SwaSan FF- Tujhse Pyaar Ho Gaya ( Sorry Note :- Pg - 70 ) - Page 30

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rayab_rajpoot

nice work do write more soon

thanks for the pm

thanks dear...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks dear...😃
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Interesting update
Can't wait for next part
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Hola ...! Sorry for late update ... I'm really sorry for it and thanks for showering your wonderful comments to my story .. I really liked every comment ...

Thanks a lot ...

AND ...harshita , nita di and kamila akka and if I left someone else too ... pl forgive me ... I was out for four days and so many PM's are unread.. I'll surely comment on each of them super soon ...

Sorry ...!!!

And if this update was too boring then again a sorry in ADVANCE...

Waiting for your comments...

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PART 5

Inspector-excuse me...

Shekar and all other family members saw to the direction from were the voice came...

Inspector- mr shekhar shah ,I need to talk to you...

Sh- inspector saab...any important matter...?

Ins- something like that only...pls I need to talk to you in private..

Shekhar nodded and walked to one of the nearby room ...

Sh- yes sir... what's the matter ?

In-sir... u have to stop this marriage ...this cannot happen...

Shekhar was shocked beyond imaginations...he really wanted to know the reason...

Sh- but why sir...!!!! Why should I stop it ? her engagement is over ,and all of them are really very much awaiting for this wedding to happen then what is the problem ?

Ins- sir...the problem is that your daughter is a minor ...and she cannot marry at this age it is against rule..

Sh- but sir... who cares these things nowadays ...I found a suitable match for my daughter that to from a very good family ...and you know sir that it is not easy to find a good match ... so why should I spoil me dear daughter's future...

Ins(frustrated)- sir...!!!! Pls understand she is a MINOR... and being a devoted man to my profession I cannot let anything happen against rule ...u have to call off the wedding or else severe action will be taken ... I came all way to tell you just because you are the head man of the village and your respect should not drown because of me... pls understand if I leave this than I can loose my job...

Shekhar did'nt know what to do now ...so he decieded to ...

Sh- ok sir... I'll do what you say ...

Inspector said him a sorry and went off...

Shekhar came outside and saw many faces curious to know what happened inside...

Guest 1- sir.. what happened inside ..?

Guest 2 - yes... anything serious..?

Shekar did'nt know how to react but had to handle the situation...

Sh-er...nothing it was something related to village affairs..

Guests calmed down when shekhar siganalled sharmistha to come with him...

Sha- swara .. your father is calling me seems something has happened pls shona.. handle the situation..ok..?and ragini beta pls take care ok

Swaragini smiled assuringly hiding that it was the part of their plan...and smiled towards SanLak who were hiding themselves covering their face by a duppatta ...sanskaar winked at them and lakshya showed them a thumbs up which they reciprocated without any body noticing...

AT THE ROOM ...

Sha- shekhar.. what is the matter..?sab teek hai na...

Shekhar frowned ... which made sharmistha worried

Sh- misti... Nothing is right ...I'm really tensed ...

Sha- what happened tell me know..

Shekhar told her his talk with the inspector ...sharmishta was totally shocked..

Sha- shekhar... what we will do know...!!! Oh god.. can't they tell us a while before if they tell like this in the eleventh hour then how is it possible to call off the wedding ..what will village people think about us..?

Shekhar was frowning hard he did'nt know what can be done..

Sh- I think we should tell them the truth...

Sha- are u crazy...shekar ...!!

Sh- we don't have any other way sharmishtha...

Sharmistha nodded sadly...and both gathered some courage to tell them...and went outside ...

Sh- my dear villagers and guests ...especially adarsh's family ...I'm sorry but due to some constrains and circumstances I am...

Swaragini where holding their fingers crossed

Sh- I am... calling off the wedding

Swaragini- yea...!!!!!!!!

There was Silence Everybody including SanLak where seeing them...

Swaragini regained their senses and thought what they did just a minute before ...

