly. a shocked expression apeared on gayatri's face there was a way to enter guess what it's a secret room ..of BRM? ... gayatri enter it to see a woman crying ..there was a plate infront of her but she didnt eat .her condition was very bad ..gayatri asked her:
gayatri:koun hai aap ..aur yahan kaise aa gayi
woman:main...main reva hoon .. mujhai BRM yahan qedh dakha hai . aap koun ?
gayatri:hum amerkot ki rani hai gayatri..
reva:aap ...aap aamerkot ki rani hai
gayatri:haan par aap yahan kaise aayi hai ?
reva:woh...
reva was about to talk when they heard some noice outside it must be BRM
gayatri quickly told something to reva and took the mashaal on her way to the room ... slowly she opened the secret room's door and acted as if she was coming to the room as the mirror was beside the door .
gayatri:BRM
BRM:aap yahan kya kar rahi hai .. ranaji ka kamra nahi hai yeh .
gayatri:ji hum aapse hei milne aaye hai .. waise bhi ranaji yahan nahi hai .
BRM:hum se milne aayi hai aap ? puchye kya puchna hai aapko
gayatri:hum aapse kuch puchne nahi aaye ... aapse kuch sikhne aaye hai.. hum sikhna chahte ki bhabi hone ke nate humre kya kartavya hote hai apne devrani ki shaadi mein?
BRM laugh and say:yahin expect kiya tha bahu rani se hum.. agar woh aisi bahu aur rani choni thi toh saza toh bhugtna parega ..kya aapne kabhi kisi shahi vivah nahi dekhi ?
gayatri:humari shaadi .. par humne nahi dekha ki kya ho raha tha.
BRM: aprad humara nahi hai aur saza bhi hum bhugat rahe hai .chalo sikha dete hai aapko

at night
gayatri come again to BRM's room ,without making any noice gayatri open the secret room's door and entered to be shocked of not seeing reva overthere..she disapeared but gayatri see some stones and follow it line as if it was a sighn of the place where reva went to.
and that was right as gayatri reached a room or a store room and saw reva there .
she come to reva and wake her up ..firstly reva get afraid but seeing gayatri she took a deep breath
reva:raniji BRM ne mujhi yahan layi hai
gayatri:hum jante the ki woh aapki jagah badl degi shaafi ki tayarion ki wajhe se ..isi liye hum aapse kaha kj nishaniyan chod dijye apne raaste pe.
flashback
gayatri:reva ..agar BRM ne aapki jagah badal legi toh nishaniyan chod dijye hum raat ko aapke paas aaynge . thek hai ?
reva:ji raniji .
flashback end
gayatri take reva from there back to the secret room but unfortunatly BRM wake up and walked toward the store room ..
gayatri heard her step sounds and told reva to act as if she was sleep .
gayatri run toward a closet and closed on herself
BRM come and look at reva and suddnly she flow water on her which make reva sniffer .. all of this have been watched by gayatri..
reva started crying by the torture and bleeding BRM
reva:aap mere saath esa kyon kar rahi ho .. maine kya kiya hai .. mujhe chod dijye
BRM laughed and said :haan hum tumeh chod de taki tum humara 6 saal ka raaz ranaji ke saamne kholde
itna bewakoof samjha hai hume... agar humne tumhe chod diya toh tum ranaji ko yeh ja kar batingi ki humne rani sulakshana ko mara tha .. onka koy accident nahi ho gaya tha hena? ya yeh batyegi ki humne oneh woh ark diya hai jis se woh kabhi maa nahi ban sakti .. humara raaz kabhi nahi khul sakta hai
reva:jhoot ka bhoot chota rasi hai BRM (this is a proverb of my country)
BRM pull reva from her hair and shout at her:kutton ki aawaz nahi hoti hai humri yahan samjhi .. she left reva and the room leaving a shocked gayatri behind..
gayatri ST:yeh mumla bahot badi hai .. BRM actully killed rani sulakshana..par kyon .. woh esa kyon karegi ..hume pata lagana chahye ..

precap:reva tells gayatri about sona's death . gayatri tell ranaji ..ranaji slap gayatri.

Edited by doha.omar - 9 years ago

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kuhelidebbarma

@kuhelidebbarma

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Amazing update..

Waiting for the next part...

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sishtyfan

@sishtyfan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

nice update 😊
hope rana realizes his mistake soon!!
waiting for next update...

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Rhinohippo

@Rhinohippo

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

good development in the story

but ur ranaji like in the show does not believe gaaytri

excited to read further

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sishtyfan

@sishtyfan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Hey doha ,i read all the parts again !!
They r really awesome 👏
Well i want to know about the nightmares that g gets !!
Nd yes brm's raaz faash!!
Do update soon!! 😊