RaGa FF:sometimes heaven sometimes hell.part7 pg10 13th march 15

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Part 4

ranaji goes to rajmata.he enter her room and without looking at her face he said

ranaji:aapne hume bolaya?

rajmata:ji...hume bataye ranaji ki aap raniji ki sath kaisa kaisa behave karte hai?

ranaji:iss sawal ka wajah kya hai hai rajmata?

rajmata:sawal ka jawab..sawal nahi hota.

ranaji:humre aur humre patni ki khaas muamle hum kisi ko nahi batate..khas kar ki ajanbi.

rajmata:abh raniji aapke patni bangye ranaji?

ranaji:aapka matlab?

rajmata: yeh aap bhi jante hai aur hum bhi ki aap raniji ko apni patni nahi mante

ranaji:kis ne bataya aapko.

rajmata:humne aapko yahan islye nahi bolaya ki aap humse sawalat karien...

ranaji: shayadh aap bhol gaye hai rajmata magar hum raja hai..humre har second kimti hai.. hum apna waqt zaya nahi karenge.. and he leave .rajmata look at him in anger.

vanu was walking to ranaji's room at the same time ranaji was heading toward his room

(you know vanu guys he is ranaji's right hand and assistant ..he is the same man who stopped gayatri from giving ranaji his cote in mandier and the same who the bhabies thought that he is gayatri's love)

while walking vanu crushed in a maid ..a paper fell from vanu's pocket he didn't notice it as he was busy in talking to the maid and blackmailing her... but another man notice it ...guess who... ranaji...he was about to tell vanu about it but as soon as he saw the paper or should I say the picture he stopped the words from coming out...

the maid and vanu leave...ranaji pick up the photo and sees that it's gayatri's...he is shocked he said

ranaji:matlab ki vanu hei the Jo kal raniji ki photo niharte hue dikha..

flashback.

while the man was talking to gayatri's photo...ranaji heard him saying: dhoka diya hai tumne mujih ...but he didn't hear the last sentence ...ranaji tried to see the man's face but he couldn't...as the man closed the windows and doors ...the man turn and he is "vanu" ..

flashback end

ranaji was looking at the photo in anger he called vanu...

vanu:hukum ...

ranaji:vanu tumhare yeh tasweer gir gaye..

vanu is shocked ..

ranaji:hume lag raha hai ki yeh tasweer raniji ki hai... hina?

vanu was worried and scared he didn't understand what to answer ..

vanu: ji ranaji..

ranaji:kya hum jaan sakte hai ki yeh tasweer aapke paas kahan se aaye hai.?

vanu: rana...ji ...woh

ranaji:agar kuch galat nahi kar rahe ho toh hishkishate kyon?

vanu:ranaji aapke shaadi se pehle main aur gayatri ek dusre se pyar karte the... humne ek dusre se bhi wada kiya hai ki hum sirf ek dusre se shaadi karenge ..magar gayatri ne mujih dhoka diya ... while lowering his head ..aapse shaadi karke... vanu leave...

hum jante hai ki woh dhokebaaz hai..sab pe apna jadu karti hai...par Hume onse sach oghal wana hai..par kaise!

he think and suddenly he smile ..

ranaji goes to his (their) room...he see gayatri there ...he sit in the middle of the bed and call her..

ranaji:raniji

gayatri:ji?

ranaji: aaye hume aapse kuch baatein karni hai.

gayatri was stunned...why ranaji is talking nicely to her?

gayatri:n..n..nahi hum ya..yahein thek hai..

ranaji:arreh aayena..

gayatri sit in the tip of the bed ..with a shocked look and a brain carrying 100 questions ..

ranaji:yahan aayena itni dor kyon ?

gayatri looked at him as she was doubting his strange sudden good behaves (aadat nahi hina 😆)

she sit in the middle .. ranaji started the conversation.

ranaji:toh...bataye apne bade mein...

gayatri till now can't believe ... ranaji shake her ..

ranaji:kya hua hai aapko...

gayatri:nahi kuch nahi ...kya bol rahe the aap..

ranaji:hum keh rahe the ki hum aapke bade mein janna chahte hai..

gayatri:kya janna chahte hai hai ?

ranaji:sab kuch ..bachpan she lekar aaj tak..

gayatri's expressions changed.. why he reminded her ...

gayatri:humre bachpan itni achhe nahi thi..ki hum aapko oske bade mein batye...

ranaji:ek dost mankar bata dijye ..

gayatri smiles..

gayatri:toh hum jab 9 saal ke the tab humre sagaye ho chuke thi..

ranaji:itni choti umar mein.?

gayatri:haan yeh toh samaj ki rules hai...

