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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#401

khushi going to give up her dream

she is beyond hurt

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Posted: 9 years ago

#402

nobody understand from khushi point of view that hurts

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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#403

khushi could not meet arnav

without retaliate

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Posted: 9 years ago

#404

prank + prank. ... what a twist

payal and akash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#405

I just could not understand garima

very angry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#406

Okay, the first thread is locked, so I start from here.

The start is pretty interesting; the way you build up on the story by describing Khushi's mental state, and the flashbacks. How wicked it was on Arnav's part to spill dirt over Khushi's dress! Well, it's only too cool of Khushi to get back in such a trying manner.
People as unstable and short-tempered as Arnav need to be kept under strict supervision in their young age so as to prevent them from wandering unwarily into the traps laid by their ill-natured friends.
Loved the marriage sequence, you made it look so beautifully painful! Good thing, Arnav realized his mistake!
Such a huge leap Arnav's taken! Didn't like him more than when he climbed up the balcony to apologize. Though Khushi has all rights to deny him the forgiveness that he only recently deserves.
It was so unfeeling of Sheetal and Shyam to insult Khushi in the public!
Uff! Tu aur tere cliffhangers! I pity the readers who had to wait. 😆

Arnav's Mom is so considerate! She's a person much needed in our society today!
WHAT! She accepted Khushi as her daughter-in-law?! Well, so long as she doesn't be an impediment in her way to success.
Now what's Khushi up to?
ArShi's encounter in Shi's room was interesting.
Aww! Ms. KKG's poetic bickering early in the morning was so cool! 😆
Oh! So Payal's married? To Ar's brother? Good enough!
Aww! It was so nice of Arnav to give chocolates to Khushi to pacify her! His conversation with Lavanya was very nicely placed. Hope Nani doesn't create another trouble for ArShi!
Oh! Good good good! Nani maani, ab Khushi ki baari!
The last little call between Arnav and Arunima was very cute!
Oh! So Khushi suceeded in the audition! How good for her!
Now she'll be able to become what she wanted to be!