RaGa FF:sometimes heaven sometimes hell.part7 pg10 13th march 15

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guyz what's up here I came with my first FF and my second post..an I am really glad that my first story ever will be about RaGa. .
this story is about RaGa's marriage and their life after marriage .
forgive me I am not an excellent author ready for your all comments and opinions
OK here we go..

part 1
Amerkot's palace decorated beautifully to remember this day of ranaji and gayatri's engagement.
govindh seth arrived with his family and of course the most important person today(amerkot's hone wale rani "gayatri")
the palace and rajmata welcomed them with all respect.
gayatri sits on the chair waiting for ranaji she was putting ghungat .
here comes ranaji "sajh dhaj ke"
everyone look at him can't stop staring ..he was so handsome waring a blue shairvani and a golden turban ,but something was missing which spoiled all the charming look..it was his smile
ranaji doesn't want to get married as his solakshana's memories are not allowing his mind to think about any other lady.

ranaji ST:I am sorry solakshana I am forced but I promise I won't let her become my heart's rani because my heart's rani is only and only you. even if she tried to... rana ji..rana ji ..
rajmata's sound cut his thinking chain
rajmata:ranaji anghuti pihnaye .
rana ji take the ring but he decided to see his hone wale patni so he take off the ghungat ...
gayatri looked at him smiling shyly and ranaji is shocked to see her..she Is the same girl who he saw her in the library,she is the same girl who he saved her from drowning and she is the same girl who he saved her from falling of Mandir's stairs...
his anger and his shocked expressions appeared on his face..making gayatri worried

ranaji ST:itni bada khail ,itni badi saazish woh Bhi humre sath..hum ise nahi chodenge..

after that he put the ring and the ceremony was over all the guests left and also govind Seth's family ..

at night.
gayatri was looking at the ring smiling as she owns the world she jumped she danced she shouted happily showing the world that she found her love
gayatri:I don't believe it ranaji it's my dream comes true I am your fiance ansd after only 4 days I will be your rani.

on the other hand ranji was thinking about the same person who is thinking about him right now but he was angry ..his anger temperature reached the top..he promised himself and his beloved wife that he will punish gayatri for this game ..and he will not spare her

the wedding morning .
all are busy in the wedding arrangements ...in the hall gayatri's friends,bhabis and her mom are applying haldi on her..but gayatri was not there her mind her heart was with ranaji..

she was lost dreaming about ranaji ..
seeing her lost her friends started taunting her..
(her friends are radha and Kali)

Kali:arre dikho toh..gayatri toh abhi se ranaji ki khayalon mein khogaye hai..

radha:mujih lagta hai ki shaadi ki baad woh Hume bhol jayge ranaji ki pyar ko paa kar
they all laughed at her making her come out from her dreaming land .


here comes the most awaited moment when the pandit asked for the groom and the pride and they entered the hall...looking at the couple everyone fell in love with them..pride was so beautiful as she was an angel walking.
her red and heavy lehenga..her shining bindi her golden jewellery ...everyone got stuck for some moments on her..
aur humara dulhe raja kuch kam nahi hai...
he was the most handsome man on earth walking proudly with a fake smile...
(guyz I don't know anything about the Indian marriage cause I am not an Indian so...I won't write any details imagine karo )

after the 7 phere rana ji fell gayatri's maang with sindor ..gayatri closed her eyes to feel the moment...for few seconds ranaji got amazed seeing her beauty ..but he noticed himself and took his eyes away from her...they took the aashirwat of the elders ...
everyone's feelings were different..
ranaji feeling guilty and angry..
gayatri was so happy she reached the roof from happiness.. rajmata was happy that finally the loan is removed. there were gayatri's parents and her brothers glad that their ghar Ki beti now is a queen... but in the other hand the bhabies were boiling in anger so are kumarji and his wife

from there started the story of RaGa
alag kahani alag soch magar sang pyar hai ...ek raja aur ek rani ka pyar

precap:RaGa first night...ranaji drunk

part 1 ends here guyz
I really hope you liked it ...
I will try to update the second part tomorrow
forgive me I can't promise you that I will update daily...
it's school so it's hard to write and update...but i'll try

bye..

part 1>>above

part 7 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-tha-raja-ek-thi-rani/4456347/raga-ff-sometimes-heaven-sometimes-hell-part7-pg10-13th-march-15
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey, this is very cute...hope we will get to read more of your writings.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30

Hey, this is very cute...hope we will get to read more of your writings.😊

Thank you for cheering me up
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: moumita.madhuk

Would love to read more!!!

Inshaa Allah I will try to update asap😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very beautiful
Doesnt look like ur first writing
Waiting to read next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: manju01

Lovely start
continue soon

Thank u ...inshaalah
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Originally posted by: sam_DDzfan

Very beautiful
Doesnt look like ur first writing
Waiting to read next part

Ohh thanks that's so sweet of u ...😳😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good to see u again Doha :)
Cngrtzz for u r first story

So it's in sync with today s epi :)
Happiness at one side n extreme hatredness at other end

Continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ReelyROSExx


Good to see u again Doha :)
Cngrtzz for u r first story

So it's in sync with today s epi :)
Happiness at one side n extreme hatredness at other end

Continue soon :)

Same here buddy ...
Hope u liked it
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