ranaji:phir?

gayatri :humra mangeetar ka death hogya...and she completes her lif's story...

midnight.

both were on bed..but no one was sleeping .gayatri was thinking about the strange behaviours of ranaji ..why today.. at the morning he was talking with her rudely and at the night he talked as nothing happened.

on the other side of the bed ranaji was talking to himself.

ranaji st: vanu inki story mein hai hei nahi..abh him vanu ki ya raniji ki baat mane!

precap: badi rani ma send a letter to ranaji inviting him and gayatri to her palace... RaGa romance

Edited by doha.omar - 10 years ago

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Comment for part 3:

it was awesome,as usual.
Ranaji behaved badly with Gayu and Gayu told everything to her sister-in-law.
Her sis-in-law advised her to make Ranaji happy by doing things he likes.
Omg.
Bhanu is the person who loves Gayatri.
Oh God.
Continue soonish.

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Comment for ch4:

Ranaji comes to know abt Bhanu who is keeping an eye on Gayatri.
Ranaji's behavior shocks Gayatri.
Gayatri in thoughts.
Precap is amazing.
Badi Ranimaa invites Gayatri n Ranaji to her palace.
Continue soonish.
Update soonish.

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Doha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: VidyutKiDeewani
Comment for part 3:

it was awesome,as usual.
Ranaji behaved badly with Gayu and Gayu told everything to her sister-in-law.
Her sis-in-law advised her to make Ranaji happy by doing things he likes.
Omg.
Bhanu is the person who loves Gayatri.
Oh God.
Continue soonish.

Thank you vidyukidiwaane i smile every time i read you comments ... I didnt know that his name is bhanu...but I think it's the same right?...actully i do not know about the indian names ...😃

Edited by doha.omar - 10 years ago

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Doha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Hi everyone...

Sorry for being late ...

Here i come with part 5 hope ypu enjoy it..

Please forgive any erorr ...

Part 5

3 month leap

Gayatri was getting ranaji's suit ready...it become a habbit for her

Ranaji enter the room.

Ranaji:good morning raniji..

Gayatri: kya?

Ranaji:good morning ..

Gayatri:aap hindi mein bolye na ranaji...

Ranaji:sirf doo shabdh hei jo bola tha humne..

Gayatri:acha chorye ...ranaji hum mehel se bahar jaana chahte hai..

Ranaji:kahan?

Gayatri:jahan aap chahte hai..

Ranaji:par hume bhot kaam hai..

Gayatri felt bad as she wanted to go out with ranaji for hours to know him more to talk to him about herself lots of "baatein" ...ranaji felt that gayatri is really bored... So he tell her...

Ranaji:thek hai ...humre meeting ki baad hum ropira gao jayenge..

Gayatri got ecxited and hugged him..after a while she noticed what she was doing and lift him...

Ranaji:raniji..

Gayatri:ji

Ranaji:aapne kabhi kisi se bhi pyar kiya?

Gayatri in excitment with a big smile: aapse hei toh pyar kiya hai hu... Gayatri realize what was she saying..ranaji stares at her with a shock look...

Gayatri:m ...matlab aapki bhabi se...woh bhot achi hai..

Ranaji knew what gayatri was about tp say is true ...but he pretende as he believe her...

Ranaji:haan sach mein pichle 3 mihno mein jo kuch bhi hua onn hone hei solve kiya..

While talking ranaji ware the suit...he smiles and says

Ranaji:abh aagya dijye humra mr jhon ki sath meeting hai ...oske badh hum bahar ghumne jayenge...

Gayatri nod in afferniteve ...ranaji was about to leave but hearing gayatri calling him he stop ...gayatri brings a chair and stand on it... She started fixing ranaji's tie ...while doing that unknowingly her face come close to ranaji...ranaji stares at her he could not stop himself from looking at her ...gayatri finish the tie fixing and was about to talk but she realized that her face is inch apart from ranaji's... They have a eye-lock for few seconds...but for them were like hours ... A maid knock the door...breaking the eye-lock...

Maid:hukum mr jhon aapse milne aaye hai...

Ranaji:thek hai hum aarhe hai..

Gayatri was so shy...her checks turn red ..her eyes were in the floor ...

Ranaji look at her and leave..

Gayatri smiles.

After the meeting.

Ranaji calls gayatri to the meeting room... gayatri come..

ranaji:aagye aap...aaye hum aapke liye kuch achi khabar laye hai ..

gayatri:kya batyena ...with a smile

ranaji in excitment :humre badi ranima hum dono ko bolaya hai..aap mehel se bahar Jana chhate thi na...toh hum kal subha badi ranima ki mehel ke liye niklenge...