Swara(pretending to be sad)- ye... decision... I mean aapne ye decision kyu liya papa (why u took this decision)

Ra- yes... uncle.. even I meaned the same (chuckled slightly)

Sh- sorry my frnds but...

Guests nodded their head and consolded sharmistha especially swara who was at the peak of acting ...and then shekhar went to adarsh family joined his hands ..

Sh- I am sorry but..

Adarsh s father - it's ok.. shekhar ji.. it's our fate that we cannot have Swara as our bahu...

Shekhar smiled slightly and patted adarsh's shoulders who was also trying hard to remain sad ...and they too left few minutes later...

Shekhar looked at his house which was lavishly decorated for his beloved and only one daughter ...his Swara...and went off to take rest ..to get some peace of mind...

Sh- misti... pls get me some tea.. my head is paining a lot...

Sharmistha nodded...and both look at swara who was know really sad seeing her parents condition...shekar went to her and caressed her hair

Sh- Swara...i'm sorry beta ... I forgot u are still young I am not a good father ... and I did'nt even ask your wish your opinion I just got you engaged with adarsh ... I'm really sorry dear ...because of me you had to face these problems...

Swara hugged her father with all love and affection...

Sw- papa... it's ok.. every father wants his daughter to be happy and my father is soo very much concerned about me that he wanted his daughter to get married too early (smiles )...and papa I want to ask you something

Sh- tell me..

Sw- i..i want to continue my studies can i..?

Sh(smiles)- is it something to ask ... u can continue and study till you want to neither I nor your maa will stop you..ok?(pats her cheek)

Sw- very much ok...

Sha- ok .. now enough of papa - beti pyaar... arre I am also here ...(smiles)

Sw- maa...(hugs her)

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AT EVENING ...

Swara walked to her dad ..

Sw- papa.. I am feeling very homesick can I go out for a while ..

Sh- haan sure beta... and see if people tell u or ask you something related to your marriage just don't pay attention to them ..

Swara nodded..and left

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At village park...

Sa-lakshya...u told them right ?

La-yea..sanky I told them they might be on their way...

Just then SwaRagini enter in the park..

La- see it told you... they came ..

Sanskaar sees them coming and waves this hand so that it is easy to find them...they come towards them...

Swaragini- hi everybody...

Sanlak- hello...

Sw-guys thanks a lot ...because of you my marriage is stopped ...and sanskaar your plan was just awesome ...I will always be debted to you for this help...

Sa(smiles)- arre.. I just did the right and even equal credit goes to ragini and lakshya ...

Swara smiles...suddenly a man enters the scene..

Man- plan..?

All-Adarsh...!!

Ad- hi all..!! I am so happy that my forced marriage is stopped but I have been scratching my head since morning thinking how my marriage stopped at the nick of time that through by police...but know I am sure that it is all your plan...

Sw- oh adarsh in that fiasco I forgot to tell you ... wait I'll tell you...

La- offo swara ... u are only talking all the while pls let me tell him (child face)

Sw(smiles)- ok

La- so listen ...

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.FLASHBACK<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

Sa- guys I have a perfect plan ...

Raglak- what is it ?

Sa- see guys...swara is 17 right ...?

Ra- yea ...so?

Sa- so ragini ... she is a minor ..she is not eligible to get married at this age ...

La- yea ... u are right sanskaar !!

Sa- so it is absolutely against rule to get a 17 year girl married ... and so we can file a complain against shekhar shah...

Ra- sanskaar... it is nice idea ..but he is an higher official... Will the police arrest him ? it can be dangerous too..

Sa- we don't have any other option ...

Ra- fine ok ... but how will you convince the police to file a complaint as no one will be ready for it ...because all are afraid of loosing their job ...

Sa- yea I know ... that is what I am thinking...

La- thinking ..? sanskaar you can make such a fab plan ...but I wonder how you forgot one thing...

Sa- what ?

La- our SanLak gang yaar ... our company ... And you are its leader right so being a leader of the gang you have all rights to complain against something ...so you can easily do the job...am I right ?

