swasan ff : will you forgive me

hello guys.. I think some of you remember me.. it is me Jwala This is the first episode of my ff.. please read it.. and give me your valuable comments.. and I have zero writting skills. please forgive me for my mistakes.. here you go.. .

Gadodia Mansion..

something gone wrong there.. some peopleare angry.. while some just stand as helpless and some people are broken totally.. did you want to know what happened? ok.. it will be revealed while reading ..

sanskar: what the hell is this.. i couldn't take it any more.. I'm leaving.. i can't bear this stupid drama anymore..

laksh: sanskar please think about awara . just once.. she really loves you.. don't leave her..her life will ruin if you left her..

sanskar: laksh , your sister is mad.. who will marry such an immature girl.. how can she attempt suicide ? if i marry her my life will be ruined.. god sake leave me..

ragini: sanskar bhai .. shona is not immature.. she really loves you.. you are her life.. she do thus because she loves you.. she can't live without you..

sanskar: ragini you should support me.. I'm your brother.. i know you love laksh so that you are trying to glorify his sister..but don't request me to marry that immature kid.. it is my final decision..

sanskar leaves .. all are shocked..shekhar and shomi sat down as lifeless body..raglak glare each other.. what will they do now..

why sanskar reject swara?why swara try to commit suicide?will ragini and laksh seperate due to sanskar?will swara's life ruined.. ?

guys i know you have so many questions.. so please keep reading my story ..

Res yaayyyeee me first babes

Unres...
Jwala...🤗 babes nice prologue yaar... Don't worry you are very good writer... Okay coming to ff... What Sanskaar rejected Swara no way... They are soulmate mate... 😲 ... Raglak love each other... Soo for everyone Sanskaar is a villain I'm glaring at you... 😡 babes... Why suicide... 😭 .. Eagar to read more...

Waiting for next...

Love you...

Superb start 👏
Seriously it is interesting
Do continue soon please

Jwalu 🤗
Nice prologue.. Its really interesting..😳
Why Sanskar left her? and what is the reason behind Suicide attempt??😭
So many questions..
Please update soon, waiting eagerly ..😛

Hi Jwala 🤗
Very nice prologue of the story 👍🏼
Your writing and concept of the story is very nice and unique😃
Please upload the next part soon i am eagerly waiting to know what happens next😃

Nice prologue...

Wow Jwaluuu..Super duper start aanallo..I really loved it..full of suspense..!!😃😃

I am really excited..All the best for your new story dear..🤗

Sanskaar nu Swaraye ishtamalla lle..hmm..interesting..Inipo Raglak nte karyam enthavumm..lets see..Try to update soon dear..😳😳

Love you a lot❤️ Jwaluuu..

Nice concept..

Do cont soon..
Will love to read more..

jwala wow..
interesting prologue..
continue soon..
thanx for PM..!!

Great going jwala...m impressed wide the prologue...let the bad boy vs gud girl begin