Gayatri smiled...but she didn't understand why ranaji was so excited ? She thought that her question's answer is with the princess..

At night she "gayayri" went to the princess's room..the princess was sewing a piece of clothes...gayatri nocked the door..

Princess calmly: koun hai?

Gayatri:hum gayatri...

Princess left the cloth and went to the door to open it..

Princess:arre raniji aap kyon nock karti hai ..aap chahe toh bina puche hei andar aaskti hai...

Gayatri:humre sanskar ki khilaf hoga agar hum bina puche andar aagye...

The princess smiled..

Gayatri:acha hum aapse ek sawal puchna chhate hai...ranaji badi ranima ke bade mein sonke itne khush kyon hote kya woh bhot khaas hai inki liye?

Princess:bhot bhot khas...woh ranaji keliye rajmata se badkar hoti hai...

Gayatri:par rajmata inki ma hai...

Princess: haan magar badi ranima ne ranaji ko pala hai... Inki piche ek kahani hai..

Gayatri:batye na..

Princess:English government deo ki raj hatana chahati thi toh onn Sab ne milkar bade ranaji ke khilaf saazish rachi oneh marne keliye ..oss waqt rajmata 9th month mein thi aur kisiko Bhi pata nahi ki woh pregnant hai kyon ki bade ranaji jante the ki English government ki irada kya hai .

.aur delivery ka time hogya dosre taraf se bade ranaji margaya tha..

Jab English government raj ko demand karne aaye hai tab badi ranima onki samne ranaji ko le aaye aur anounse kar diya ki yeh hai bade ranaji ka ansh hai ...amerkot ke raja ...phir badi ranima ranaji ko apne mehel legaye oneh soraksha karne keliye ... Aur oneh wahan palagya hai...18 saal ke baad ranaji amerkot wapas aaye rani sonlakshna ko lekar... Aur sinhasan par bait gaye...

Gayatri:aur itni saalon mein rajmata amerkot akele sambhal rahi thi?

Princess:haan...

Then a maid nock the door to inform gayatri that ranaji is calling her to start their jeaourny..

Gayatri: acha abh hum chalte hai...pranam..

And gayatri leave...

Princess ST:i hope this jeaurny solve you all problems ...

Precab:RaGa almost kiss ...😳

Edited by doha.omar - 9 years ago

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Wow.. Awesome.
Lovely update.
Loved RaGa interactions.
Continue sooonish.
Thanks for the pm.

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JazzyM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Read all the part in 1 go. You have merged the series with some twists of your own...

Loved it that Gayatri is fighting literally with Ranaji and mystery man...wow

Good work

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IlaTanwar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Update plzz... Aise chodke kahanbhaag gui

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Doha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: dhruvika1991
Update plzz... Aise chodke kahanbhaag gui

😆😆 sorrry...i am out of the town...but asap i will update

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Doha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Hey readers...really sorry for being late but i am out of the town... But i came with the 6th part hopr you like it..

Sorry because i didnt write what in the precab in the update but this update is intresting cuase we have a... Something you will figure it out by while reading the update ..

Okey enjoy

Part 6

The scene start with RaGa walking around... Silence was fulling the place...ranaji cut this silence

Ranaji:raniji ..

Gayatri:hmmm

Ranaji:aap sun rahi hai hina?

Gayatri:haan bolye na..

Ranaji:8 saal se pehle ...yahan ise jaga par hum aur sona rok gaye the

Gayatri stop walking and look at him

He counties..

Ranaji:Jab hum badi ranima ki yahan se aa rahe the ..aur ise raste par hum walk kar chuke hai..

Gayatri was feeling jealous ..she was burning from inside but she didn't let the fire appear in front of ranaji...

Ranaji look at her..and smiles

Gayatri:ranaji...

Ranaji:kahye ..

Gayatri:hum badi ranima ki yahan kyon jaa rahe hai..aur khas kar ki woh hume bolaya hai?

Ranaji:kyon ki humre bahin ka vivah horaha hai

Gayatri:aapki bahin? Par jahan tak hume pata hai ki aap rajmata aur bade ranaji ki ek laute beta hai.

Ranaji:woh kuwar chachaji ki beti hai..hum dono ko badi ranima ne pala hai onka shaadi aamer ke raja ke saath horaha hai.

Gayatri:acha.

After a while gayatri started talking again

Gayatri:hume bataya gaya hai ki aap aur rani sulakshana badi ranima ki yahan mile the...

Ranaji:haan

Gayatri:kaise?

At that time they came back to their khima...

Ranaji:batate hai par khana khane ke badh...zor si bhog lagi hai...