Sa(smiles widely )- arre haan...I forgot this totally ...thanks lucky for reminding me ...

La- no problem... now come let's start our work ...

Ra- ok guys..it's getting late for me ...will see you later...

Sanlak- bye ragini...

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At police station...

Sa- excuse me inspector...!!!

Inspector turned towards the cabin door ..

Ins- yes.. come in ...

Sanlak came in ...

Sa-swe need your help sir ...

Ins- yea tell me..

La- sir .. actually ...

Lakhya started telling him about shekar's daughter swara and swara's marriage with adarsh and that she is only 17 and shekhar is not ready to stop the marriage ... etc...

Sa- so sir this is the issue and we need your help in this...

Ins- see guys ... it's their wish why you are worrying let them marry her anybody .. what is their in it...

La- but sir.. she is a minor and it is also against rule ..

Ins- oh u guys .. pls leave it ... I cannot help you in this ...

La- you won't ...?

Ins- no ... I won't ...

Sa- ok fine let me tell it to the commissioner ...

Ins- you are threatening me ...?

Sa- no we are not we are just telling you that what is happening is not right ..

Ins- I know what is right and wrong if you want you can call commissioner ...

La- really ..? ok sanky u call commissioner ...

Sa- ok.. as you wish...

Sanskaar calls the commissioner ...

Sa- excuse me sir your police and is not helping the public in it's problems ...

Com- who the hell are you man ..? and what can I do in it ..?

Sa- excuse me sir.. I am sanskaar ... founder of the sanlak gang ... u remember it was me who got two of your police man suspended...and if you don't help me than ... that's it...

Com- oh god... ok .. I'll tell him...

Call ended...

Ins- so u spoke to the commissioner (winningly )

Sa(confidet)- yea ..see I will count till 3 and you will get a call

1

2

3

Inspector's phone rings...

Inspector shocked... sanskaar rocked...

Inspector picks the call..

Ins- hel...hello sir..

Com- oh man ..! pls solve their problem or else you are fired...!!!! Got it ...

Ins- yes..yess sir

la- so will you help us..(winningly)

ins("irritated)- what I need to do...

sanlak- that's a good boy...

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>FLASHBACK ENDS>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

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Ad- wow sanskaar ..!! amazing paln ...

Sa- thamks ...

Sw- thanks once again guys ...

La- swara ... thanks is not enough..

Sw- then what you want(smiles)

Ra- ice cream...

Sw- ok come we will have it

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PRECAP- swara attaracted towards sanskaar ...

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END OF PART ...

DO COMMENT

WAITING FOR THEM ...

LOTS OF LOVE ..

SOUNDHARYA ...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mika17

Interesting update

Can't wait for next part

updated...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res
Unres
First of all pooja ki bacchi tu exam deti hai ya story likhti hai 😆 because update pe update aate ja raha hai aur yaha mai bechara abhi tak kuch likha hi nahi hu 😕
Raaz kya hai yeh bata 😉
Coming back to updates
Superb update pooja 👏
Finally marriage is stopped 🤗
Swaragini khushi ke maare jump kar gayi 🤣
But i am happy for adarsh because ab usko swara ko jhelna nahi padega 🤣 because usko sirf sanskat jhel sakta hai 😳
Sanlak gang 😆
Sanskar rocks 😎 inspector shocked 🤪
Swasan love story is starting
Update soon
Pm is sended if anybody is missed so i am sorry in advance 😃
Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res sissy...

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Unres...

Pooja... 🤗 ... Another rocking update it was...

I loved sanlak plan. To stop Swara marriage... That convo at police station was superb...

Now Swara can continue her studies... Swasan love story to start... Hayyyeee...

Waiting to read more...

Love you...

Thank you bro for pm...
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice update 👍🏼
Loved it... Update soon!!!


PS - please update NiBir story 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
fabulous update!😳
loving d track😉
seems to b more
interesting
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update & thanks for the pm

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