Gayatri calls a maid:sono khana pados dejaye ..

The maid leave to bring the food. ..

Gayatri:pakka batyenge pori kahani..har roz ki tarah aap soyenge nahi .

Ranaji:pakka ..promise..

After lunch ranaji and gayatri sit on the bed next to each other.

Gayatri:chalye bataye..

Ranaji:kya?

Gayatri:ranaji ..in an angry tone..

Ranaji laugh at her expressions ..

Ranaji:jab hum badi ranima ke yahan reh rahe the...tab sona ki parivaar aaye hai ek siyasi muamle mein baat karne keliye.

Gaystri was curious..she wants to know more...

Ranaji:hum kisi file lane keliye humri kamre mein gaye the..

Aur wahan woh mili...woh ghom gaye thi..phir mulakate rehgaye... Till we diside that we will get married ...

Gayatri:phir?.

Ranaji:phir shaadi hui hai aur kya..

Gayatri:Bas

Ranaji:khatam...

Gayatri in low voice:Isse achi toh humre kahani hai...kam se kam pyar toh kisi wajhse hua hai ..sirf dikhne se nahi... Itna pyar kyon karte hai ranaji rani sulakshana se!

Ranaji:kuch bola kya aapne?

Gayatri:nahi... Kuch nahi aap sojaye. Goo..good.ni...night sahi hina?

Ranaji was impressed and laugh a little and reply

Ranaji:good night.and they sleep ..

At midnight

Ranaji wake up because of a wearied sound ..

Gayatri was talking while sleeping...

Gayatri:choro humra haath..chooro. Hum tumeh nahi chodenge...door raho...door rahoo...ranaji...ranajiii...

And she wake up screaming ranaji tries to calm her ...all solders and maids come...

Ranaji cup her face and try to talk to her..

Ranaji:shaant hojaye hum hai aapke saath ...kuch nahi hoga aapko..hum hina...and he hug her..gayatri was hardly breathing and she hug ranaji back..

Ranaji:sono pani lao..

The maids and solders went out... 3 solders were talking.

1:yeh raniji ko kya hogya hai bhaia?

2:roz esa hota 3 mihno se rani ji ki yahi halat hai

3:haan Maine suna ki har din raniji hi sath eaa hota hai.

1:kyon ? Woh esa kya dikhti hai khuab mein ?

2:pata nahi.abh ranaji sambhal lenge...

In the khima gayatri drink the water ...when her breath become normal ranaji asked her.

Ranaji:phir se wahi sapna?

Gayatri nods

Ranaji:ghabraye mat hum aapke sath hai...aur wase bhi...woh abh marr chuka hai...aap shant hojaye.

Gayatri led down and after some moment she fell a sleep.ranaji wait till she slept then he led down and said.

Ranaji ST:marr chuka hai par abhitak raniji oss sadme se bahar nahi nikal paye... Hum kare toh kya kare oneh shaanti dene ke liye...

After lots of thoughts ranaji fell a sleep again holding gayatri's hand.

At the morning

RaGa reached badi ranima's palace.

Ranaji hugs badi ranima then he and gayatri both took aashirwat from her.. She looked at gayatri from toe to head

BRM:toh yahi hai aapki naye rani.

Ranaji smiles

BRM:jisse aap bina hume bataye shaadi kiya hai ..

Ranaji looked at BRM and says.

Ranaji:maaf kijye BRM shaadi sirf 5 din mein hui thi.

BRM:koy baat nahi ranaji...rajmata se hum kuch Bhi expect kar sakte hai.

Ranaji:Hume andar nahi bolaengi aap ?

She welcomed them to her palace.they went inside and directly to the dining table...

They sit on their chairs and started eating.

BRM:toh raniji.

Gayatri:ji

BRM:kahi aap humre bahu rani ki tarah angraizi tor tarikein sikhna toh nahi chahti.

Gayatri: maaf kijye BRM par Hume sikhna padega .. After all hum rani hai aur bahu Bhi hai...bahu bankar Hume mihmano ki izzat se paish ki chahye.. Aur rani bankar Hume onki tadike se paish aana chahye...par iska matlab nahi ki hume apne sanskar ko bholna hoga.

BRM is impressed with her answer...she is not a common girl ...she is smart..but she can be a dangrous ..maybe the secret of the 6 year would be reveled by her

At night

Ranaji was discussing an issue with badi ranima .. Gayatri was in her room ..

Ranaji:fikar mat karye BRM hum kal hei delhi court jake case khulenge

Precab:gayatri enter the secret room and get shocked..badi ranima doubt her.

Hope u got fun..

Sorry for all errors.

Edited by doha.omar - 9 years ago